I Have Six Infinity Stones

Come on, author, the content is very new and innovative. No other author blindly writes in the same mode. I have seen many new ideas that I have never seen before. This kind of idea is very good and very few authors at this starting point have it. After all, it is very easy and convenient to write a novel using an existing template. At the beginning, you can write some of your own imagination and other plots. The current starting point is to take one big step at a time, but the problem is that readers will get bored and tired after reading too much. You will say oops, I guessed the ending at the beginning. In fact, it's not that we readers don't like to read it, but that some authors don't like to slowly figure out the ideas and plots on their own. Instead, they want to write some harem novels and stallion novels, which are easy for some teenagers who are just beginning to fantasize and psychologically satisfied. In addition, the current social Internet environment makes people easily lost, so most authors write those marginal novels to make quick money. Readers also support these novels, which will make the environment at the starting point worse and worse! Having said so much, I would like to conclude by saying that I hope more people with the same innovative spirit as the author can write online articles that do not blindly pursue fast-food style articles. I think there will be a lot of comments below saying that I can push myself to death after reading science fiction travel novels. There will be a lot of people who will say so, but I just want to express my own point of view. If you don't like me, you can scold me. It doesn't matter. I don't have much to lose, right?

The protagonist's emotional intelligence is a bit low. What if you just said that you sacrificed the artifact temporarily in exchange for the power to defeat Ares? In this way, the Amazons still feel that they owe you, after all, you even gave your reward to defeat Ares, an unrelated and powerful enemy. You have to be secretive and make yourself look like a villain taking advantage of the situation. Is it possible that adults still have to find out who you dedicated it to? Even if I ask you, wouldn't it be enough if you just say it's dedicated to some mysterious god? Saying this also makes it appear that you have a strong backing. If someone wants to mess with you in the future, you should think about it. Many time-travel novels have a very weak setting, that is, the protagonist keeps it secret for the sake of keeping it secret, as if the secret will be caught and sectioned on the operating table if it is leaked. It's fine if it's an urban genre, but isn't it like American comics? It's no worse than a time traveler, let alone a plug-in.

Alas, I looked left and right and could only see two words in this book. Jump on the street. The novel won't be popular or even a small hit. To be honest, the writing seems to be okay, at least. The plot is still coherent, but it doesn't capture the reader's heart and what they want to see, to be honest. Obviously the title of the novel is "I have 6 infinite gems", but it is forced to say that I have 6 "limited time gems". You think it's better to make a weakened version, and just gradually strengthen it in the later period. Why do you always have to limit it? . Readers can tolerate being weaker, but don't set a time limit, as if the ability is not their own. What do readers like? Permanence, who likes limited-time games like games? Most people definitely like permanence, even if it is worse. And I feel that the selection of the heroine is also a problem. The activity with Wonder Woman at the beginning and then Athena suddenly popping up at the end felt very abrupt, man. 😅😅

There are two points that have been complained about in this article, so the author will just talk about them. The first is that the Infinity Stones cannot be used in other worlds. But this setting only appears in a certain crossover comic and has nothing to do with the movie universe. And what I wrote was the magically modified version. So this article shall prevail. To put it simply, the second creation is based on characters, rather than a fixed world view and some basic fixed settings. For example, Batman usually knows not to kill people, but there is also a setting where Batman incarnates in the dark universe and slaughters the earth with laughter. The second is that the protagonist is a so-called indigenous person. The author did not think about this problem at first, so it is a bit baffling, because most people read American comics, whether DC or Marvel, and most of their understanding comes from the movie universe, which is about various beautiful countries and Avengers saving the world. In the stories of various superhero characters, there is almost no mention of the content of the Eastern world, which is basically blank. Therefore, if I write from an expanded perspective, I chose such a protagonist type. The most important thing is that this article actually does not have a conflict about whether the time traveler has been substituted, because this article is about the multiverse. After the first two volumes, the protagonist will go to other worlds, which means that this article has more than one Iron Man, more than one Thanos, and more than one Superman and Diana. Naturally, there is no conflict of prophecy. Above. (This post is locked)

It feels like the protagonist = a tool man with some brain problems and no sense of existence. Then after reading Chapter 50, I found that Amazon has never been finished, so I won't go into it. However, the protagonist takes a bunch of useful but useless artifacts and uses divine power to become an instant man. There is a feeling that someone else uses the tool man to obtain the mystery, and then gives the protagonist an experience of an infinite gem that can be used infinitely. The divine power of Zeus, and other artifacts, even if the divine power is not your own, you are very poor in the early stage, so you can use it to overdo it, and just change it to become a second man... The same goes for artifacts, you can replace them if they are useful or not. Shoes, even if you only have one, it is an artifact. At least you can run fast and fly. Wouldn't it be better to keep it to save your life? Something that can be used instantly is better than a portal that has to pop out to save your life. In other comments, Shen Nong also mentioned this problem. I have just read about ten chapters and the protagonist is a bit stupid. The above is purely my personal opinion.

This is another book without "roots". The protagonist's behavior is too self-centered. Not too optimistic Moreover, if our world really needs to be saved, and the savior is the protagonist of this world view, I think we are quite pathetic.

