I Am Nalan Yanran in Dou Po

I just discovered this book in the past two days, so I'll write a longer review. I prefer the direction of the plot. It doesn't engage in cheating and fighting style, but balances planning among multiple parties. I also have my own opinions on the characters, although sometimes it is suspected of being illicit. It's true that after reading so many Dou Po fans, few of the Dou Po fans can write well, and it's difficult to compare with the original work. Finding another way may lead to more interesting developments. Then looking at the meaning of today's release, I didn't plan for the protagonist to become the Fighting Emperor, which means that Xiao Yan must rely on Xiao Yan to fight against the Soul Emperor in the end. It seems that the author intends to use a love triangle to hang Xiao Yan. I don't have any objection to this. It seems to be quite interesting to handle it well. I also find it interesting that the author adjusts the character. I I have always felt that fans do not need to completely copy the settings of the original work. It is definitely a good thing to make some adjustments to some settings that do not shake the overall core. For example, many people complained about the collapse of combat power after the Dou Sheng. I think it is a good idea to delete the Dou Sheng or similarly compress the level gap, and the yandere Xun'er thinks about it. Then there is the planning part that I have some opinions on. The direction of this plot seems to be a bit urgent. The protagonist has just broken through to the Fighter level. Xiao Yan has just reached the Fighter level, and he has to directly confront Shang Yunshan and Soul Palace. Judging from the author's intention, it seems that he also intends to trick the Gama Empire. This means that at this stage, the protagonist has no high-level combat power as a basis except Yun Yun, and Yun Yun is not the protagonist's thug. Hai Bodong only helps. Referring to the original work, Hai Bodong is not willing to take action when he encounters Douzong-level Yunshan. Fama, I don't know how the author set up the blood alliance, but it seems that it means that there is an obligation to make alchemy. If you really want to fight against the level of Douzong or Jia Xingtian, you will probably have to be timid. Are you going to solve the problem with nothing but a white wolf? This is too easy to overturn. Although it is not impossible to write, it always feels very unnatural. For example, if Yunshan is killed and Jia Xingtian backhands the matter, the protagonist is basically finished. Yunshan has not done anything yet. It is difficult for even Yun Yun to get on the protagonist's side. Unless the character is broken, Jia Xingtian can control the protagonist at any time with this card. Why should the Jiama royal family take the blame and be destroyed by the Soul Palace? Without Yunshan, Jia Xingtian Xing Tian easily killed Yun Yun, and since he had Nalan Yanran's handle, the Yun Lan Sect would not attack directly, and the Soul Palace certainly had no particular preference for the Yun Lan Sect. Gama could definitely become the next collaborator, and the Falcon Guardian was not a big shot. Besides, people from the Heavenly Snake Mansion should be the ones to kill him, so Gama could completely eliminate them. And even if the Soul Palace didn't care about the small force like Garma and wiped it out conveniently, Garma didn't take action against the Yunlan Sect. The Yunlan Sect without Yunshan would have no value at all. There is no comparison between Yun Yun, a three-star fighting emperor, and Yunshan Dou Zong. The Soul Palace would never ask Yun Yun to cooperate. It would just wipe it out and then find someone from the Izumo Empire to cooperate. Is Izumo's Dou Zong not more valuable than a three-star fighting emperor? Or the author plans to solve this problem through some kind of blood pact. This is a newly added setting. I think the author's intention is that after signing it, it must never be violated. To be honest, I don't like this thing very much. The unpredictability of people's hearts is the basis of the story. If there is something that can guarantee absolute loyalty and absolute trust, it will have a devastating impact. It is okay to say that it is not the focus of the story for some martial arts blood flow, but this book should be based on Machiavellian intelligence. At the core, there is such a setting that is really broken. For example, why should