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Mention a few shortcomings 1. The plot is too bland. If it continues like this, fewer people will watch it. 2. Don't skip it just because you're not good at writing battles. If you don't know how to write, you can read other novels to learn about it. "Reincarnation Paradise" is good (´∀｀*) 3. Don't have a lot of space like the fate chapter to talk about the setting, and write several consecutive chapters about the daily plot of unimportant characters. The former is not to explain the bad setting to take care of book friends who don't understand the setting. It's because it drags out the plot too much. I'll try to summarize it as much as possible. (For example, when talking about the protagonist group or when they appear in the story, mention it by the way) The latter is simply unnecessary. A chapter of about 1,000 words about the daily life of an unimportant character is written in a series, and it drags out the plot too much.

It feels like a well-written fanfic, because 99% of the online articles nowadays are mindless and cool stories like "There was a flash of jealousy in XX's eyes" and "Don't bully young people who are poor". As long as it is not mindless and cool, it has surpassed 99% of the starting point articles.

I read this novel for a long time. Well, what should I say? Still can't accept it. As a Warhammer 40K player. As expected, I still want to give "Fantasy Township" a big cleanup. The three views follow the five senses. 🤔Very good. But after all, it's just virtual, so what if it's real? But I am human! Don't tell me who is right and who is wrong? This is not important. I am human, you are not human. This is the answer.

I will be very blunt... Any book review that is unfavorable to me will be deleted because it will make me feel better~

I have read twenty chapters, and so far, this is a relatively high-class portrayal of Dior that I have seen. It does not beautify or belittle Dior.

Among the eight works, this one is not included. Only one of them is barely completed. I feel a little panicked after cutting out the others.

You are really a bit panicked. I hope you are not a eunuch:

When I saw this name and introduction, I thought it was a relaxed approach, but in the end I ended up with a mouth full of knives... It was as uncomfortable as happily taking snacks fed by others but never thinking that you would be cut by a knife...

I saw Chapter 6 of Volume 3. How to put it this way, I don't know much about Gensokyo at all, I've never played Dark Souls, and I've never watched an episode of JOJO and Gu Aotian. Also, Ember is so strong in this book, but I never expected that any Original Sin could arm-wrestle with him. Although there have been various explanations, I still feel that the first fire and the king of the abyss are actually very low I originally thought that the chat group fanfic should have a lively or relaxed writing style, but the overall result is more depressive and dark. After reading the comments from my friends in the comment area, I curiously opened the table of contents and the author's words - the chapter published in late June actually had a knife? Ah this. . . .

At present, after reading this latest chapter, I still feel very uncomfortable with this group leader. He can just kill a few passers-by without any problem, and some of the things in the previous article make me really hate this person. To be honest, I don't know much about Dongfang, so I don't know exactly what the first version of Dongfang is like. But for the monster from the east described by the author, I just want to ask if he can die.

If the first half is a sad story about a group of lonely people comforting each other and redeeming each other, Snake Slough 146 gave me a hard blow. What a bullshit sad story. It's just a group of tool people hugging each other to keep warm. Although I guessed that the lust chapter would be outrageous, I didn't expect it to be so outrageous. The original story was not a particularly good story. Whether it's redemption or everything depends on the person in front of the screen, but at least, in From a personal point of view, being with Sylvie in the later period is actually quite warm. Although there will be scumbags in every full illustrated book, this is a game and can be archived, which is an artificial world line. The plot before 46 is getting better, and it can almost be said that everyone will be satisfied. When he is about to play, a back-end ending that no one wants to see is revealed. It's disgusting! Very disgusting! It's not even chocolate-flavored shit or shit-flavored chocolate! It's like Iron Man snapping his fingers and saving everyone, but the Easter egg tells you that Pepper is dead, is that outrageous? Disgusting? I turned off the lights! Oh, after all, I have read the chat group articles. That's not what I want to read. Everyone understands that there is innovation. It is normal to include some private goods. It is also normal to have the author's own ideas. It is normal to be unconventional. But why insist on writing it when you know it is a red flag? Obviously it is not. I know that my novels are not particularly good, and I still want to hide minefields in the novel. I really want to attack the author. What is this? Is it deliberately disgusting? Forget it if it is a free chapter. After it is put on the shelf, you still do this kind of shit. Which subscriber doesn't think "the later chapters are definitely more exciting than the free chapters"? Who would have thought that the free chapters are highlights, while the paid chapters are the highlights? Are you also driving high and walking low? Really, people have no expectations for the follow-up at all. The words are all spoilers, the foreshadowing is thrown in your face, and the amount of information is exploding. Apart from being curious about what the hell the outline is, does the ending make people look forward to it? So far, except for Dio, the villain who has reformed his evil ways and got a good ending, Xingyue doesn't have to fight the Holy Grail War for the time being. Which of the other people will end up better? Needless to say, Ember has already ended. The better thing is that there is someone to accompany him. Shinomiya is just daily life, and the future partner is "forcibly" gone. Yakumo Purple is testing on the edge of despair, and Gensokyo is not here either. I fantasized that One-Punch Man is no longer invincible and has become a 996 social beast, which means that I have replaced working with monsters and 007 when I am busy. Which is really good, Ye Ying is even more amazing. Her own mother has become one of the masterminds behind the scenes. Even the time travel is facilitated by others. All the actions are just to take back that bullshit snake slough. I am a fool and a clown. What are you trying to do?

