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Literary Crown Gold Cup: Starting Point Football Literary Praise
Let the cry not stop at the stadium, but also echo in the pages of books.
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Mainly books that I have read and liked. Personal taste preference: ①Infinite flow, weird flow, wizard flow, beast control flow, card flow... ②Strange heroes, folk suspense, mountain and sea myths... ③Steampunk, cyberpunk, doomsday wasteland, evolutionary mutation... ④Business war, history, sports, games, science fiction, fantasy... ⑤Professional articles: doctor, painter, writer, actor, director, basketball, running, e-sports, detective...
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Books with comfortable writing It doesn't mean that a book that is a big hit can enter my mouth. Taste is tricky Don't recommend books to me, dear friends, I only recommend books based on fate Book title, introduction, three golden chapters
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In the near future, I will first add the books that I think are better. I will write reviews slowly. If there are recommendations, I will also read them.
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Roy is essentially a thug in a suit.
Roy is essentially a thug in a suit. The experience of his previous life, the survival rules of the middle class, and his almost self-repressive pandering to the times have polished him into a well-dressed gentleman. Even in this new body, he still appears gentle because he speaks less. He speaks calmly and calmly, as if nothing can anger him. Emotional stability is like a rock. However, he should be a thug inside, not caring about any rules and order, only caring about whether the rules can be used for him. As soon as he opened his mouth, it was like a sharp knife coming out of its sheath, with a bright edge and bloody smell that he didn't even bother to hide. A person like him is a bit like whiskey. The appearance is charming amber gold, the body is full and oily, and even somewhat elegant. However, in the mouth, there is a heavy peat flavor that cannot be concealed no matter what flavor is used. It is spicy, rich, thick, and extremely tempting. Rough is like a stubborn stone.
I really like your book, unlike Lin Hai Ting Tao and Tian Tian Bu Xiu, who feel unhappy and have a lifeless historical atmosphere.
Congratulations to the national football team for preparing for the 2030 World Cup in advance
Congratulations to the national football team for preparing for the 2030 World Cup ahead of schedule
The traces of AI are too obvious. It is not recommended to watch.
I don't know much about football, but I still like the Monaco period now. It was really exciting at that time. Although the content has become richer and the achievements have been higher, the sincerity and sense of honor that shines in people's hearts to fight for the same goal, and the "feeling of a living person" of feedback and interaction that unites everyone and everyone hopes to achieve it, are still very moving when I think about it now. Now it's basically a routine of Roy's club/girlfriend/teammate having an incident - Roy putting out the fire - and the incident being resolved. It's not that it's not good, the author also wrote them as multi-faceted as possible. But it always feels like there is no sense of life. The Roy in the article no longer feels like a friend, lover, and relative who is wholeheartedly trusted, respected by fans and teammates, and has an intimate relationship with him as in the previous article. Now he seems to be walking alone on his own path, which is okay but not necessary at all. On the contrary, there is a sense of heroism, epicness and mission that is neither aloof nor the "I will go even if there are thousands of people" in the early stage. Moreover, the people around me are making enemies on all sides. They are either causing trouble, trash on the road, or villains and opponents who are seeking his own benefit. He gradually became fierce but not far enough away from the masses. The author did not highlight the greatness of his will or belief or the unknown hardships, so he was not aloof and thick enough to be legendary enough, but he gradually became indifferent. Relatives have not been mentioned in hundreds of chapters. The cute and smart sister is no longer in the stands to compose music and cheer for her brother. The younger brother who is spiritually pursuing and pursuing his brother's figure and glory during football practice is invisible. Silent and tenacious, raising the three of them alone will worry that Roy is praying to God and Buddha in his own way. The mother who tried her best to pray for Roy's favor and victory has disappeared; his girlfriend has been inhumane since Duchenne. Those who have no interaction and concern, who are only addicted to the money and fame brought by Roy, even breaking up make people feel unreasonable, untenable and even annoying. Meeting family members is unnecessary because of what my sister said; teammates who enjoy various benefits but have no heart at all towards Roy and don't even care about Roy during critical events are indifferent and human-machine NPCs who only serve to set off Roy's various actions. It can only be said that there are some things that he must write although he may not need them. We read novels just to realize our dreams and to see the dream-like happiness that is unattainable in reality. I was attracted by Roy's character, but gradually I found that he had "changed his taste". Some authors had laid down the clues early on, while others seemed to be far away from Roy when he moved forward, and were accidentally forgotten or even silenced. Roy, wake up, what we want to see is not just the simple and cold achievement trophies or cold numbers in this article, but also a tenacious dream chaser, a happy dream of returning home, and a happy dreamer. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo do you make up for the human touch that the author Roy lacks. You see, what's the difference between him and a cold guy who wins awards, gets rich, and trades girlfriends to refute his opponents all in one machine?
