Swordsman Climbing the Mountain

I am determined, I must finish all the contents of this book and post it as proof.

For me personally, the author's writing style is undoubtedly what I like. The first chapter depicts a difficult scene of traveling under the cold and heavy snow. It is also a very good idea to describe it from an overhead perspective. It not only exaggerates the difficulty of the environment but also vaguely reveals the plot of the subsequent attack. It has a feeling of "Temple on the Snowy Mountain". In the end, it is also a very good idea to use before and after writing. In the second chapter, the protagonist and his party are attacked, and the setting of Sheng Zhao is introduced, which once again supplements the deficiencies in the plot. The emergence of new concepts also enhances the readability of the article and attracts the readers' attention. However, the full text of Chapter 3 is more about the development of the battle plot, which is relatively monotonous. The setting of the main character's trap only appeared in Chapter 4 (I accidentally read one more chapter). Overall, the novel's environment is good, but the main plot is relatively slow. The plot of the characters does need to be studied, but the main plot is unclear. The written and spoken language of some contents has lowered the literary talent. But overall, it gives the impression that as a new author, it is still good.

Personally, I feel that the characters are very messy, and the world view setting is not very clear. I don't like this kind of setting, it looks tiring.

After reading the first three chapters, the writing and story are good. However, the appearance of the young Jiang Que needs to be reconsidered. His abilities are a bit too abrupt. It may be better to add some supporting character descriptions to profile the protagonist. Come on💪work hard💪 welcome mutual comments

I have been busy with my affairs recently and cannot take care of them all at the same time. Moreover, the writing is not in line with what I expected. I broke my promise. I feel very ashamed.

The new book "My Years as an Errand in Fengdu Prefecture" is released. Please stop and thank you.