I Feel Helpless Because I Look so Fierce.

It's not that refreshing, it just feels like a sugary, semi-fluent novel.

The reviews of "Half Sugar and Half Water" are indeed very consistent, but I think this type of novel is very good for a change. I often get irritable after reading too many other novels. Sweet novels are also very good~≧ω≦~

I don't think it matters whether you're fluent or not, but the plot of your story is too outrageous. You know clearly that the enemy will take action against the heroine and can't do anything, so you just wait for the other party to take action, and then you get anxious. While living in the same room with the heroine, you say that you don't want the heroine to be involved. I really don't know what to say. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

There are fruit on the tree, you and me under the tree.

I couldn't even finish the three golden chapters. There were too many introductions and it was confusing all at once. It smelled like a running account. To put it simply, it was smelly and long. The plot went over too fast and the key points were not mentioned at all.

Is it over? Isn't it bad?

I don't object to posting sweet articles, even if the writing is mediocre. But if the content is teased with an introduction, it will be uncomfortable and even a little disgusting.

Didn't Conan author Aoyama say that Kyogoku can really destroy the black organization? Why can't the male protagonist?

Just baffling? I don't think anyone who is attracted by the introduction wants to watch something like this that basically talks about love.

What are you talking about, a lot of water without beginning or end?

Following Conan again, acting as a shield. Can't you just ignore it?

When I saw Aso Honesty, I started to feel a little better. . . Sorry, I can't stand it anymore

I'm curious, if the original novel didn't have the protagonist as the author, would Shi Yu have been ruined long ago? Won't? ? No way you still write like that! ? I thought I was reading a novel from ten years ago, where the female protagonist would attract bees and butterflies and cause trouble wherever she went. Does the author not know how to write other than the hero saving the beauty?

Do you guys have any more naughty ideas? Crowdfunding to write a book🤔