My thoughts after reading Chapter 28
After reading the first dozens of chapters, I still don't know much about the protagonist. I can only say that he is a responsible, eloquent, and ambitious person. Maybe it's because I am a Yun fan (I don't watch football, but I read a lot of football novels). The author's writing style is very smooth, but now I don't feel that the protagonist is a genius at all, and he feels that he is very famous now. The novel is readable, but I don't remember many of the characters. So far, I think the protagonist's mother is well written. The protagonist himself feels very disconnected to me. I remember that he was a high-level cow horse in his previous life. He said that he had a strong talent for football when he was a child, but he just didn't take that path. After traveling to this world, he became famous playing football. I don't feel that the protagonist loves football at all. I can only say that he is self-disciplined and hardworking. , At least so far, I don't see that the protagonist loves football. It feels more like football as a job to me. When encountering capital games and media interviews later, I can only say that the author's writing is interesting, but it does not highlight how awesome the protagonist is. I personally want to see the high-spirited look of a genius boy, but he did not write it. It can be seen that the author has intentional foreshadowing, but the part of the article that highlights the protagonist's ability to play football feels very bland. I hope there will be improvements in the future. Otherwise, this novel can only be said to be readable, but once you have read it, you may forget it because it is hard to remember.
Who taught you that not writing about national football is unpatriotic? Can you use some logic? 1. First of all, when did the decision to write for the national football team be linked to whether or not we want the country to be well? Why is it that in the novel, when the protagonist joins the national football team and kills people randomly, the national football team is revitalized? Will the protagonist decline if he doesn't join the national football team? If you feel good after reading an online article, there is hope for the national football team? This football article all writes about the national football team. Can the coaching staff and players of the national football team see it or what? After reading it, I was deeply moved. Do you work hard and be determined to rise? Isn't this a purely spiritual victory method? 2. Secondly, writing online articles also requires basic logic, right? Cool points don't appear out of thin air. How to present a cool point requires character support, preliminary foreshadowing and plot advancement. Writing about the national football team either makes it more fun and eliminates the honors at the national team level, or writes about it entirely in a vacuum, which requires a lot of original characters and fictional settings. In that case, a lot of things need to be restructured, and many people may not be willing to see too many fictional things. Football is not a one-person sport. It's useless for you to be awesome on your own. 3. Do I have to join the national football team to support the national football team? Do the protagonists have to suffer together? Can't you go out on your own first and save the country through curves? Can he, a Chinese-American, become the world's best football player and prove that Chinese people can not only play football but also be very good at it? Can his fame as a Chinese-American inspire Chinese people to pay more attention to football and love football as a sport? If he doesn't join the national football team, won't it affect him donating stadiums for domestic donations and using his influence and popularity to establish a mature youth training system? Are these contributing to domestic football? 4. Everyone has their own tastes, and everyone's enjoyment is normal. You just think that watching the National Football Team storyline can be substituting. If you like watching this kind of plot, you feel that watching the National Football Team is fun. That's okay. That's a matter of your hobbies. Respect and understand. I won't say a lot of nonsense. You like to watch the national football team, and I like to watch sports, so we don't interfere, but don't criticize them when they come up. You don't have to read an article and give me the correct answer. Brother, competitive sports, what I see is the excitement of the competitive level, you have to control me, is it a bit too broad?
Shennong has tested poison
After reading eight chapters, to be honest, there is an extraordinary person coming to the football area 🤓
Very well written about football. Foot wraps written outside the stadium. I have lost count of how many times the author described the perfume, expression, and eyes of Claire. That interview was like watching someone dance on a rainy day. The interviews I watched with football stars all used a humorous way to talk about their inner ambitions with laughter. The protagonist's interview really stretched his hips and was second-rate. When I read it, I had the impression that the author was trying to imitate Western speaking styles, but this is not necessary.
This kind of garbage writer should have a blacklist system at the beginning. Even if he changes his account and continues writing, he should be reminded of how many eunuchs he has written.
The only bad thing: I wrote a lot of other football matches without the main character, and I wrote them in such detail that the word count is so low
The first one is well written, but the second one is about a lot of football games that are not the main character, and the writing is so long and detailed. I am here to follow the main character, not to spend money to read text replays and commentary.
