Planeswalker: My Plane War

Yes, it is my favorite classic game Isekai. However, there are a few suggestions that the author can refer to. ① The beginning is too bland and wordy, and completely inconsistent with the beginning of the three golden chapters. Otherwise, if the author had a million-word book, I would have abandoned it. It is recommended to reduce psychological activities, and do not let the protagonist speculate about why he traveled through time, as it would delay the rhythm of the plot too much. Hurry up and enter the initial boss phase, defeat monsters and unlock golden fingers. I also suggest that you explain the specific functions of the golden finger. Can you add some more? Can I exchange something? And it can't be too weak, otherwise it won't be enough. Then the protagonist is a bit clueless in the early stage. You can set up a long-term main mission, such as upgrading and becoming stronger, or saving a beloved plot character (Amber flow), or defeating the mastermind behind the big devil. I don't recommend choosing a main storyline that requires you to go home. It's too boring and has nothing to do with the plot. Finally, it is suggested that in the early stage, especially the new book period, it is best not to let the protagonist feel too depressed, suppress it first, and then promote it immediately. ②Since it is set in the Chinese Western Zhou Dynasty, don't use Western fantasy terms, as it feels too inconsistent. The mage can be replaced by an alchemist, and the magic power can be replaced by mana, spiritual power and the like. ③It's best to ask for recommendations, it feels too deserted. You can go to the Qidian author group and ask the big guys to help you divert traffic. The wine is fragrant but the alley is too deep. I can also help you promote the book on the public account. It is recommended to submit an article to the public account of Chiji's Book Relief Center. It is very popular and does not charge money. The author can also be in the front row if he submits his own contribution.

Catch up on the latest, some personal opinions. Some authors' repeated emphasis seems cumbersome. You can hardly see the growth of the protagonist. The current situation pushes the protagonist, but rarely see the protagonist's thinking, and lacks obvious purpose. It seems too confused. In some clips, the protagonist's intellectual performance is somewhat inconsistent with the character and background settings. The large number of realistic clips in the later period are basically purely set for fun and have no effect on the advancement of the plot. As far as my personal taste is concerned, these plots in the real world are obviously inferior to the content in the Inurong world. Personal opinion.

The author's writing skills are good, the plot can be easily controlled, and the writing is quite good. However, there may be a slight lack of promotion. For example, this book is not included in the new book list, recommendation list, and click list, let alone the platform's own recommendation position, Sanjiang, and others. So few new readers know that after seeing this book, the readership may grow slowly. I hope the author will not be discouraged and continue to persevere. Because there are indeed some books at the top of the list that are rarely recommended, but have gradually accumulated a considerable readership due to their excellent plots and writing. After all, although this platform has many problems that make everyone hate it, before new replacements appear, it still has the largest popularity, visits, and user base. With the author's writing skills and plot, if other authors recommend it on the book list in the future, it will attract many readers. I personally feel that this book will be of varying degrees of interest to readers in other fields besides fairy tales and female comics. Another suggestion is that the author can ask for recommendations at the beginning and end of each chapter, or the chapter title. Come on!

I saw the middle part despite all kinds of poison, but I really couldn't accept it later. Your fireball spell was as powerful as a mortar, but the monster that couldn't be killed by the fireball spell was shot to death by that Baizuo woman... I feel like you are starting to disrespect my IQ, so I won't continue reading...

This literary idea and world view are top-notch, and in the hands of a master, it can be very brilliant. But except for these two points, everything else is lackluster. The plot is cliche, and the narrative is straightforward and has no rhythm control. The writing style is also dry and there is nothing attractive about it. The details all depend on the intelligence of the protagonist and supporting characters. The author's personal opinions often appear in articles. The author seems to be still in school and lacks some common sense in life. It's really great for newcomers to have this idea and world view. I hope that I can polish my writing skills and life experience more, and I will definitely write better in my next book.

I'm starting to hate this policeman's sister. I'm a soft-spoken person but not a tough one.

I can't stand it anymore when I write about it abroad. It's so disgusting. Sister policewomen, this otaku fantasy of a 78-year-old man makes me want to vomit. You use the DND system to play with firearms. There are countless complaints. Please Baidu. Countless people have compared the DND magic of firearms. Can you die if you do research in this field? In 2000, I read you as a book for people who read it. After reading your story, I basically stopped reading online articles in a few years! Well

If you play less games and update more, people who read books should become great gods long ago.