Jia Xingtian negotiate with you to sign a contract? I have big fists. If you don't sign, I will kill you on the spot. If you sign or not, if you sign, you will never violate it. So as long as I am better than you, I can If I force you to sign anything, you can't agree to it and then go back on it or betray it. So what's the point of fighting with wits? Just convince you. If you don't sign, you'll die. If you sign, you can only do things for me. If there is such a thing, what will the social form be like? All agreements are valuable only if they are guaranteed by force. An agreement without force guarantee is a piece of waste paper. This is the basis for many interesting turns. Going back to the previous storyline, Yunshan and the Soul Palace are definitely a big threat, and because of the villain nature of the Soul Palace, there is no possibility of cooperation. And because only Xiao Yan can fight against the Soul Emperor, he cannot even tolerate it temporarily. Xiao Yan must be saved, otherwise he will die slowly. The problem is to give Xiao Yan time to grow, and the protagonist must also grow in this process to gain the strength to grasp the situation. So this is the reason why I felt that the plot seems to advance a bit too fast. The boss has been released, and the main combat power has not yet grown. The protagonist needs to establish his power and be the mastermind behind the scenes. There is no force to guarantee it. It seems to be huge for a while, but in fact it is short-lived. For example, the transaction of Qinglin, the Tian She Mansion suffered a loss, and went back Please Dou Zong, why won't he try to steal it again when Dou Zong comes? He wants to trade with you honestly. Why doesn't Jiaxingtian seize the control of the transaction? These are very fragile balances. The protagonist is like a child holding a gold brick on the street. It is the same as the story of the little doctor fairy's treasure hunt. He has no strength. If you share the benefits with you, it will be a favor. You still want to take advantage? Although it is not necessary for the protagonist to have military power, for example, the previous transaction with Medusa, I think it is better, because the protagonist has the Yunlan Sect behind him, which can be used as the basis for the transaction. But in this transaction, the protagonist sold Yunshan, so what qualifications does Nalan Yanran have to negotiate terms with Yun Yun alone? Then about Medusa, the author seems to be a little inclined to imagine the future cooperation with Medusa based on the image of Cai Lin in the later period of the original work. However, even though the original work used various coincidences and accidents to create the relationship between Xiao Yan and Cai Lin, before Xiao Yan had the strength to compete with Douzong, Doudou placed heavy restrictions on Medusa and did not allow her to move freely. This was because Xiao Yan was still deterred by the medicine. In fact, Medusa is a very dangerous character. It is difficult for the protagonist to handle her without strength. However, the protagonist seems to have a special affection and tendency towards Medusa. I don't know whether the author intentionally describes the protagonist in this way or the author unconsciously treats her preferentially. He always wants to cooperate with Medusa for a win-win situation, but for Garma, the protagonist seems to always want to trick her. In fact, personally, I think it is easier to cooperate with Garma, after all, there is less racial conflict. Then there is the author's acceptance speech. The author seems to be planning to destroy the Jia Ma Empire and create a Yun Lan Empire? This involves another very troublesome issue, the administrative structure and organizational structure. Both the Jiama Royal Family and the Yunlan Sect are the top forces of the Jiama Empire, but why one is an empire and the other is a sect. It can only be because the underlying institutions and organizational methods are different, and the internal division of interests is different from that of the Shantou faction. This thing is basically not described at all in the original work. But no matter what, it can't be just that Jiaxing Tian kills Yun Lan and replaces Gama. It would be very troublesome to write this thing well. I think the more feasible idea is the original Yan League, with Xiao Yan as the core force guarantee, cooperating with all parties to establish an alliance, and all parties in the