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Martial arts demons and monsters, you want to turn Naruto into this? Are you sure?

One question arises: what is the main character's role? The main character isn't really a main character; they're just a background character. It gives me the feeling that the main character is superfluous.

It's so chaotic! The plot jumps around and it feels so confusing!

Keep it up! 5 Recommendations, 2 monthly votes already up!

I'm disgusted. I watched a pirated copy, but I still have to complain. I came to watch Yakuza-ryu, not your Naruto.

Naruto? I'm really impressed. You're writing a fantasy novel, not a light novel.

It's so heavily influenced by Japanese storylines, I can't stand it. I recommend you try writing in Japan.

Is the main character just a background character? He's only appeared a few times in over ten chapters.

Thank you all. If there are any shortcomings, I hope you will forgive me.

I don't know why, but I didn't feel immersed in the story. The protagonist, Chu Shen, seemed like just a typical working-class henchman, while characters like Yun Xinxiao and Shi Fang were the real protagonists. Perhaps the author wanted to write a behind-the-scenes story, but it became a bit convoluted and lacked a sense of connection. Maybe this type of story isn't for me, so I won't comment on the book's quality. 😥