Black Sand Sword Master

This book is ruined! Using your own logic to analyze the world of Xianxia is the highlight. But dozens of consecutive chapters are devoted to analyzing the world, which is called obsession. Even if the online article is not enjoyable to read, it still depends on the characters and plot. The plot is basically not advanced in dozens of chapters, so who will read it?

This is about the changes of the great era, but in a world where you can practice martial arts and change many things, the protagonist, as a small character, has been slow to upgrade, and is very active in scientific research and development of his imagination. When he is finished, he will report it to the sect and develop the market. As a world with the background of cultivation, I have skipped all these things you wrote, and now I have no desire to jump. The main reason is that the protagonist's status is neither high nor low, he has no freedom and is suppressed for nothing, but he is still willing to do so. This is too realistic. His various contributions are taken over by others and he has to continue to contribute. Who wants to watch this kind of plot? The writing is not very deep. In the end, the reason why I couldn't watch it was because of the comparison, the changes of the times, and the development of various imaginations. It is somewhat similar to Fang Xiang's "The World of Cultivation" and "Five Elements of Heaven", but the storyline is that people are affectionate and righteous, and you are so willing to be squeezed. I've read it so many times that I'm speechless when the main character contributes a lot and the reward is small, but he still contributes next time. If the environment is researched and not exposed, it is not good for oneself to use it. Up to now, it is still building the foundation. The materials for the natal magic weapon must continue to be contributed, so as to develop a divine motor, which is still exposed and sold. Jianlu's contribution is enough to be escorted to Yuanying and even to the gods, and it's not like this sect can't afford it. The result is still foundation building.

It doesn't have the ethereal ease of classical fairy tales, and it doesn't have the excitement of time travel. It's not about being stubborn, and it's not a comedy about farming and cultivating immortals. This book is really unappealing.

You can read it with your mind in mind. Many books nowadays are too impetuous and the same. You can read this book patiently. I'm so disgusted that I can't stand it anymore. You go your own way, be tolerant to the author and support them more instead of complaining. After all, the pen is in someone else's hand. If you can't stand it anymore, turn it off and look for it again. Don't be like a resentful woman. They confiscate your money again.

This book is very detailed and contains a lot of various contents. However, it feels very boring, just like a textbook. Furthermore, the book tells the truth and has a lot of negative energy, which makes it very uncomfortable to read. In fact, after the content is laid out, it does not need to be so detailed, and it will be very boring to read. Another very criticized thing is that the protagonist is really His strength has always been sluggish, and he feels frustrated most of the time. Moreover, the protagonist's shortcoming has always been the lack of computing power, but the protagonist seems to ignore it. Whether it is to create a magic weapon to assist calculations or to directly improve the spiritual power, there is no such idea. It makes people feel that the asphalt road is next to it, and you just have to crawl on the dirt road next to it, which is very speechless. Then let's talk about the issue of three views. The protagonist's three views are not in line with the world and the sect. However, in the end, what kind of trend it is has not been explained. It is repeated over and over again. It looks very distorted and even a little disgusting. Then this book actually has a hint of Gou Daoliu, but the protagonist often makes some actions that are not in line with the positioning, so it is difficult to criticize. In many places, if it is not written in such detail or simply blames the blame on the system, it will make Gou Daoliu appear more reasonable. Then there is the issue of power. Strictly speaking, there is nothing wrong with the system, but it is obvious that each one is independent and does not care about anything, but it must be written as if the world is unified. This is difficult to grasp without certain skills, and it is quite uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, the world is like a sieve, and anyone can do it twice. Then this Tianji Sect is unreasonable. In the past, it was necessary to fight against foreign races, but after defeating the foreign races, I don't understand how Tianji Sect can still grow. There is a price for spying on Tianji, and the price is borne by the human race as a whole. If nothing else, the four great sects are How can a group with the intention of protecting human practitioners tolerate the growth of the Tianji Sect, and in the article, the Tianji Sect is like a dumpling to disgust the protagonist, and the Sword Sect, if it is clever, then forget it, but it is like cheating, it is just disgusting and makes people uncomfortable. Last but not least, if the protagonist is not a wise man, at least he should not make stupid mistakes all the time, and many of them are very low-level mistakes, just...

It's not fun at all. Such a good golden finger is completely wasted by the protagonist! The whole novel is full of the author's complaints and dissatisfaction with his company. The protagonist in the novel is a wage earner full of negative energy, who keeps complaining that the company is not good, and it is not good here or there! It doesn't have the spirit of a time traveler holding a golden finger. The whole article is very frustrating to read!

The Five Elements Wasted Body, why is it always written this way? The more I read it, the more annoying it becomes.

Traveling through the Douluo, he was bullied by Bibi Dong at the beginning, and directly summoned Queen Medusa. Queen Medusa fought against Pope Bibi Dong, and the Douluo battle was broken. The beautiful Flame Spirit Princess, Hyuga Hinata, and the goddesses of the heavens were all summoned to the Douluo world by the protagonist. Want to know who is better, Cai Lin or Bibi Dong? Come and take a look, just click in and watch. Starting from Douluo to draw the goddess

As an old bookworm, I would like to comment that the idea is good, but you really ruined it. The biggest flaw is that every time the plot advances, there are a lot of explanations, setting backgrounds and nonsense. It completely loses the imagination and the sense of substitution. In addition, the character setting of the protagonist should be wise and decisive at the beginning, but later it became hesitant. Mother-in-law, there is too much inner drama.

