The Dharma of White Bones Suppresses the Universe

I felt like the plot was written by a newbie, so I patiently read part of it, and saw that I was the copycat, so the routine of getting out of here was a bit awkward. For the plot of the mysterious journey, I almost know how the plot goes. The main world is about the life of the protagonist and the interaction between the female partner Su, the fourth sect of the sect, and the protagonist. There are pitfalls in the beginning. It has the flavor of a novice novel, and the world I go to is a bit mismatched. It's just food and fodder. You can read it according to the Shuangwen routine.

There are so few magical powers of the White Bones, and you are such a loser in the White Bone Taoist Palace. I want to think of some magical powers of the Bones, and I suddenly turned into a demon 😰 Crowdfunding day magic powers: White Bones Burning Yin Fire, White Bone Armor, White Bones Divine Demon,

The White Bone Immortal has boundless magical power. My magical power is vast, and I can suppress the whole world. ......   I can't edit anymore.

This author may have forgotten that he was writing a fairy tale, and changed it to a western fantasy genre halfway through. The success disgusted most readers. If nothing unexpected happens, this article is definitely a done deal. I suggest the author start over from scratch to avoid wasting too much time.

He is a loser and indecisive. I really don't know why the protagonist can survive for so long.

I was persuaded to quit that Western fantasy world. I was originally a good person, but it was no longer interesting to become the Zhutianliu.

Even after reading the introduction, I didn't have the desire to read any further. . . Why do current authors still like useless starts?

Have any comments on this post? Thank you for your advice. I have only been writing articles for half a year and am working part-time. So there are many questions. I really want to make progress, but I can't find the problem. 😚😚😚

There is no need to write about another world in the early stage. Even if you do, it shouldn't be too long.

You are also a talented person. You have written several books with less than 300,000 words in total. How can you make readers believe in you? Whether the writing is good or not is one thing, but whether you take it seriously or not is another thing entirely. It's so disappointing😰

Enter the dungeon. Which dungeon is more fun?

Change the status. Crazy hint😥😥😥

Just practice and cultivate your talents! Cultivation is a directional way to change your behavior and habits. Does your behavior and habits require talent? Just practice, don't add weird things afterward

It was quite good-looking at first, but I don't know why I changed the world and gave up on it.

Imitating Lu Sheng's routine, Deep Blue opened dungeons in various small worlds. The main world was not bad, but the first dungeon was not so good. As soon as the protagonist got a little better, he went to the small world to start from scratch, and it was still the same routine of being bullied.

I don't care about your book, I just want to wait for you to publish a copy before reading it. Personally, I don't like copies very much.

Alas, the first part is pretty good, but the last part is wrong.

This title reminds me of a sacred book, The Palace of White Bones

I haven't read it yet, but I flipped through the catalog and collected it first! As for the author saying not to read a single chapter... Personally, unless I am really hungry for books and too busy, I generally don't want to read books with less than 100 chapters. At most, I will just read them, because this is really not enough╮(╯＿╰)╭! Anyway, I don't have to read half a book to survive. I can only say that the author, please come on!

Brainless novice, all kinds of routines from ten years ago. The only advantage is that he is decisive on the sofa.

Well written, it's a pity that it's a eunuch

This conversation is even better than what elementary school students say! How embarrassing!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

3 Books with 440,000 words. For those who have finished the book, just go ahead and get it straight away.