Bring on More Curses

The solution is so simple, why does the protagonist have to complicate it???? The first one just went there and confessed his love. He had to pretend to have cancer. The second one was not willing to give up even two thousand yuan...

The chapters about the fight in the night market and the lesson about the naughty kid in the park made me sick.

I feel like this book is full of chapters, so please think about whether you want to waste your time reading it.

I'm thinking, what would happen if I started by touching the sea water at the beach?

If you were attracted by the name, you won't read much, probably about a dozen chapters. Of course, I haven't read much, but I still have something to say about this book. First of all, let's talk about the setting of this story and other issues. The novel tells the story of the male protagonist who triggered the curse system due to a curse from the other party and embarked on a different path in life. The story is not set in a so-called alien world, but in a semi-empty modern city. This way of writing is actually very flattering. Once it's written, you can include some personal stuff to show your arrogance as a literary person. If it's not written well... Then the plot will completely collapse. So when I saw the semi-empty background, I became interested. But then, this book did not bring me much surprise. Of course, maybe it's because I've been exposed to this genre a lot, so there's not much freshness to it. So, the question is, what type is this type? In fact, this is a variant system genre that has been popular for several years, and is now considered a major genre. However, this kind of restriction is so great that many books in the later period are unfinished, but in the early stage they are very good, and as long as they are successful, they will be high-quality products and thousands of orders will be ordered. As I just said, the upper limit of this kind of book is very obvious. For example, in the early stage, it is very enjoyable to write around the mission and the protagonist, but in the later stage, when there are suddenly more emotional lines and other things other than the mission, the effect will be backlashed. So I say that the author is very clever. He avoids the systematic things in the market. Instead, he uses a light and ordinary way to introduce the system curse mission through sudden changes in daily life, and allows the protagonist to succeed through very unorthodox methods. So, if we talk about the setting alone, I can say that the little unexpected arrangement of this book will make readers continue reading. But if you want to achieve results, these alone are not enough. Everything mentioned above is just a condiment, nothing more. So for the plot part, after I thought it started to be interesting, I carefully read the part I read. In my evaluation of this, innovation must retain its core content, otherwise it is not a revolution, but a borrowed egg. Why did I say that? It is because the author stated in the introduction that this is a more everyday writing style. But once people are curious, they will wonder, delve deeper, and even exaggerate their expectations. This book gave me the feeling that it was too everyday, as if I was not reading a book about urban supernatural beings, but instead felt like I was reading a light novel about a different world love story. But this way of writing does make both the author and the reader comfortable. But once you take condiments as a staple food, they will make you feel bored, so when I read more than a dozen chapters, I thought that if the author just wants to practice writing, he can write whatever he wants, but if he wants to achieve results, he must make changes. We must break out of today's strange cycle of accidents in stories, accidents becoming problems, and the hero unexpectedly solving the problems. My suggestion is to borrow some writing methods and settings from the original routine, and then combine them to take another path. Of course, regarding this illusion, I checked the author page and found that I had opened two pirate fanfics before, so everything can be understood. The writing method of light novels is to focus on daily life and supplement with tasks. The main tasks are used to promote the refinement of the plot and characters. But you only wrote tens of thousands of words in your second book. I don't know why you stopped writing. But I know very well that if a routine is no longer taken seriously, it means that the market no longer recognizes this routine. As an author, you need to carefully understand what the market needs and what you want. So, I like the current plot of this book, but as a reader, what I hope is not a talented person who slowly becomes decadent because he wants to stay in his comfort zone. So, again, reading more, thinking more and writing more is the best way to go. As for the characters in this book, I can only say one thing. The male protagonist and the system are very CP. Should the author give it another thought? And the other characters may be the reason why I didn't see anything and remember the character names. Finally, let me tell you how this book made me feel. You can read novels, but you can also see where the upper limit is. So if the author reads this, you might as well try to make some changes according to your own rhythm and progress. Maybe you can rely on this book to make a turnaround. Of course, you can continue to write at your own pace, but you have to remember that people who stay in their comfort zone will only become lazier and lazier. Finally, if the author likes and is comfortable with today's daily writing, why not try romance writing, which may open new doors for you. Okay, I haven't read too many novels, so I don't dare to comment too much. I'll just briefly write about what I saw. Finally, I wish the author a great success in this book! Let the author become a god in one book.

It's a pretty standard cool article, basically not poisonous. It's just that when you take revenge on the family named Wu, you always feel that it's not handled properly.

If the protagonist of this book has a normal IQ, he will be omniscient and omnipotent in the first chapter. Otherwise, he has a problem with his IQ. This kind of subject is useless.

If you think it's ok, please invest a little bit.

It's been two days. I haven't seen anyone for two days.

Ada