The inexplicable gem ability, why does it feel like it is a system? A space gem creation created a surprising aunt. How come you have several gems that are destroyed, but in your setting, the original power of the gem still exists and chooses you. Even if you are weak, the energy source of the sacrificial artifact is strengthened. I can understand the gems, but how come the gems become a system flow for you? Shouldn't they become a kind of super power that you master? After all, the gems are integrated with you, and the power of the gems is your power. In your case, it becomes a separate skill type like online games, without development and so on.

Very interesting

If all six gems can be used, it will be the top level in the multiverse. Darkseid, the Anti-Monitor, etc. Will not be a problem. Even if a single gem is used, it is the strength of a single universe.

When I first started watching it, I thought the main character was a retired soldier, but in the later chapters he acted like a child, forgetting the witticisms, and all kinds of nonsense! And he is also a person who has encountered a world invaded by aliens! You can just write about a student at the beginning! After all, he has no use for his status as a veteran and the training he received during his military service.

I read half of the article and marked four or five. After reading one article, I found the table of contents, read it, and quit. I wanted to watch a strong protagonist, but what I saw was a messy plot. To be honest, it didn't look good. I left.

Obtained the recognition of infinite gems × The migrant worker who was deceived ✓

Just two or three sentences about the background of the time traveler. Alas, I care about the "aboriginals" anyway.

I haven't read it yet, but when I saw the introduction, I wanted to say something Your Majesty has such great official power, use Marvel's sword to kill DC officials!

If Mythology is written, I will write Mythology, if Marvel is writing Marvel, if DC is writing DC, it looks so confusing! The writing is okay, but the plot is too confusing and a bit annoying to watch! ! !

I'm speechless. The gem at the beginning is still conscious, and it even trades with the protagonist. I have no desire to watch it anymore. The gem has become a system, and it's like selling sheep over others.

The aboriginal protagonist of the fanfic cannot accept it

Six Infinity Gems (X) System Enhancement Text (√)

The garbage system stole the protagonist's infinite gems, and then used a bunch of scraps to kill the SB protagonist. The protagonist thought he had taken advantage of it and was grateful to the system 😅

When writing fan fiction, don't write about indigenous protagonists. There will be no sense of empathy at all. Is it interesting to write about things that all readers know clearly and make them mysterious? Who can read it?

I took a look and found that the writing was okay and the content was good, but the writing was too fatal and made it difficult to become popular. The first local traveler is a taboo for all fans! Second: Goldfinger is complex and boring (to put it bluntly, it is the system, you might as well just point it out. For example, the system swallowed everything in Liushi) Third: The first volume contains too many private goods. Most people come to see fandom and not to read pseudo-DC Western mythological stories with private goods. Fourth: Travel back to comics Wei took your Athena and stepped on the thunder and successfully persuaded most people to quit In short, it is Lei Dianduo. Although the writing is good, it cannot make up for it. The purpose of the fandom is to satisfy the readers' sense of involvement. Therefore, most people successfully persuaded them to quit in the first volume. No matter how good your writing is, it will not make sense

I know the author is Chinese, but since he writes American comics, wouldn't it be awkward to have a Chinese name mixed in among a bunch of foreign names? Some people choose foreign names when they go to foreign countries to develop, and foreigners also choose Chinese names when they go to China to develop. I don't know what the author is thinking.

To be honest, it looks real. The disaster of genocide is just around the corner, and I can't bear to part with a few artifacts. I'm really dumbfounded by Amazon's brain circuit, and what's written in the third golden chapter? The author asked those who don't like it to skip the first part and start the second one directly. As a result, they started charging before the tenth chapter. I'm really dumbfounded. You can really cheat a subscription into one.

It's disgusting to look at from behind! One word! A bunch of nonsense, a waste of time and starting coins!

Book Title "I Have Six Castrated Infinity Stones"

The six infinity stones of the protagonist are very different, not to mention that you have to have the peak power of a single universe level, and you have to have a heavenly father level. After all, Nemesis is also the pinnacle of the multiverse, almost an all-powerful figure, even though she was broken up. The power of the six gems should also be at the level of a single universe. After all, it represents time, space, mind, reality, power, and soul. It is difficult for anyone who has not surpassed the single universe level to defeat him. The six infinite gems of the protagonist were cut too seriously by the author, and it feels like they are not as good as the Twelve Talismans of the Holy Lord. Nowadays, most of the novels are about killing off the main characters, which makes them a little boring to read. I have read too many books that suppress the protagonist, and I feel a little depressed. After all, the name of your novel means a bit of invincibility. I originally came here for this kind of refreshing novel. To put it bluntly, I just wanted to see the kind of plot where you are fearless and do whatever you want. The writing is quite satisfactory, but the setting of this gem is too painful for you, the author. I don't want you to exaggerate, so it's better to keep it as it is. It would be nice to have a higher starting point. What I saw in front of me was speechless.

Diana becomes a new generation of American comics bus

I came here from a short walk on Douyin, so where is that little girl?

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No matter what, I can't say it's not good. But when I look at it, I feel dissatisfied. I feel that his writing is particularly psychedelic.