It's been a long time since I've read a sports article. It's rare to find a book that catches my eye. It has a slightly literary flavor. Overall, I feel very good. It's not all about competition, but mixed with some life emotions and business, and it doesn't deviate from the theme. It's very good. Keep this style, come on!
This is really the latest plot, I was confused.
Away from the forward? ? ? Which striker didn't insist on occupying his position when he was young? What outrageous operation? Cristiano Ronaldo moved from the wing midfielder to the left winger, Bale also moved from the midfielder to the striker, and the protagonist was placed in the attacking midfielder position. Isn't this a waste? Can Magic Bird's team building ideas reach this level? ,,? As the best striker in the world today, shouldn't the team try their best to unleash his offensive firepower? Drogba and Shevchenko's offensive capabilities are not as good as the protagonists. Shouldn't the weak give in to the strong on the football field? When did the strong accommodate the weak? Will Ronaldo give up the position on the left peak just because Bale is not as good as him? ? Along with the left and right wingers on the front line, this position needs to be grabbed. You just retreat from the forward to the midfielder. Fools all know that the further away from the opponent's goal position, the fewer offensive opportunities. This is equivalent to giving up part of the protagonist's offensive ability, and then letting two people who are not as good as him take the top position. Why? Why not just add another winger in the offseason? It's like you know Jordan is the best scorer in the league, and you tell him to organize offense this season. What's the point?
Don't subscribe to the latest final, it's written in a mess, smelly and long, falling behind 0:1, and then failing to score a goal, and the protagonist was cut down in various ways. In reality, the one who fell behind would have collapsed a long time ago, and you can still count down seconds to make a reversal, and you don't know where to burn something.
There are too many gorgeous words piled up in useless places, various descriptions of the shock and unclear meaning of the supporting characters' hearts, and exaggerated metaphors are always used to cover up the author's inability to write, which is too poisonous.
The biggest problem is to improve the writing style. The design of the overall plot is very good, but the writing style is a bit uncomfortable. There is no incentive to subscribe.
The author should also be a fan. There is one thing and one thing. Hype is nothing. Being crowned king is more of a clown. His current achievements can only be said to be the king of Morocco...
Put away the little idea of writing the final as a climax. No one cares who F. M. D. Porto is.
Just imagine twenty years later, when everyone talks about Monaco's Champions League journey this season, the opponents mentioned must be Real Madrid, Bayern, Arsenal, Zidane, Ronaldo, Kane, and Henry Vieira. Who cares about Porto? Porto is just an inconspicuous roadside in this season's Champions League journey. It just happened to appear in the final. It is not the final boss. Porto is not worthy, and Deco is not worthy either. The opponent of the protagonist of this final can only be a bird, even if there is one. Suppose you decide not to go to Car next season. This game can be written as the starting point of the feud with the Birds in the next few seasons. If I go to Che and the Birds to partner next season, then I must beat the Birds cleanly in this game to determine my right to speak in the Chess locker room.
It was said three days ago that half of the finals were written, but three days later the finals have not started yet! 😁 Discourage readers!
It's still quite difficult. If you're writing about a foreigner, you might as well watch the documentary about Messi and Ronaldo. Do you want to be a part of the French team? Which Chinese fan can empathize? I can't substitute it! Hey, I love and hate the national football team, but I can't put it in my place when I'm writing about a French guy!
The biggest winner of the Champions League: Magic Bird! Achievements: Endorsements soared! As for the protagonist? A soft-footed shrimp!
The author's writing style is really good. Some people in the comment area who are worried about literary youth are mainly because they are being fed too much by history. Anyway, as long as two things don't happen: one of the protagonists is cheated, and the other is that the game that should be won is not won well, and he suffers some kind of injury. Everyone reads books just for fun. How can one online article have the confidence to engage in regretful literature?
Don't order, run
Write 0:1, 95% water, then 3:1
Is this author a silent love?
I haven't read a single glance of his novels. Literary youth is a disease that must be cured, especially sports novels.
Sports culture Liangcao and above, if the level of grass jelly is stable
It makes me feel like watching Ai Jiang. The feeling of literary youth is overflowing. The pretentious sports style of literary youth is very exciting. I will update it quickly. I can't wait.
It's been 3 months, come and visit the grave 🌹
This book should have good grades. Why was it cut?
Great writing
I really want to read a well-written novel about a foreign national team and see the birth of a legend. I have read a better book before, that is, I am Kaka Kaka Kaka. This book really filled my book shortage. I will definitely support it (╹▽╹)
Don't wait for the event, it's all up to you, be sure to work hard to update
I don't understand why such a good grade was cut off. It's okay to continue writing with AI.