Barbaric Heaven-Mending Man

The author creates a book club, trust me.

It's a bit miserable, I can't even find pirated copies

I feel like this book must be huge🔥, come here to take a look

After reading the first three chapters, I don't talk about the subject matter and whether it's good or not. It's too long-winded. All three chapters are long-winded, such as this passage in the first chapter The wild continent is vast and boundless. The vast forest sea is vast and boundless. Deep in the mountain forest, there are towering ancient trees and jagged rocks. Except for the occasional roar of beasts or two from deep in the valley, and the crisp calls of unknown birds on the top of the giant trees, the mountain forest is quite quiet. A short boy who seemed to be twelve or thirteen years old, his face and hands were smeared with green grass juice, wearing a hat ring made of ivy, holding an iron gun in his hand, and the cat was under a mess of vines. There was some dust and grass clippings stuck to his clothes, and some places were even scratched by sharp thorns, making him look a little embarrassed. Beside him were a pair of bows and arrows, a shovel, several ropes of different lengths and thicknesses, hooks, barbed wire and soft nets, as well as some iron caltrops and multi-headed spike-like objects contained in small packages. His face turned blue and black due to grass juice, and his eyes were not big, but they had a bright black luster. Occasionally, a flash of luster flashed through, like stars that were not dazzling but deep in the night sky. These small and slightly narrowed eyes were staring at a trail ahead. It is said to be a trail, but it is just a gap between the big trees, rocks, vines and thorns, winding like a road, not a real artificial passage. The short boy has been here for nearly three hours. When he first arrived here, he judged from traces such as footprints, breath, and scattered hair that a third-level silver-spotted pig weighing more than 300 kilograms should have passed here in the early morning to look for food elsewhere. He had already followed the traces and found the temporary cave where the wild pig lived not far away. The cave is quite hidden, covered by vines, and a stream flows by the cave. I think this silver-spotted pig will not let go of such a suitable place for living easily, and will definitely return after eating. What he has to do is to wait for the "pig" There are many sentences in this that can be deleted

This author is Emperor Perseverance! Although I don't know how the book is

I read a little bit and it's well written. Why is it so miserable?

Why don't you sign the contract? Is it because you can't sign or you don't want to sign?

I feel that the author's performance is very unstable. There are times when the writing makes people forget to leave, and other times it is like chewing wax. For example, the section about the Holy Land is completely incomprehensible, or it is a hidden line that has no connection between the previous and the following.

Author: There is no need to always play up the drama of the savior arriving at the end Currently, I am watching the scene of the sect competition. How many times in the previous plots was it not the protagonist who arrived at the end to save the whole scene? It's really too frequent The competition part is also about showing the enemy weakness by showing the enemy weakness. It has been a routine from entry to competition. If you don't want to expose all your strength, you can't win cleanly in the middle. It's just a routine. It's very annoying to watch. I skipped the part about Xiaojing defending the ring In fact, the writing is still okay. Apart from the above mentioned, there is nothing else to say.

Very well written, keep it up✊

It's already pretty good, but why is there no one…

I really admire you for being so excited because of your interest.

You can consider going to other sites. After all, I haven't signed a contract yet. I've written a million words. I can just find a site where I can sign a contract.

What's next for Jingjing girl?

The writing is okay, but it's a pity that it's not very popular. Wo has a way to make this book visible to more readers, Wo Wei: CCJCCJ129