Transmigrated as the White Moonlight of the Villainous Tycoon in a Period Novel
穿成年代文反派大佬的白月光
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 763k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Marriage & Romance
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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408Chapters
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8.2kFans
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The author probably lacks life experience; many plot points are jarring. What kind of wealthy landlord could a village of 170 households possibly have that would let you steal several chests of gold and silver? If you don't understand, just search it on Baidu; look up the purchasing power of a single Yuan Shikai silver dollar from the Republic of China era.
The female lead is such a coward! With so many uncles around, she was bullied and drowned. And she, a soul who transmigrated, didn't even retaliate!
Is this female lead a useless person? She doesn't even seek revenge.
The entire text is riddled with typos; did the author even graduate from junior high school?
How many more plot holes are there? Is the female lead a saint? She was scammed out of so much money, and when her father came back, she didn't mention it at all, nor did she go to the school to find Lou Baoguo. When they met, she didn't even arrest him to make him pay back the money. Is the police chief just for show? Several of them are martial arts experts, yet they can't catch an ordinary person? It's infuriating and frustrating to watch!
The first hundred or so chapters were barely readable, but the later chapters felt increasingly rambling and lacked any real plot, making them unreadable. Chapters 112 and 113 are completely disjointed; I wonder if the author ran out of ideas. Liu Jiahui's character was abruptly changed, as if she had been possessed and replaced by a different person. Also, the book has a major problem with typos and punctuation errors, such as "This is a good thing," which significantly hinders reading.
The writing style is so amateurish it's just a stream of consciousness. The plot is mediocre, and it's not segmented. Anyway, goodbye
The punctuation is off. The hierarchy is unclear. It doesn't match up. Author, how did you write this?
Lou's father and Manyue were too good to Lou Yueru, exceeding the bounds of kindness. Although they knew Lou Yueru wouldn't become a villain, this kind of unlimited kindness from childhood could easily influence a person's mind. A little kindness is appreciated, but too much kindness breeds resentment.
Oh my god! So many typos, it's exhausting to read.