A stranger and a foreigner comes to find out your details, take advantage of you and threaten you. Just because she is a woman, the protagonist is afraid of all kinds of things? Please don't admit it if you know magic. If it were a man who probed and threatened to take advantage, do you think you could survive two chapters? It's a dead end in one chapter. Does the author still think it's reasonable?

? Why write about a cunning and cunning little girl who deprives the male protagonist of his interests? The protagonist became a planeswalker but his IQ dropped to -50.

Western Zhou Dynasty + dnd + amber flow, just these few elements are stacked together, and it feels like it is already a difficult novel to write. As a result, we still need to stack up the real-life PVP of the big sniper game. The author, you are just busy stacking buffs. There are many and confusing elements, and they conflict with each other and reduce the enjoyment. To go with this unappealing title. . . . Author, you are really brave. . .

I started to persuade you to quit. There is really a lot of nonsense. In war, you also need to be surrounded in all directions. The center is blooming. Why are you focusing on everything? It's all self-pleasure.

Now that I am reading Chapter 73, there is an obvious problem. The protagonist is just a tool and has no ideas of his own. The protagonist's intelligence, personality, and habits all follow the plot. The protagonist is set to be a game master. He ignores the small balls that appear inexplicably in the room and sweeps them into the trash. Then he avoids being stolen. There is no connection between the past and the future The protagonist is sometimes cautious and sometimes reckless. Each new plot can be said to be a brand new protagonist, which has no connection with the previous protagonist. It is like constantly changing the protagonist based on whims. It is not even as continuity as the supporting roles. After all, Dr. Wu is the same person until the lunch box. Unfortunately, several protagonists have been changed during this period.

There are some small poisonous points in the middle that I can tolerate, but the biggest problem is that the protagonist has no intelligence, which is really annoying. I say goodbye.

The plot of this book is pretty good, but I don't know how to describe the main character's brain circuitry. Two things I have seen so far: 1. Manzhu, throwing it around without taking it seriously, and then believing whatever others say on the Internet, this is not powerful enough, it should have died ten thousand times. 2. Wild bandit is a person who has a basic IQ and should understand what the word means as soon as he hears it. He is so stupid that he can't react for a long time? Is this an ordinary person? This is mentally retarded! If this strange brain circuit is an ordinary person, then I have to wonder if it is humiliating all readers.

A lot of people will probably be put off by the first few pictures 🙂 and for some reason they don't want to read it.

The author talks too much nonsense. The first chapter discusses logic, philosophy and metaphysics for a long time. . . How do people travel to a game world? At the beginning of the second chapter, first of all, this is not the country of China, so why did you analyze the entire first chapter for a long time and analyze it to a fault? Damn it, I almost missed it. It's like Di Renjie saw a corpse and asked Yuan Fang what he thought. After careful consideration, Yuan Fang said, Sir, I judge that this person is dead. The feeling is the same.

I meet female police officers all day long and get into trouble. Is this what the author likes?

There's so much nonsense, I'm reading a novel, I don't need you to spread knowledge to me!

It sucks? Although it has always been terrible, it is only in vain that the creativity and writing are so good, but the story telling is a mess, and the characters of the male and female protagonists are disgusting.

I don't understand. I've reached level 8 in both professions, but my personal attributes haven't changed at all. So what's the point of upgrading?

Lv2 . . The author of the novel Necromancer which was so popular back then. Now I can't even take exams and write novels to support myself. Poor Mo Ye. And the poor priestess

The new book is released again. Have you read it?

The protagonist was originally supposed to develop in Faerûn in DND. Later, there was a movie where he went to the world of Harry Potter and transformed into a little boy, developed the Philosopher's Stone, which could bring him back to life, and then helped Snape resurrect his lover, Harry's mother. There were a few chapters where Snape became Harry's stepfather, and then there was Dumbledore's sister. After resurrecting, he went to Faerun with his lover, the first generation Dark Lord, to adventure. Lao Deng met a pretty boy who was a priest of the god of love, and then he was killed by the pretty boy as No. 0 Guaranteed 2 million words Forgot the title of the book Please tell me the title of the book if you have read it Thank you very much