It is obviously a very good auxiliary system, but for the sake of plot and story, the difficulty is deliberately created. From the beginning of the mortal city, you should know what kind of world this is ⊙_⊙I finally got to Sword Sect, and I didn't want to improve my strength and buy equipment, so I had to fight some monsters. In a sword sect that doesn't learn how to forge magic weapons and flying swords, it's clear that the sword hut is the best place, and then it drags on building the foundation instead of improving the cultivation level. What realm doesn't the library pavilion teach? What to do? What to mention? . You have to force yourself to add drama and create some kind of five-element waste body, but what does this have to do with the title of your book, Black Shark Sword Master? He had obviously experienced a battle to exterminate the sect, and was almost killed by a fox. He even ran over to adjust some formations, without thinking about improving himself. It is clearly a big change and a big crisis. Some masters don't ask how to improve their cultivation, but insist on doing it themselves, because the people who traveled back in time are superior to others and look down on others. What should I say? It's a good start. You can make a sword out of sand and match your name. Oh, forget it -_-||

This book should be called: Da Zhuang is the protagonist's father's spiritual practice career

It's not as fun to read as a cool novel, it's an old story, it's delicate but not written, and the characters are full of features A clichéd "kind" protagonist, and endless sinister villains. Always gets the benefit of being cast in a supporting role. It really embodies the frustration of beating workers. Suggested name change, "The Workers Behind the History of Strong Growth"

Protagonist

I like to complain too much. You complained when you were a mortal, you complained after you entered the sect, and you still complain when you have some power. What is the meaning of these complaints? Can the eyes only see ugliness but not beauty? Or are you thinking about a dream paradise? In real life, it is difficult to break down the hierarchy, but in the novel, with such a strong golden finger, how come there are still so many negative emotions? With Golden Finger, if you are dissatisfied with the status quo, you can sit at the top and change it yourself. But in this novel, we only see compassion and compassion on the lips, but in reality, there is no change and selfishness.

Please call me when it started to feel good, now it's too outrageous. The main character is a problem from beginning to end. The protagonist is a real gem. Ranked in the middle and lower reaches of the same level. The upgrade speed is not fast either. There are so many ideas, one in the east and one in the west. It reflects the development speed of full length very well. All aspects of development in the early and mid-term are really useless.

This is really the first time I have seen this kind of fairy tale that talks a lot of nonsense. Seeking the Demon Immortal Reversal has a tragic fate and a bleak future, but the protagonist is tenacious and can continue reading. However, in your book, the protagonist is always complaining. It is okay to vent his complaints appropriately. The key point is that the protagonist has poor qualifications and keeps saying that the system is broken. The protagonist's friend is also a peerless genius. It's disgusting to deliberately create such a contrast.

Nowadays, most books like to give a golden finger to an awesome character and then suppress the protagonist in various ways.

Let's put it this way, after reading more than a hundred chapters, I have a very serious feeling, blah blah blah blah... Sometimes the author's tone of voice is explaining this and that throughout the whole article. A Maoxuewang wrote a chapter and said that he had water, but he didn't seem to have water either. It's just annoying, like mosquitoes buzzing in your ears. Often I just skip a few pages and it has no impact at all. Goldfinger doesn't even know what he's smoking

What the hell are you writing? Just put some rice on the keyboard and even chickens can write better than you, tui

I think I've finished reading it. To sum up, if you want to read a fun story, don't click here. The protagonist is very, very frustrated from the beginning to the end 😭. The author's writing in the early stage is even worse, and you have to stack up a thick layer of poison resistance to read it. In the later stage, the writing is much better, but it's still not that exciting. He is either being plotted against or on the way to being plotted against. As for the advantages, the advantage is that the author is very thoughtful and likes to think and research? I feel like I can look forward to the author's new book.

Really, there are too many explanations, just like an expository essay. The plot can't be moved forward. I write the same scene over and over again, killing my interest. There is no summary of the improvement in strength, so readers cannot see the changes in strength. On the one hand, I can beat the gods, but on the other hand, I am beaten by the golden elixir. It is very messy.

I feel like there are too many explanations. Once a book is set, the plot is described around the setting instead of repeated explanations. It's not a mystery novel, so it's not interesting at all.

Things that were originally very good, all good things, are all because the protagonist has turned bad, and there is no theme in the whole text, just a hammer in the east and a stick in the west.

There are no girls, no swords, no heroic ambitions. All that is left in the book is exploration and a sense of peace.

The strength is confusing, the plot is confusing, only the main plot is clear, and the strength is greatly improved for a while, and then it is unable to go all out for various reasons, and it is impossible to beat it, which makes it a headache to watch.

There is really a reason why it is not popular. I feel uncomfortable even before finishing the free chapter.

The company cleaner complains about his life after time travel. The immortal swordsman uses fire to ask you if you are afraid?

The author's brain circuit is really strange and should not be poisoned.

Just skipping and reading, there's a lot of nonsense. If you don't practice swordsmanship, you just act like a little brother. The system takes advantage of the protagonist and gets useless feedback.

This book should be renamed: A Worker's Way of Complaining Or: I don't know anything and the system helps me learn knowledge Or: In a different world, those who play with swords modify their swords What the hell is this?