Wonderful Stories from the Heavens

Why do you feel that it is better than me in writing and how you describe it? I don't know how to do it myself. As I write, I get sidetracked. All in all it's pretty good, better than what I wrote. Work hard.

After reading the previous chapters, I am not familiar with the system flow, but the system in the author's story is indeed fascinating and the writing is very smooth. But the number of words is a little less, I look forward to the follow-up.

I think it's better to activate the system at the beginning after I finish reciting it! 🤓

I read four chapters carefully and found it pretty good, but it was a bit difficult to read in some places. The first few chapters are still very important, I hope they can be polished. The plot and story are still very good. I am optimistic about you and have invested in it. Come on!

Very well written! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

It's well written, but unfortunately it's not my type.

The writing style is sophisticated, the subject matter is novel, and the writing is very good, making people want to read on.

The writing is fluent and the ideas are good. Finally, I like Zhutianliu. I give it a thumbs up.

The subject matter is still very new and the writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

The writing is very good. I have already invested. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

After reading the first two chapters, the writing is very good and the plot is relatively smooth. However, I feel that the protagonist is very nervous. The first task must be completed before four o'clock, but the protagonist does not go out until after three o'clock. The second is that the protagonist is too accepting of the system, and there is basically no big psychological reaction. Even when it comes to accepting the punishment of seeing death in the task, there is no big reaction.

Opening this novel 📖A breath of youth comes to my face, it is so wanton and exuberant ✌️ However, I don't know much about the system flow, so I dare not make any comments 🐷. 🤔 I just feel that the writing style of this book is smooth, the plot is compact, there are many remarkable things, and there are many things worth learning from 😅. ✊ Come on, may you be like the rising star, radiating bursts of light, preferably blinding our titanium alloy dog ​​eyes 😠. Later, the poor monk also gained a lot of bragging rights: I don't know, a certain great god also called me brothers back then...

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Reward 200 points, come on, boss

The author's literary style is sophisticated and his writing skills are also very good. I hope there will be more.

This subject matter is difficult to write about. I can't write it very well😄

The writing style is quite unique. I haven't often read this type of writing before, but I still like it 😌

It's a very interesting setting. It looks relaxed and happy. I'll give it a try.

Come and see you😜

Are the apparation and d-copying machines inspired by the Uncle Wolf movie?

Dear, I just changed the whole idea of ​​my first three chapters of memories, changed them, deleted a chapter, and merged them together. Can you take a look at it now and give me some opinions?

The writing style is very delicate, with plenty of details. It reads quite coherently without any sudden jumps. In the first few chapters, the system forces the protagonist to investigate a car accident and rescue people, which is full of positive energy. Come on!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I'm sorry that I can't give you any valuable advice. I actually haven't read any online articles 😰. Dada is also the first one to tell me about my reading habits. I really only read foreign literature. It's been ten days since I joined Qidian. I can see the word "system" everywhere, but I still don't know what system refers to, so I can't comment on Dada's works. But I can give you encouragement, come on💪