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After receiving that anger, I also lost my face. Where can I stay?

You don't have to write if you don't want to. I can't even think of subscribing to read the original version after a few days.

The author's writing style is a bit unusual to be honest. First, as an online text, this book frequently switches scenes in every chapter. It can be said to be a taboo for novel authors. Before the reader has time to get involved, the channel has already been changed like watching TV. The second is the entry point of the plot, as well as turns, tension, and plot ups and downs. Without these four points, the plot will be like a stranger narrating an insignificant thing to you. Third, buy something. What is the buying point of your works? System? Apprentice? Or is it the protagonist's thirty years in Hedong or thirty years in Hexi's dream? You haven't written it down. If you take some from the East and imitate some from the West, there is no actual meaning at all. Maybe you think I didn't understand your work, so I'm sorry. I'm just giving you some suggestions. If you don't want to adopt them, just pretend I didn't say it and remind me and I can delete it.

Yes, the content is rich and colorful, and the characters are distinctive.

What's going on? I have read several novels recently, all of which have the relationship between apprentice and master. Can ethics and morality be reversed now? It doesn't matter, now

I saw chapter sixty-four. Let me summarize it for you. The two female protagonists currently known to be included in this book are all given for free. One of them is still an apprentice. If you are a pure love party, the single female leader can quit. This is not a famous teacher novel. The protagonist completely treats his apprentice as a tool. TMd his own apprentice was seriously injured in the ring and stood up and won the game by willpower. The protagonist ran to receive the award without looking, and asked the accompanying elders to run to feed his disciple the elixir. Those who like the famous teacher stream can quit. Moreover, this map is too small. I guess the author is not strong enough in writing or has insufficient brains. In the Immortal Sect Competition, there are only twelve people from seven sects in total. Then when it comes to realms, the names of the ten realms are pretty good. I can't explain any gaps or differences, so I just watch them being beaten all the way. Let's talk about the protagonist himself. With the system, he stole the prize spirit sword that his apprentice worked so hard to win the first place in the competition. He ran around in the sect that hosted the immortal competition. When he saw the fighting puppets in the Holy Son's courtyard, he stole them directly. He also flaunted himself as a gentleman and had great righteousness. Because there is a section later in which the protagonist inherits the righteousness of his ancestors. Looking at the sect again, the sect leader's level is extremely high, and the remaining elders are becoming more and more useless. During the eleven years since the protagonist was deposed, the sect leader ignored him, the other six elders except him all ostracized him, and all the disciples of the sect disliked him. It fits the trend of loser, but this sect is a righteous sect that inherits Haoran's righteousness. I don't know how this sect deserves this name. Furthermore, the sect disciple setting is quite problematic. Outer disciples, inner disciples, and direct disciples all seem to be fine. The difference between the outer door and the inner door is not mentioned, and the difference between the inner door and the inner door is not mentioned. There is no special geographical distinction between the inner and outer doors. The only thing worth mentioning is that there is a monthly payment difference. Finally, I would like to mention that the author complained in the free chapter that readers did not spend money and were not qualified to comment. The joke was quite embarrassing and made people unable to laugh. The writing style is quite dull, I guess it was written before I graduated from high school. To sum up, there is not a single TM in this book that has any depth or depth. As long as the protagonist goes out, the male characters will complain about this b, and the female characters will want to give it to them for free.

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Your system provides exercises, disciples, and training materials. None of them use the sect. You are a hypocritical hammer in this sect where everyone is an enemy. If you don't attack the street, who will?

The protagonist and Zhao Jian started at the same time, and the protagonist overtook and became an elder first. Is he indeed the seventh elder? Zhao Jianhou became an elder, but became the fifth elder? Moreover, the two of them have only been in the industry for ten years. It's okay for the protagonist to make an exception and become an elder. Zhao Jian has also become an elder with one of the best talents in the same period. Is the elder of this sect a carrot? Two people in the same group who were initiated for ten years became elders, and all those who were initiated for more than ten years died?

Chapter 13: Seriously persuaded to quit, accept a harem if you want, and also set up an apprenticeship, will it eventually develop into a master-disciple relationship? The female apprentice still sleeps together when she is 17 or 18 years old. No one in modern times would dare to do this.

