The Heavens Are Picturesque

I have been looking for a book related to snow for too long. I hope it can be written well.

There are a lot of typos and a lot of small plot points. I haven't seen the first few dozen chapters of the big points and I can't stand it 😡

When I enter Beiliang, I will be the first to kill Chen Zhibao, who is a kind figure to repay my kindness. I will cleanse the imperial prison with blood. I will make all the Zhao family emperors inhumane. I will see who the Zhao family emperor makes wedding clothes for. I will sleep with rouge reviews. I will smoke the big mouth of Huang Sanjia. I will refuse to watch the battle in Beicheng. I will travel to Wudang Mountain. I will offer a glass of green ants to Wenhua. I will see if the heaven will not give birth to me, Li Chungang's sword. Then I will go to the sky to see those beasts, ghosts and snake gods!

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It's a waste of time. Don't look.

When I saw Zhao Min abandoning the book, he said that there was no conflict. They had led people to attack Wudang and killed so many disciples. If the protagonist did not catch up, the sect would probably be wiped out! It's outrageous to be able to let this go.

The worst thing about Zhutianliu is that they learn martial arts indiscriminately. They want the secret books and practice them all. After practicing, there is no effect that one plus one is greater than or equal to two. For example, Qiu Qianren's iron sand palm can be ranked below the five unique skills. You It's okay to follow the path of raising hundreds of scriptures, but most people in the heavenly stream don't take this path. They keep grabbing opportunities and grabbing martial arts secrets. Once they get it, they practice as soon as they see it. When they get to the end, they don't even know what kind of kung fu the protagonist has practiced.

It's just that the world is too cliche. It's better for Zhu Tianliu not to write about the Great Desolate now. I feel that the Great Desolate is about to become as unpopular as Douluo.

In "Snow", the setting that the army can surround and kill first-level masters actually doesn't make sense. Land gods are not dead. Not to mention that you can use AOE with slightly lower power but low consumption to clear the mobs. If you jump into the air, can you still get those non-flying mobs? After you have rested enough, kill them again. No matter how many people there are, they are just leeks. And if the defense is high enough, generally the mobs won't be able to break through the defense at all. So I think it's stupid that Li Chungang insists on breaking through a thousand armors with one sword and then consuming himself alive. He and Xu Fengnian could obviously fly kites and kill all those soldiers. Even if multiple people can form an array, the flexibility, defense, and attack limit are too low, and are also limited by terrain. When you reach the level of a first-grade master, you should be able to advance and retreat freely.

It's rubbish. After watching it for a long time, I realized that the result is a ruthless and unsexy one. Then what kind of emotional line are you doing? Then he hurriedly went to the next world, but the result was that the soul passed through him. In the Yitian world, the emotional protagonist finally committed suicide by jumping off a cliff. What's wrong with this?

Yitian couldn't stand it after seeing it. The author always wanted to express that the protagonist is a person who values ​​emotions, and writing about time travel also requires writing emotional scenes. However, when he and the girl in yellow were forgotten in the world, that's when the character of the protagonist collapsed in my mind. The protagonist went to Wudang Mountain to practice, and his adoptive parents came to see him. He was so moved that he cried. Why didn't the protagonist come down from the mountain? Because of the end of the world and the pursuit of truth, I gave up the girl in yellow and left this world. It can be seen that the protagonist has no concern for family and love. Such a person is not worth expecting from him. I also decided to abandon the book.

Every time the protagonist enters a new world, he will turn into a baby and start over. Passers-by should be careful when entering the trap.

The Half-Step Grandmaster is a really disgusting setting. . . . Originally, the level system was the realm that Xiaobai Wenwuxia came to. It was convenient for upgrading and fighting monsters. Later, it was forced to come out in multiple half-steps. . . . It's like I have half the experience at level 59, but I'm still more powerful than someone at level 59. . . .

Looking forward to the night 😍 I hope the heroine is Ye Hongyu

I haven't read the content yet, so let me complain about the introduction: That's bullshit, the Eighth Sword of Wudang, it's the Seven Heroes of Wudang, not the Seven Swords! At least Zhang Wuji's father didn't use a sword, so he was nicknamed Iron Painted Silver Hook.

I just finished reading Yi Tian, ​​and the author can be said to be ruthless and decisive in the end. What I don't understand is, since you have already planned it, Taishang Wangqing, why do you spend so much time describing the family relationship between the adoptive parents and the love between the descendants of the Yang family for the protagonist? I didn't read the second volume, but I thought it was about Entering the Shattered Void. After one chapter, I found that the protagonist had become a baby again. It was soul piercing again, so did Yitian commit suicide? There are a lot of flaws

The two major poisonous points are that one is the most annoying thing about rebuilding every world, and the other is that people pretend to be conspiracy theories about the system. If you don't have a system, you're just a piece of shit.

In the nanny story, you have to help the protagonist in every world. There is no fundamental change in the plot. You need to start from scratch every time you go to a new world. Although the upgrade is fast, it is quite boring. The goal of coming to the new world is to travel to the next world. The protagonist's actions lack sufficient logical support. The most important thing is that there is no heroine! ! ! I didn't accept a single plot role. I didn't read the Snow novella, but I guess I didn't. It slipped away.

The plot is a bit cliché, but the author's writing style is very good. The cliché parts make people feel taken for granted. It's very smooth and not a noob at all. I just started watching it and I haven't seen any bad points so far. I like it very much.

I heard that the next volume will be written in the snow, which is a high mountain. It is predicted that Ye Qi will not explicitly become a teacher this time. After traveling, he will fall near Daxueping and Xuanyuan Jingcheng will play the role of teacher. I think this line is very suitable for writing.

Knowing the plot well, the Six Heroes were still ambushed, the six major factions including Wudang were still captured by Zhao Min, and Zhang Sanfeng was still injured, which was much worse than the original work 😁

The opening chapter is quite amazing, but unfortunately, the author is not capable enough and suffers from literary youth disease. It should have been a good novel ten years ago.

There is a vulgar plot in Yitian World. The protagonist goes into the water and a woman takes a bath... This kind of routine was the most common many years ago. Looking at the title, he and the protagonist got into a fight - a misunderstanding and a fatal fight. This...

If it had not been written about diversion, the score of this book would have been at least doubled. What is first-class, top, middle, bottom, peak, perfection. It's so awkward to watch, and it's full of fun and the feeling of seeing the blue moon

Will there be stories about Son-in-Law, Master Wuxin (Tang Dynasty), Zhenhun Street, and the Ultimate Series (One Class, One Family, Three Kingdoms) in the future?

Isn't this just a scumbag? He just slapped his ass and left after flirting with a bunch of people.

Aimless time travel, no main line, no main training system, soul travel, every time you travel to the world, you have to start training all over again, just like a game player who keeps reopening the trumpet. . . After watching Qing Yu Nian, I can't stand it anymore. .

Although the reward of 10,000 yuan is not much, can I add more?

After reading the Yitian part, I found that the author's writing is strong and the plot concept is okay. The book is a good book, but the writing is a bit depressing and boring, which made me feel blocked. Personally, I prefer more fun. Come on 👍

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