Cultivation of Immortals, Starting with Ten Years of Cultivating Demons

There are probably about the first 20 chapters of this book, and they are really good, especially the part about Tongtian being polite. I was a little confused for a while, but it's not like the leader of Tongtian intercepts the secrets of heaven, and teaches without distinction. I thought that the next step should be to continue to teach the demons, develop the system, build the Biyou Palace, create the Ten Thousand Immortals Formation, recruit many disciples, and happily start the new journey of intercepting the teachings in the other world. However, no, the next lengthy 30 chapters of Youjiang actually include all kinds of weird realm settings that seem to come from a certain book. It was promised that the demon would be raised for ten years, but in the end, 30 of the first 50 chapters were written by a character who appeared to be traveling in the river but was actually the protagonist who pretended to be cool and slapped people in the face... The other minor flaws were not important. The opening setting is really great, but it's a pity that there are only 20 chapters. If you have a system, you need to be small and broad. At the beginning, Yinjiao was given guidance by a mortal body. Yinjiao didn't want to believe it, but he had to give it a try. This was the point of interest, but later on the author increased the protagonist's combat power. It was boring. Isn't it easy for a level 100 large person to guide me as a level 10 newcomer? (The point of interest is gone)

The pace is too fast and it feels like a running account. You can slow down a little and write more carefully. With your Spring and Autumn style of writing, everything is passed in one stroke.

It's a good book, but it's a bit lacking and the plot is a bit slow.

Someone said that your first to third chapters are excellent, but the subsequent plot is really too fast. The content of the original three or four chapters was forcibly shortened into one chapter, making the character description not very perfect. How to describe it, you trained him, came back in the second chapter, and then became your teacher. It feels a bit strange that he is inseparable from life to death all of a sudden.

Golden Chapter Three is very strong. But it doesn't really taste that way at the back. Everyone laughs at Tiancan Tudou's little white text. But how many authors can make their writing "catchy"?

The first three chapters at the beginning are good, I have to admit this! To be honest, I only read Chapter 6 and the beginning of Chapter 4. What the hell is that? Did you buy the first three chapters again? Definitely buy it

Recently there have been a large number of books like Underworld: The Beginning, Cultivation: The Beginning, Fengshen: The Beginning, etc. It feels like they are either written by the same type of books by studios or by AI.

It's so embarrassing to write 😅

A divine beginning. The same follow-up as Xiang. Pity. What a pity

It started fine! Later, when I went out, I pretended to be cool and pretended to be B in every way! Low IQ pretense!

I just can't understand why Yuanying is divided into upper, middle, third and lower three. I was so confused when I saw it. This is the first time I encountered such a chaotic state. The nine top, middle and bottom are nine different ones, but when it comes to you, they are all Nascent Souls.

When I first started reading this book, my eyes immediately lit up. It's not bad. When the carp transformed into a carp, it started to get poisonous. I endured it and continued reading for twenty or thirty chapters. The MMP poison hadn't finished yet. It made me look like I was smiling after seeing it on my face. It was very uncomfortable to be poisoned in my heart from time to time. I wanted to ask if someone had changed?

The more I read, the more boring it becomes and the more it goes wrong. The front part is really good, but the back part is distorted and the messy branch plots appear inexplicably. A big main line appears, the big main line of saving mortals. Brother, are you writing a novel? Is this Xianxia? The more I write, the more speechless I become, but it is still very comfortable to read as a refreshing article.

Nowadays, most online articles feel like they are written by artificial intelligence. They all start well, and then they are all carved from the same mold

You write that you are a saint. Why write so many female protagonists? Does a saint still have three wives and four concubines? You can just go and be the emperor. A saint is a human being, but before him he is still a saint. If you can't write emotional scenes well, write less of them. Poison or not.

A divine beginning! A ghostly follow-up!

The writing is good, come on, you are short of high-quality updates from Lihuo.

Can. Very nice. Come on!

Is it the same author? There is a big difference between the two chapters. The first few chapters are like a breath of spring breeze, but the following chapters are just mechanical and the style is gone.

The author becomes more and more irritable as he writes, and becomes less and less distracted.

It was okay at first, but then it became more and more uncomfortable.

After reading the first three chapters, I felt like it was a masterpiece, something groundbreaking, but then it took a turn for the worse. I couldn't help it after reaching chapter 80. It wasn't that I couldn't read, but the same routine kept appearing. I wanted to be a teacher well, but I kept going downhill?

The previous ones were well written, and they were told in a eloquent way, with Lanke Qiyuan and Tiandao Library being somewhat outstanding. However, starting from more than one hundred and sixty chapters, it seems that the author has changed, and the writing is not as smooth as before. The characters are messy, the key points are not highlighted, and there are too many branches and gaps.

It was okay at first, but then he was poisoned to death

I have just read nearly a hundred chapters. The three views of this book are very upright, there is no such thing as a dog-steer, and it is very comfortable to read a smooth journey. The only drawback is that the new author has limited writing power, blunt turns, and insufficient description of some sad and passionate scenes. If a person needs to be flesh and blood and have a well-proportioned body, then he, the protagonist, must be handsome, not too thin, wearing cropped jeans and no shoes. The characters or the outline are not comprehensive. I just wanted to write about the scenes and characters that appeared in his idea. To be honest, it is really pale. The reader is still unfinished, but it has ended. The reader has just been filled with righteous indignation, but the story is finally over. I lost my temper as soon as I lifted it up, and I didn't feel very happy. The author is recommended to read "Humanity Supreme" by Zhai Zhu. But the flaws do not outweigh the virtues, and as a ration, it is indeed worthy of its reputation.

This level is not bad, so make a reservation.

The subject matter is a good one, and then I wrote it as a nanny article. After nailing it, it was upgraded. If the upgrade is written as (xx is under attack... Xx has been upgraded), the quality can be improved several levels.

It's been a mess ever since I came down the mountain and took over as Lord of the House. What's the point of spending so much effort looking for other people's sisters but not your own?

It's a bit confusing. It's better to open a setting chapter. I didn't understand the various divisions until the end.

Generally speaking, after it is put on the shelves, it must be washed