Chaos Heavenly Emperor Technique

I read this book from the first year of junior high school to the second year of college. It gave me the feeling that this book is like a cook with poor skills, who just turned a pot of ingredients that should be fragrant into a pot of sticky and rancid swill. The plot of the lower realm is full of meaningless scene recurrences, and the plot is fragmented. I write whatever comes to my mind. When Ling Feng ascended to the Immortal Realm, I was very curious as to why he brought Yue Yunlan, Tuoba Yan and others with him. Their combat power and talent could not keep up at all. They have no intersection with Ling Feng in the main line of the Immortal Realm. This kind of plot is purely redundant. The characters are flat and consistent, like stiff cardboard. If you are a woman, you will like the protagonist. Going to a secret place and the protagonist must be the biggest profiteer. The villain is responsible for mindless provocations, and the protagonist is responsible for pretending to be a slap in the face. The protagonist upgrades too quickly, and the early characters cannot keep up. New female followers and enemies appear within a few chapters. The characters are just names and have no flesh and blood. The plot of the Immortal Realm later is pretty good, with foreshadowing and suspense, but the character creation is still poor. In the plot where Ling Feng and Yu Bingqing meet in the secret realm, the character motivations are entirely to serve the plot rather than their own logic. Why did Ling Feng take the risk to save a person who is not a man of heaven? Yu Bingqing, as the princess of the Great Yu Immortal Court, lived hundreds of years, but fell in love with a stranger just because she was saved. Is it reasonable? As for Ling Feng accepting love and being with Yu Bingqing, it is even more outrageous. Maybe the author will later write about Ling Feng's memory recovery and think of Mu Qianxue, and then write about the two women being jealous or full of conflicts. But do you think you can really grasp this kind of emotional drama? When I was a kid, I bought a jar of honey. The first few spoonfuls were so sweet that I wanted to lick the lid clean. But as I ate it, I tasted a bit of rancidity. I thought it was an illusion. How could such fragrant honey go bad? So I continued to eat. The color of the honey began to darken and impurities began to appear. My brows became more and more frowned. But when I saw that more than half of the honey was left, I thought about the money I spent to buy the honey and how sweet it was before. I gritted my teeth and swallowed spoonful after spoonful, thinking that I would stop eating after finishing the jar. When I almost scraped the bottom of the jar with a spoon, and the thick, dark brown syrup stuck to the spoon, I suddenly discovered that the honey had deteriorated, and those impurities were clearly shriveled insect corpses. Looking at the remaining bits of honey at the bottom of the jar, I no longer had an appetite. I just felt that it smelled disgusting, and it no longer had the same fragrance as when I first bought it.

Brother, I hope you can write more about female protagonists. There are more than 3,000 photos and there is no one with a confirmed relationship. Even if you don't want to write like Zhong Ma, you still have to write it. Do you really want him to be alone until the finale?

The description of too many details in the fight is long, verbose, not tightly paced, and has a poor sense of reality (although it is originally a fantasy and fiction). It lacks the sense of ups and downs, lightning, and fighting for every detail! This point can be learned from the novel Shen Jian's Invincible World.

This book gave me the feeling that the writing was okay, but the front part was too long, giving people a rather repetitive feeling. I skipped through it, and I probably read it from Chunzi Shenquan to the back. I felt that the writing was pretty good, but when I read the front part, I felt it was a bit repetitive. I am currently reading the front part. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write more good works. I also wish the author will become famous soon.

It's great that the author can write to this level. I think this is a good book, and I, a bookworm of ten years, approve of it. Although it still has some holes to fill, overall it's still very good. Come on, author!

You have perseverance, you really have so much perseverance. In fact, author, you can finish it. The new era has come. The old generation's pretense, slap in the face, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers is no longer enough. The era of invincible flow, Zhutian flow, and system flow is rampant. If you keep dragging on without changing, you will be eliminated. , I think with your code strength, you can definitely make Zhutian Liu popular, and Zhu Tian Liu is also relatively simple, copy here and there, and finally open up your brain to learn how to project Zhu Tian. (The author is not guaranteed day and night) You can definitely become popular in Zhu Tian with the strength of these two.

Ling Feng, please have a higher emotional intelligence.

Now that we have martial arts secrets and a lot of training resources, why does the protagonist still run around like a local dog?

When will Mu Qianxue and Ling Feng's children appear again? And when can Ling Feng establish a relationship with Yue Yunlan, Tuoba Yan, and Miss Yu?

Updates are too slow and the author is too unprofessional!

If you write well, no one will follow you.

This book has been following me for three years. It is generally good. I hope the author can update it as soon as possible😍😍

The update is too slow. I squeeze the toothpaste like this and I don't know if I have to write until the Year of the Monkey and the Month of the Horse

Hurry up and close the case. No one will read you if you write new books over and over again.

No, where was this written? Why is it that the more you write, the more outrageous and biased you become? Forget it, let's let the memory stay in Dongling Domain, Tianbai Empire, Yue Yunlan, Tuoba Yan, Mu Qianxue, Lin Xianer, alas! It's a bit disappointing to write such a big and good layout like this.

Comrade author, can I update three times a day? Don't be lazy!

I can't stand it anymore. The more I write, the more boring I become.

This book contains a lot of foreshadowings, all of which are reflected in the following chapters. This is very good.

It's so frustrating, hurry up and finish writing it.

Didn't the God-killing Spear merge with the Chiyuan Star Copper until all directions were destroyed? Why is it so dilapidated?

There are too many dramas that everyone loves.

It's so easy to clear out an undercover agent! Just take 9 god points and go to Shangcheng District to grab the treasure troves of several big families! Anyway, it can be teleported to you instantly! Aren't level 1 priests walking sideways in the upper area? The crystals obtained through robbery can be upgraded again! There are more things that viewers like to see!

Updates are too slow, can I do three chapters a day?