No matter how the sect abuses me, the sect is the best. I can't live without the sect. Disciples with lower cultivation levels than me dare to scold me, but my heart does not fluctuate at all 🥱🥱🥱🥱

I also set a certain number of fans before I can comment, but I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 4. It's extremely cliche, the clichéd plot, the protagonist of NT, the tool-man apprentice with no IQ, the writing style, the time-traveling villain from the Urban Dragon King novel, and the golden finger copied from others. I really can't find a reason to keep reading.

Is this your own sect? Why are they all enemies? The six elders unite and work together to deal with the seventh elder who is the weakest in cultivation? I've never been so in tune with each other after squatting in the same latrine.

It's too blunt. The top leaders of the sect are targeting pig's feet. What's the point of this sect? Don't talk about feelings. What's the point of having a few wooden houses in a dilapidated mountain? It was me who had taken people away a long time ago. I was just left to be insulted and plotted against. I was really speechless. And if you are reborn, will you practice for ten years? Even if the cultivation base doesn't increase at all? Normal people would have sneaked into the mortal city and be happy. Being happy in the city vs being miserable in the mountains every day? ?

You are a sect and you are an elder. Why do you act as if the entire sect has a grudge against you? Your class is different. Moreover, you were trained by the sect from a young age and you have not undermined the interests of other elders. Why do people want to mess with you and look down on you? You are an elder. If a sect cannot even respect its teachers, how can it be so big? For a group, rules are very important

At the beginning, a person does not take the protagonist's position as an elder seriously. How is this different from those novels in which family servants insult the good-for-nothing young master? Moreover, the status of the family servants is higher than that of the good-for-nothing young master. In the end, these people whose realm is lower than the protagonist, the elder, dare to do this?

Subscribe to a chapter and collect a few points just to say a word. Your book is really bad. There is no logic, no depth, and it is not even up to the level of a cool article.

This book was very painful to read. If you say it pretends to be sexy, it would be a slap in the face, but that would be unfair. To say that it is not interesting is to say that it does have some new angles. This book is like taking a dumpling and not wiping it clean.

I'm curious about people who call them poisonous. They've read a few novels a few years ago. Is this poisonous? It has been more than ten years since I started using Java in 2008. I have read hundreds if not thousands of novels. How can there be so many masterpieces for you to read? This novel is not as good as the better ones, but it is definitely passable. Except for a few poisonous points that make it a little uncomfortable, overall I can read it. If you are jealous, please avoid it. I am very curious about how many masterpieces you can find.

If a woman can help, I'll help. There are too many ambiguous scenes, almost all the storylines are about women, and she likes her inexplicably.

Although I know what the plot will be like, can I quickly end being a waste and become addicted? Now the author doesn't think this is popular, right?

I just read this book, and the poisonous point I saw is that the top-level composition of the sect is like a pyramid scheme. You have so many realms in this book, and you grow up in ten or eight years. Do you treat this cultivation of immortals as a factory assembly line? After ten years on the assembly line, you will probably be the line leader. This sect will grow old in ten years. Isn't it too childish?

They say there are three golden chapters, the first three chapters are very important! As a result, this author was 🐮B and put three pieces of shit on it! ! ! ! !

After reading Chapter 20, I don't know what the system does, and the level of cultivation is not clear. I only know that Zhifan, Qi Lian, Kaihe, Cave, and Guanhai all appear out of nowhere. These are just people who don't like it But if you accept a female apprentice to live in a room, and say that the skirt is not covering the body, it is really poisonous to untie the waistband before going to bed in the morning And you cultivator, even those with lower cultivation than you will look down on you. You are still an elder, and you are too old to use your brain. A few assassins from the capital are looking for trouble (their force is not superior, and their backgrounds say that they all follow the prince's orders, but the gatekeeper disciples don't pick up the killers) How can they be more awesome? They can directly see the great elder and openly go to the elder to cause trouble without telling them.

When you write novels, you always hope that more people will read them, instead of trying to please a niche audience and always want your results to be better, right? It was a failure when you wrote that the second disciple was such a nymphomaniac, yet they even slept together! Speechless

After reading a hundred chapters of Return to Earth, I wonder whether this person is afraid of trouble or likes trouble, so don't set up a character easily, and it doesn't look like someone who has practiced at all.

I just want to know what the use of these seven disciples is. Except for the second disciple being rectified, what are the other uses?

If I have a monthly vote, I will definitely vote for you. How about I add some juice first?

I voted for all 6 monthly votes this month, please give me more details.

Either continue writing twice a day, or stop completely.