Behind the Scenes of the Unparalleled Demon King, He Signed for Eighteen Years

The writing is pretty good, it has been finished, but I hope the protagonist can be from the neutral camp. After all, the protagonist's identity is a monster. Don't talk about being a human in the past life. The past life is always just the past life, and this life is the real self. Don't talk about helping the monsters, but at least don't help humans to kill the monsters. Clan traitors are not lovable no matter what the reason is. I hope the author can grasp the sense of proportion.

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The subject matter is still very good, and it's not easy to come across one that I like so much. But is he still a little immature? The writing in the early stage is a bit messy, it's best to sort it out. The IQs of the supporting characters in the new chapters are obviously off the line, and they all call out White Snake. Even if they didn't hear it for some reason, they should be written well. In terms of skills. . . . I think it's better to stay close to the dragon and snake. Anyway, keep working hard, improve slowly, and don't collapse. ✊✊✊

It doesn't matter if you become a snake, but I can't stand being the companion monster of a loli 😓

A snake goes to practice the ox clan's skills. What's wrong, its hooves are going to grow?

There are a lot of poisonous points, and the writing style is really bad, but the subject matter is really good, the protagonist's personality changes a bit in the early and late stages, and this book is really a female novel. There are some places that even Shennong couldn't stand, and some places are fascinating. For the current starting point, this book is still good.

Wiping tears, being a father and a mother, and occasionally being a tracker and pulling a boat. Are you such a big shot behind the scenes?

This book needs to be renamed: The Story of the Peerless Demon King Milk Baby, maybe more people will read it.

Do I have some misunderstanding about what's going on behind the scenes?

I first said that I would abuse the female protagonist at the beginning, but it was okay. The male protagonist was not a dad at first, which lowered the evaluation of the opening, and even made me abandon the article at one point. I suggested that the author read more dad stories. The more novel dad stories are visually popular. To be honest, if the male protagonist had half the urban drama dad, he would definitely have better results than he does now.

The plot of this book is okay. The only fatal flaw is that it is too long-winded. The author can give you five or six chapters of the original chapter of the plot by talking nonsense. It is uncomfortable to watch, and the dialogue between the protagonist and others is a little bit off-kilter. And then watching the protagonist pretending to be cool is not pleasant at all, and it is very annoying to watch.

After reading Chapter 99, I really can't help but want to ask, what is the use of this mouse? Author, do you like this?

I've written a lot about this subject, but it was quite interesting to read the introduction. I read more than a dozen chapters. ? ? ? ? ? Don't know why

It's disgusting to abuse the heroine, why would you design a plot like this 😐

I suggest you write more about the protagonist, not just the supporting characters. I have never seen the protagonist before. He has any special abilities. The supporting characters are pretty understanding, but the protagonist has only attacked a few times... In short, I just want to see the author write more about the protagonist

Very nice looking

The little loli has persuaded many people to leave.

I have read the author's three previous works. They are not long but none of them have eunuchs. They are worth collecting and reading. After reading the introduction, the sign-in stream is very popular, but I have not read it since I became the accompanying demon king! If written well, there is still great potential. 😎

When I first watched it, emmmmm... Is this the plot of "The God of War returns ten years later and sees his daughter sleeping in a pig pen"?

It's been a long time since I've read Goudan. Unexpectedly, I'm already writing the fourth book. Come on! I hope you will become the author with the most works from Qidian.

I think it's very well written, please come on

One problem with this book is that the flow of information is inexplicable. At the beginning, the protagonist knows some common sense about this world just after traveling through time. How can he be recognized by others even if he practices a demon technique? How else do you know the demon's skills? Does every monster have to explain its own training method before fighting? Even if I want to show off, I don't pretend like this. It's too embarrassing. Although it's a small problem, it does look awkward 😅

The first two pictures were fine, but the later ones were watery.

I didn't expect such ink marks

The book is finished, and the author is probably gone

Did the author and the book finish the book together? Or did they work together?

I knew it before I even saw it. It's a lolita thing to cultivate, but when you get older, you'll push it down. Slipping away

Author Don't die, hold on!