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The recent chapters are very boring. The author's English Premier League is not that exciting. It should be because his thinking is not clear after the democratic voting. It's okay to listen to the readers' opinions. If you copy it completely, you will suffer the consequences.
The most embarrassing thing about writing football novels is writing about skills. If we really talk about skills, there are hundreds if not thousands. Even if it is a movement without the ball, there are gaps and counter-offsides. When shooting, there are shooting angles, ball speeds, arcs, timing of shooting, and the deception and suddenness of the shooting action. The grasp of the landing point when catching the ball, as well as the physical confrontation ability and physical flexibility. Those dribbling masters also have two characteristics. One is that it is difficult for others to steal the ball and they have strong ability to protect the ball. The other is that they are strong in passing people. Many dribbling masters can only take care of one of them because you have to deceive others' center of gravity when passing people. Protecting the ball only requires that it is difficult for others to intercept your ball. Consciousness is directly linked to IQ and thinking ability, understanding of tactics, grasp of the situation on the field, how to break the game, and how to coordinate with teammates. Those with good awareness will have good coordination with two, three or four teammates. The one with the strongest awareness is like a commander and can mobilize all teammates. There are other characteristics, such as being able to motivate and convince teammates. In addition to relying on personal strength, this characteristic can also be promoted. For example, Ciro, on the basis of personal strength and record, a large amount of commercial publicity has formed a great influence and can give teammates a kind of confidence. For example, there was a match for the Portuguese national team. Messi is not good at this point, mainly because his temper is a bit soft. In reality, people are bullied when they are kind, and a soft-hearted person cannot be a commander without determination Anyway, those who write about skills, I personally feel that their understanding of football is too shallow. Write down the skills in detail, which requires N number of parameters! Just write it in general terms! Those who have this skill or that skill don't understand football.
There is no post-game feedback, so I suggest adding a little more.
Is it acceptable to mix tidbits like The Sun with novels? If there are any, I promise you that it is a safe thing to book them all. If you are purely competitive, you will not read them. After all, I have read too many football novels and classics. No matter how purely competitive, what kind of tricks can you write? Each game just involves changing the opponent and replaying the game for a while, which is boring and tight.
Is it closed because of the epidemic? There is not a single live audience, so where are the cheers for the goal?
To be honest, I am just a fake football fan. I like football but I don't know much about it. See Chapter 49. 1. That female reporter was very outrageous and outrageous, which is really uncomfortable for a girl. 2. Teammates ridicule the protagonist for not having a nightlife. The ridicule is a joke. In fact, everyone should admire him. We know that success does not rely solely on talent and luck. Without hard work and self-discipline beyond ordinary people, you cannot become a superstar. Moreover, the protagonist's attitude and love for football will also infect the people around him. This is the spirit. 3. This is the professional quality of professional players. 4. You can write more protagonists who strive to improve their strength. No one can reject a person who works hard, has talent and loves football. He is a natural spiritual leader. This kind of thing is invisible and intangible, but every winning team must have it. Without it, morale will not go anywhere. 5. I believe that most people who play football start playing football because they love football. Of course, most of this love will be worn away, so loving it from beginning to end and not forgetting the original intention is also very burning, isn't it? 6. I hope that the emotional line issue can be reduced as little as possible. It doesn't have to be one heroine from beginning to end, but it can't be like having one in front of the harem and sleeping with the other in the back. It's very uncomfortable! ! We can look for them after they are divided, but we can't be ambiguous about several of them. 7. The most important! ! It was only because I saw that the author carefully read the comments and respected the readers' opinions that I wrote this long article. Just my personal thoughts, please share. If you don't like it, don't comment. If you comment, you are right! ! !
I went back to my hometown today during the Qingming Festival. My hometown is in the mountains, the weather is very cold, and the spider-injured arm stings terribly. I went home at around eight o'clock in the evening. The coding was very slow, and the quality might not be very good. There were typos, it didn't make sense, etc. Please forgive me. Spider will definitely read it again tomorrow and correct it. Thank you for your support.
Every time a goal is scored, the fans without the team cheer and applaud, it feels like they are playing a game
England is so dirty. Fans pointed lasers at the goalkeeper's eyes during penalty kicks. I hope that in the later novels, the violent British team will be like the second team of South Korea.
Come on, I haven't seen a sports novel written better than yours at this stage.
Move to Manchester City, let the sky in Manchester be blue, and be the king of Manchester.
Gerd Muller passed away on August 15, 2021. The author works hard to write a legend about Mueller.
The dialogue is too childish and the level is limited
Those who didn't know thought you were narrating.
I felt so bored after reading Chapter 6. It was all game commentary. How about interacting with players and fans? How will the fans react when such a talented person scores so many goals in one game? What about local media reaction? You know, European football fans are crazy. Even small teams have local fans. Are you pretending to be cool and not giving the protagonist a chance? It's just to see how awesome the protagonist is. What's the point of just looking at the technical statistics of a virtual character? What you read in a novel is the story. I have said so much mainly because I hope the author can write well. Your book has potential, but it is too dry.
It is recommended that the author do more research on football. The lineup of 1860 can only be said to be very average in the second division. It would be too fake to add a protagonist to drastically improve the record. I haven't finished the first season yet. Depending on the situation, it will be written that the championship will be undefeated in the season and the protagonist will score crazy goals. Juventus, who were as strong as they were back then, failed to achieve an unbeaten season in Serie B despite retaining many of their main players. If an unbeaten season was easy, Arsenal's undefeated championship would not be remembered for so long, and Wenger's historical status may also drop a lot.
You are here to write a running account. I don't even have much communication with my teammates!
Are there any similar novels? Almost all are invincible.