alliance checking and balancing each other, using the Soul Palace or the Izumo Empire as external enemies to eliminate internal conflicts. Finally, as Xiao Yan and Xiao Yan's party members, such as Cai Lin (excluding the Snake Tribe), such as the Xiao Clan, become increasingly powerful and slowly integrate. Or I once had an idea that the protagonist, as the head of the Yunlan Sect, marries Princess Yaoye of Jiama, becomes the regent, combines the power of the Yunlan and Jiama royal families, and sends all the people from the Yunlan Sect to serve in the empire, and then Yunlan Zong also accepted the participation of everyone in the empire, including the Garma royal family, and downplayed the military nature of Yunlan, transforming it into an academy training nature, integrating the Garma empire in a centralized manner, but this required the protagonist to be a male. Generally speaking, it means having a basic base and integrating the overall situation through benefit distribution. The larger the basic base, the more it can be integrated. Once the basic base is strong enough, it can even carry out a high degree of centralized rule. As for expanding the base, marriage is really a very practical thing. For example, without colorful scales, it is absolutely difficult to integrate the Yan Alliance. For example, in my imagination, if you can't marry Yao Ye, it will be difficult for the protagonist to integrate Gama. So although the author may not be very happy, I still mention that marrying Xiao Yan is very beneficial to politics. Finally, I want to mention the giant bug buried by Tudou. Why did Xun'er go to the Xiao family? The reason for finding Gu Yu is really eye-catching. Sending a little lolita to perform a spy mission is still a pheasant force that can be dispatched in a few moments. If I were to explain it, I would set it up like the Ancient Clan doesn't really care if they can't get the ancient jade, because it's useless if all eight pieces are not collected, so the Ancient Clan only needs to know where the ancient jade is. The important thing is not to let the Soul Clan know, so they can't send many people there. The little Lolita is because of the internal struggle of the Ancient Clan. Gu Yuan is not worried about a little Loli staying in the vortex of the struggle, so he arranges for her to hide in the countryside. The Ancient Jade only It's just a casual mention. It doesn't matter if you can easily get it. It doesn't matter if you can't get it for a while. There are only a few trusted guards to follow and protect it. It is enough for a high-level Douzong Douzun to bring a few low-level Douzong Douhuang. Because of the setting of the spatial jade tube, a high-level Douzong Douzun paired with a Dou Sheng who can be called at any time is basically foolproof. For example, Ling Ying is one of the Douhuangs and was sent by Xun'er to protect Xiao Yan. Then there is another question here. When did the Soul Palace discover the Xiao Clan? I don't know if it's because I don't remember it or because the original book didn't explain it clearly. I feel like the Yunlan Sect and the Jiu Guardian didn't know about it at first. The initial attack was purely an act of revenge. Later, when Xiao Yan was in Canaan College, the Soul Palace discovered that the Xiao Family is the Xiao Clan. , But the specific time is not very clear. Is it because the Yunlan Sect discovered it after they captured Xiao Zhan, and then the Xiao family was attacked when Xiao Yan was in Canaan College. According to the description, there seemed to be more than one person from the Soul Palace. I remember that the lowest level in the Soul Palace was the Dou Zong, which was the guardian level, but then the Yunlan Sect only had one Eagle Guardian. The Eagle Guardian, a low-level Guardian, should not know about these secrets of the Eight Ancient Clan of Ancient Yu. It should be because the senior leaders of the Soul Palace were involved. However, the senior Soul Palace officials did not seem to know about Xiao Yan's existence in the early stage. Could it be possible that an Eagle Guardian caused trouble in the early stage and didn't even report it? It's very confusing. Because this thing is related to the reaction of the Soul Palace after killing the Eagle Protector, I don't know what the author thinks, or if the original work has a more detailed setting and I have forgotten it. The above only represents my personal opinion and should be used as a starting point.

