Pushing Across the Heavens Begins with Eternal Life

I'm still picking it up but I'm fully subscribed, and I'm afraid I'll run out of it 😥. I was attracted by the beginning of Eternal Life because I like novels about Dreaming into the Divine Machine. I hope the author can write the atmosphere of the novel about the Dreaming into the Divine Machine. Moreover, other novels about the Dreaming into the Divine Machine such as Holy King and Dragon and Snake can have roles, which should attract more friends who like the novel about the Dreaming into the Divine Machine.

After reading it from beginning to end, I still can't help but talk about it. Unlike others, I will discuss the plot of the novel, combat power, etc. I mostly give suggestions and comments on the novel itself. First of all, the style of the protagonist and the entire article, what I saw from the beginning was majestic, brave and progressive, but later a lot of comical commentary was added, and the style of relaxed and funny jokes that has been popular in the past two years has been added. For a while, the protagonist acts in a deep and sophisticated manner, both in his heart and in his behavior, but then he adds some modern ideas, such as the real fragrance, or the way women affect the speed of my punches. This style is no longer the style of character creation in the novel, but the thoughts of the author and readers themselves. It is like a mixture of several styles, without a specific charm. There is also the self-proclaimed positioning of the protagonist. In Eternal Life, it is called Hua Tiandu, and in Divine Eagle, it is called Jinlun. So if it is written as a dragon and a snake, and it travels to Wang Chao, it is also called Wang Chao? Especially since there are more and more worlds in the back. The protagonist is a time-traveling character. He should have his own name and will, and should be treated with his own thoughts in his heart. If you use Hua Tiandu as the protagonist, then he walks in every world, and his self-description should be Hua Tiandu. Others can call him Jinlun or Great Monk, which is used to position the character in the current world. You should still describe yourself with your own name. Just like Gu Shaoshang An Qisheng, no matter who he travels to, when he writes his name, it will always be Gu Shaoshang An Qisheng. He will not say that when he time travels into Wang Quan, "Wang Quan" Taoist Priest, he will be called Wang Quan. Wang Quan hit him with a palm, and Wang Quan was holding a big gun... It's so uncomfortable to look at it, isn't it? Author: Are you teaching me how to do things? 😠

