I Will Do Funerals in the Last Days

Just looking at the introduction, I personally have no interest in it. The reason - regardless of the fact that I don't like the apocalyptic theme in the first place, and in the introduction, I feel that it is the core point of this article, and the driving force is the crematorium system - which in translation is just a necromancer who fights monsters and upgrades. If you really just rely on such a golden finger, you cannot support the whole article. After all, this ability is not coquettish enough, especially in the zombie world, the contrast of necromancy is even less obvious. For example, if it is the same ability to summon the army of Uncle Black holding an AK47, if it were in the Lord of the Rings world, I would find it very interesting. If it were in Africa, it would be just a local warlord. So if you want this article to be interesting, you must either delve into the humanity and pretentiousness of the apocalyptic theme, or you must work hard on the abilities and skeletons to make the protagonist's skills more sexy. By the way, there are many necromancy novels, and I am deeply impressed. There are three works that I think are good - The first is the sacred book "Blasphemy". First of all, the protagonist's necromancer skills are not the only highlight. All the characters are very attractive. At the same time, the protagonist's skeleton "Feng Yue" is even more amazing. From the stupid and weak little skeleton in the beginning to the god-level beauty God of War in the later period, this setting was very trendy ten years ago. The second is a YY novel (Liu Beixiang) with a necromancer as the protagonist. You know, in addition, the protagonist's shady identity, the contrast between the tombkeeper at the beginning and the wives and concubines later, is very satisfying. The third one is a fantasy fantasy in which the protagonist uses a soul-calling umbrella. I haven't read this book, but the setting is very cool and rare, and the mix of the handsome ancient man and the necromancer is very contrasting. Above

Just looking at the introduction, I personally have no interest in it. The reason - regardless of the fact that I don't like the apocalyptic theme in the first place, and in the introduction, I feel that it is the core point of this article, and the driving force is the crematorium system - which in translation is just a necromancer who fights monsters and upgrades. If you really just rely on such a golden finger, you cannot support the whole article. After all, this ability is not coquettish enough, especially in the zombie world, the contrast of necromancy is even less obvious. For example, if it is the same ability to summon the army of Uncle Black holding an AK47, if it were in the Lord of the Rings world, I would find it very interesting. If it were in Africa, it would be just a local warlord. So if you want this article to be interesting, you must either delve into the human nature of the apocalyptic theme and how to dress it up, or you must work hard on your abilities and make the protagonist's skills more eye-catching. By the way, there are many necromancy novels, and I am deeply impressed. There are three works that I think are good - The first is the sacred book "Blasphemy". First of all, the protagonist's necromancer skills are not the only highlight. All the characters are very attractive. At the same time, the protagonist's skeleton "Feng Yue" is even more amazing. From the stupid and weak little skeleton in the beginning to the god-level beauty God of War in the later period, this setting was very trendy ten years ago. The second is a YY novel (Liu Beixiang) with a necromancer as the protagonist. You know, in addition, the protagonist's shady identity, the contrast between the tombkeeper at the beginning and the wives and concubines later, is very satisfying. The third one is a fantasy fantasy in which the protagonist uses a soul-calling umbrella. I haven't read this book, but the setting is very cool and rare, and the mix of the handsome ancient man and the necromancer is very contrasting. Above

After reading it, it started well, but there is no apocalyptic atmosphere, such as the authenticity of human nature, what the apocalyptic environment was like compared to the previous environment, etc.

The new book is released. The protagonist is bitten to death by zombies just after traveling through time. Fortunately, there is a system to extend his life for one day. From then on, he embarks on a journey to kill zombies and summon skeletons to save the human world step by step. Comments are welcome.

There is no scene description, no apocalyptic atmosphere, and throughout the three chapters, it feels like the system has been introduced. Since it is the end of the world, should we describe the dilapidated environment on some streets? If you say that 95% of the world is zombies, then the whole street is basically full of zombies, but the protagonist seems to have easily reached the small supermarket, and then he seems to have collected a few zombies. So where did the zombies go? If you don't like my personal opinion, don't comment!

Goldfinger is pretty good, but regarding Goldfinger, which is the crematorium system, I think it's better to explain it in detail in Chapter 1 or 2. For example, if a zombie lasts for 12 hours, will there be a level system for these zombies? For example, a low-level zombie lasts for 12 hours, and a mid-level zombie lasts for 4 hours. 8 Hours and so on, there are still skeleton brothers. I believe there will be more summoned beast brothers in the following articles. I suggest you mention it at the front. For example: I found a bunch of tags. In addition to the newly activated skeleton monsters, there are also zombie dogs, lickers, and even a very oppressive... Tyrant! It's just that it's gray and the system prompts that it's not unlocked yet. Of course, this is just a temporary imagination. It lists powerful summons that can be unlocked in the future to attract readers to have the desire to read on. Another suggestion is to describe more of the environment. When I first came in, I saw someone mentioned it, to heighten the desperate atmosphere of the zombie world and create a sense of immersion. The plot is okay, a classic zombie world pioneering routine. Keep up the good work~ Look forward to visiting again

The plot setting is very interesting, come on

👀I finished the first chapter. The writing is smooth and there are no big problems with the language. However, it is a system text. It feels like a game copy. There is no scene or character description. Maybe there will be more later. Come on💪work hard💪

This introduction is very attractive to me. Haha, give it a thumbs up. The author's attitude of humbly accepting suggestions and learning must be accurate. I will definitely sign up for stable updates.

Come on, come on, shouldn't the fat house be called Feizhi or Feisen? (ಡωಡ)