What can be revealed so far is that 1. I will not change back into a man 2. I will not take a mechanical route to snatch the male protagonist's treasure, but a single route of chance 3. I will probably look like the mastermind behind the scenes 4. I will be single, or have a single female protagonist, or have a harem. Depending on the feedback from subsequent book reviews, it will also test my effectiveness in shaping female characters 5. This book will work hard to operate a large number of unconventional plots.

I think it's very well written. In fact, I am quite disgusted with men who time travel and become women, but so far, the author of the plot design has used his hat. It is not like a novice, and the logic is very strict. I read it in one sitting! A wave of support.

In fact, compared with other novels about Nalan Yanran, this book is still very to my liking. The protagonist has great intelligence, but unfortunately he lacks strength now. Do you really not think about fighting the Emperor in the future? (As for emotional scenes, I can handle Lily's harem, and can I take Xiao Huohuo away? I have deep resentment o(╯□╰)o...)

Whoever said it yesterday, the name Nalan Yanran is poisonous, and no book written by her has been completed properly. Another proof appeared today.

Xun'er, it's so disgusting. The male protagonist should hurry up and take Xiao Yan's first time. He will be so angry.

Why don't you change the main character's name? It looks so awkward...😅

The starting point for the collapse of combat power in the later stages of Dou Po Cang Qiong is the Dou Zun Realm. The breaking point for the collapse of Dou Zun Realm combat power is that Xiao Yan suddenly fell from the sky after rising to the Nine Star Dou Zun - becoming a saint requires nine turns of Dou Zun. Nine-turn Dou Zun is obviously a setting created by the author in order to improve the fighting spirit of the Dou Sheng and suppress Xiao Yan's upgrade speed. It is just to mess with people's mentality. Because of the setting of the ninth rank of Dou Zun, there was no foreshadowing at all in the novel before. Before Xiao Yan was promoted to Jiu Xing Dou Zun, Jiu Xing Dou Zun was described in the book as the strongest person closest to Dou Saint. After Xiao Yan became a Nine-Star Dou Zun, the author suddenly threw out the setting and told everyone that becoming a Dou Saint requires nine more stars. After that, a bunch of Dou Zun villains suddenly appeared in Zhongzhou. Making a force like Sangu Sifang Pavilion with only four, five, six or seven stars Dou Zun a joke, the rationality of Zhongzhou's combat power system directly collapsed. If there was no setting for the Nine-turn Dou Zun, with the previous author's patch - the Seven Ancient Clans disdained outsiders and did not interfere in external affairs. Powers like the Three Sects and Four Valleys with three, four, five, six and seven Star Dou Zun can be regarded as the first-class power in Zhongzhou and can even be compared. As a result, a bunch of fifth-level, sixth-level, seventh-level, and eighth-level Douzuns like scorpion demons and three ghosts suddenly appeared in Zhongzhou. The setting that Sangu Sifang Pavilion was the first-class force in Zhongzhou could not be fulfilled no matter what. So my suggestion is that the author can actually cut off the setting of the Nine-Star Dou Zun. After the nine-star Dou Zun, he can directly become a Half-Saint and a Dou-Sage. In this way, the later reading of the novel will be more reasonable, and it will come true that the Second Sect, Three Valleys and Sifang Pavilion are the first-class forces in Zhongzhou.

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Come on, author💪, I think this work can be regarded as a top-notch work among Dou Po fandoms. The protagonist maneuvers among various forces, deceives and deceives him, giving outsiders the impression that he has no plans left, and his baggage is revealed just right. There is no golden finger, all depends on one's own hard work, all there is is some information brought by the plot, which is very valuable. During the same period, the Three Days of Fighting King and the Ten Days of Fighting Saints were too boring, and the author's chapters on the battle of wits gave me the illusion of watching the Three Kingdoms. The only drawback is that the IQs of other supporting characters can't keep up with the pace, and some plots are too idealistic. But the flaws are not concealed. It has been a long time since I met a book that I can't stop reading in the middle of the night. It's 2:50 sharp now, my dear, I'm going to vomit blood at work tomorrow 😆

Author, this name will be called Nalan Yanran from now on. Don't let Ye Jin appear again. There is still a chance to change it now, come on!

? ! ! ! ! ? ! ! ? ! ? Fuck fuck xx fuck Is this the end? This is fucking grassy

When does the protagonist get hit a home run?

The anti-inflammatory in this article is quite interesting haha, the inexplicable tsundere is a bit cute

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Nalan Yanran's curse came true

I vomited, this is really the end, are you kidding me?

The protagonist still needs to be strong. He doesn't have to be able to beat Xiao Yan, but at least he has to be afraid of him. Otherwise, he can't help but flip the table over if he gets into trouble. Moreover, in the fantasy world, freedom requires strength. And the protagonist, as the leader of a force, must not be defeated by his strength.

How about an introduction

I searched and found that Dou Po has been around for many years. Why are there only two books with Nalan Yanran as the protagonist? Can anyone who knows the story tell me the reason?

When I saw another book, I clicked on it and quickly wrote a comment. Writing novels is a dead end. I also just finished the novel I just started writing. All kinds of blocking are too difficult to deal with.

What the hell? I just raised Chapter 10. The plot just started and it's over after I watched it today.

The writing is pretty good, but it's just boring to read. Dou Po itself is a world where the strong are respected. There are too many calculations. Dou Po itself is not a particularly strong world. I wrote this as a separate copy...

Um...( :∇:) It's too hard for me

Hahaha, xswl, Yanran curse, you are not the end, you are the eunuch,

The writing is quite good, but the ending is a bit rushed. However, I don't agree with forcing a continuation later. It's quite interesting.

Although I can no longer complain about the subsequent plot, I still ordered and read it all. I don't know if the author has any ideas for writing a book. If he writes a new book, he will keep up the good work.

What would you do if you traveled through time in Dou Po?

I don't know if the author is still around

I don't understand that the heroine's soul was not checked.