The Origin of Apocalypse Continent

After briefly flipping through it, thousands of words came to me, but for a moment I didn't know what to say. Now is the Internet age, and online novels serve as a relaxing form of entertainment. Not many people are willing to settle down to write the first book with connotation and artistic conception. Everyone is very tired from work and life, and reading novels is just to relax. I used to be like the author and wanted to write a good story. But this is not enough. No one is watching. It's cool, it's explosive, it's counter-intuitive, it's a slap in the face. These are rare in daily stories, especially since the author chose such a plain love story. Forget it, keep it concise and to the point! The author's writing style is good and the logic is smooth, and the whole story can be seen as the result of thinking. It's just that I felt good after reading the first few chapters. But it's just good, and it didn't stimulate my desire to read further. There is one thing I want to say: For example, if we watch a hunter go into the forest to find a princess, what the reader wants to see is what does the hunter do to the princess? Rather than how lush the leaves are on a tree in the forest. Readers read online novels to seek excitement. I used to be similar to you. I write books because I want to gain recognition for my hobby and write about what I like. Then I failed, I compromised, I changed my account and opened a new book to cater to readers' tastes. All the above comments do not hinder my personal appreciation of the author. I am a loser. Maybe your path is right, come on.

It's well written. The only regret is that it's too little. It's not good enough~

It's interesting, keep writing!

Take it, take it, love it, love it

The subject matter is good No poisonous points are seen yet The rhythm fluctuates smoothly I look forward to seeing any changes or conflicts in the fifty chapters.

Sure, this first chapter made me grit my teeth a bit. As a worker, I feel very involved! Keep up the pace later! Come on~ Look forward to visiting again~

Received!

It's well written, but unfortunately it's not my type.

I am not familiar with urban literature, but the main story is still good. The writing may need to be further improved. There are some unreasonable plots, such as suddenly running out of money, not going home for three years, etc., And some plots are a bit awkward, such as some dialogues and leaning on the shoulder at the beginning. But you can also go through it, and you can see that the author worked hard. Come on💪

Due to time issues, I will only review the three golden chapters for the time being. The plot setting of the first three chapters of this novel is considerable and good. The first chapter stimulates the reader's desire to read through the sharp contrast of the male protagonist's life before and after his loss, and strengthens the male protagonist's sense of tragedy. The second chapter starts the story and environment setting of S County through the protagonist's intuitive feelings, including the male protagonist's innocent guilt and nostalgia for his hometown. Although he is far away in the magic city, he still has the guilt of bringing benefits to his hometown. At the same time, the subsequent story may also be created based on the environment of S County (guess the plot is my favorite 😂😂😂) The third chapter begins to introduce new characters and inherit the story line, and also contains the passionate love for his mother and home in the countryside. The book is indeed good. But there are also shortcomings, that is, the sense of immersion when meeting the mother is obviously insufficient compared with the previous article. The previous feeling was immediately lowered a lot, but the later articles also began to slowly make up for this shortcoming, which is still good. Come on＾0＾~

The rat is here, happy Chinese Valentine's Day!

Come on! Looking forward to your breakthrough!

This perseverance alone is enough to see it, come on!

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Received, come on＾0＾~, I'm optimistic about you

The plot is very good! Come on💪💪💪💪

If you think the plot is good, come on, author! Can you reply to your little fans?