For me, both Gensokyo and Bone King Rhode Island have no sense of immersion. I don't know what everyone thinks.

Good guy, let me call you an expert. The author Jun finished one of eight books and suddenly started to panic.

To be honest, compared to Bones and Yakumo Purple, I want to chop up the group leader Ye Ying more. The two Japs are more hateful than the Japs, and their attitude of not treating people as human beings really treats other people as NPCs. In essence, she is the same type of person as Bone King, who also has the pot of forced calmness. She is completely indifferent

To put it bluntly, the author is too willful. The original sentence is that I am an arrogant author. The plot itself is really good, but it will be very tiring if I don't accept the author's ideas.

The element bottles in the Black Soul World come from bonfires and have magma-like temperatures. A single sip would be as hot as drinking lava to an ordinary person. Even if the element bottles are useful to ordinary people, they would still feel the same pain as drinking lava. They would be worse off than dead.

I hate this kind of plot where everything is planned by the people above. It would be great if there was a game-breaker that no one expected.

The transitions are too fast, there are too many characters, the ingredients are too thick, and for a person who wants to watch a Dark Souls fanfic, there are too many settings that are difficult to understand. However, I feel that what the author wrote should be quite exciting, and if it is the target audience, it should also be enjoyable to read. I looked at the progress at the Holy Grail, but it was very confusing, so I probably gave up.

I seem to have discovered something. I think I can give myself a thumbs up here.

Fire Bearer

In fact, it's okay, the concept is good, but the writing style... Is too youthful and literary, and the ellipses are really there on every page. I really felt uncomfortable reading it. It's hard to come across a book with a plot that's not too sinister.

I have never played Arknights and I don't know the plot. I can't watch it anymore.

Isn't the author really a tsundere beautiful girl? It's the kind of person who says, "Oh, Zayu readers are so weak that they can't even guess such a simple puzzle." The kind of arrogant and beautiful girl who reluctantly tells you the answer.

dio

I really can't stand it anymore, almost every paragraph has an ellipsis

I've finished reading this and I'm tired of chasing it. Are there any books of the same kind? Don't use the Dihua kind.

Can someone please tell me if there will be many new members in the follow-up group? Because of the setting of the seven deadly sins, I am a little afraid that the members will be fixed. The world is a bit small. JoJo and Xingyue have been solved, and Kaguya and Dark Soul are still daily and have nothing. Only One Punch and Touhou are left. The Touhou plot has not started yet, but One Punch is about to unfold. The world of the group leader has just begun to have a context. Sylvie, I really don't believe the author dares to write. There is no card to play. Should I catch up on the progress or add new people in the follow-up?

It's over, Wuhu, scatter flowers~

Saitama

When I read the seventh volume, I was very confused that what the angels want is the blood of aliens, not the lives and souls of aliens... So how much blood do they need to choose war? Can't they trade peacefully (if they are not willing to trade, threaten to start a war), and they can't kill all the opponents, otherwise they will become exhausted and the angel race cannot continue. It's strange. I have to kill and fight for no reason.