Covering the Sky - "Emperor's Sutra", "Nine Secrets", "Saving Nerves", "Swallowing Heaven Demonic Skills & Immortal Heavenly Skills", "Taiyin & Sun", "Tao Jing" Perfect World - "The Great Law of Self-Transformation", "Ten Ominous Treasures", "Original True Interpretation", "Six Paths of Reincarnation Heavenly Skills", "Immortal Sutra" and "Genuine Edition" "Eight-nine Heavenly Skills", "Calming Chaos Technique", "Immortal Tribulation Sword Technique", "Mana Immunity", "Bell of Time", "Willow God Technique" Holy Ruins - "Breathing Technique", "Field Technique", "Seven Treasures Magic Technique", "Chaos Spirits Overcoming Tribulation Song", "Return from the Underworld", "Time Technique", "Six Paths of Time Technique" "Six Paths of Time Technique" "Seven Death Bodies" "Great Sun Tathagata Fist" "Shaoyang Fist & Shaoyin Fist" "Lightning Fist" Yang Shen - "Past Amitabha Sutra & Present Tathagata Sutra General Outline & Future Inanimate Sutra" "Wheel of Life and Death" "Two Sutras of the Universe" "Book of Creation" "Hongmeng Parasitism" Jue", "Xuantian Dark Record", "Shenxiao Taoist Book", "Tathagata Alchemy Sutra", "War God Zhengdao Sutra", "Thunder Prison Sword Sutra", "Zhenwu Sacred Body", "Book of Changes" Honor of the First World - "Eight-Nine Mysterious Skills", "Yuanshi Golden Chapter", "Tathagata Divine Palm & Tathagata Reverse Palm", "Seven Swords of Cutting Heaven", "Huntian" "Baojian", "The Golden Book of the Human Emperor", "The Demon Emperor's Canon", "The Four Swords Manual of Killing the Immortals", "One Qi Transforms Three Pure Ones", "The Jade Book of the Emperor of Heaven" One Thought of Eternity - "Eternal Immortality & Blood Killing World", "The Eleven Changes of the Ancestors of Yunlei" The Holy King - "The Great Holy King" "Dharma", "Gulu Magical Skill & Mask Magical Skill", "Prison-Suppressing Power of Divine Elephant", "True Demon's Indestructible Body", "Secret Secrets of All Fundamental Dharma in the World", "The Grand Mudra of Formation, Destruction and Destruction of the Ending Dharma for Ten Thousand Calamities", "Grand Tomb Magical Skill/God Tablet Palm", "Nine Death Mysterious Skills", "Swallowing the Heavens and Creation Absolutely Divine Way & Seventy-Two Ancestor Kings Heqigong & Kingly Killing Fist" "Eight Parts of Divine Fist", "Central Great Brahma Punishment Five Elements Qigong", "Eternal Qingshi Dao Zang", "The Mysterious Art of the Creation and Destruction of the Eternal Way of Heaven", "God's Weeping Finger of Worldly Tribulation", "Ruyi Nine Cauldrons Divine Alchemy Dao Qigong & Ten Thousand Wheels and Ten Thousand Methods Ruyi Divine Whip Qigong", "Great Wisdom Vacuum Samadhi Sutra", "God's Weeping Finger of Worldly Tribulation" "Legendary Sutra of Evil Gods", "Divine Whip of the Elephant King", "Spiritual Demon-feeding Demon Sacrifice and Heaven-defying Magic", "The Ultimate Evil Brain Magic Technique", "Great Dream Heart Sutra", "Old Finger of Heaven and Earth", "Tai Chi's Immortal Chaotic Techniques Shocking Mysterious Technique", "Martial God Overlord's Pillar of Heaven", "Nine-Yang Supreme Innate Technique", "Great Cave Xuan Immortal Disaster Eliminating Qigong", "Xunfeng Kunlun" Hengtian Dao" Dragon Talisman - "Dragon-free Heart Technique", "Great Slaughter of Gods Technique", "Emperor's Art of Conferring Gods", "Holy Dragon Heart Technique", "Human Dragon Fist" Star Transformation - "Star Transformation", "Three Souls and Nine Refinements", "Ancestral Dragon Technique", "Array Way", "Nine Turns of Dark Golden Body" Eternal Life - "Three Thousand Avenues", "Era Divine Fist", "Hongmeng Heavenly Way & Tianyuan Yi Blow", "Creation of Gods & Genesis & Ragnarok & Distant Legends", "Human Emperor Dao Canon", "The Supreme Holy God's Ruler True Law & All Emperors Martial Scripture & Thirty-Three Days Divine Fist of Creation" & Thirty-Three Heavenly Seal Techniques & The Void Emperor's Undefeated War Holy Techniques & The Jade Emperor's Sacred Way Miaoyou Grand Master Sword Techniques " " The Immortal Heavenly Techniques of the Dynasty of Truth " " The Secret Skills of the Six Heavenly Monarchs & The Secret Technique of Heavenly Tracks & Divine Fist of Heaven " " The Seven Styles of Judgment " " The Nine Changes of Freedom " " The Demonic Skills of Confusion " " The Flood of Troubled Times " " The Holy Fist of the Founder " " The Eight Styles of Slaying the Dragon " "The Sword of Alaya", "The Sutra of the Other Shore", "The Divine Witch-Destroying Palm", "Nine Purities Immortal Light", "The Root of Heaven and Earth", "Distant Legend", "The Way of the End", "The Great Immortal Technique of Reincarnation of All Heavens", "The Great Immortal Technique of Taishang Fusion of Love and Rebellion of Tianyuan Dao & Origin of Divine Fist" Yuan Zun - "Hun Chaos God Grinding Thoughts" "Ancestral Dragon Sutra" "Cangxuan Holy Seal" "Five Directions Dragon Divine Flow" Humanity Supreme - "Innate Bagua" Martial Arts World - "Shura Heavenly Book" "Soul Clan Sacred Scripture" "Mengwu" "Taiyi Soul Art" "Evil God "The Power", "The Great Desolate Halberd Technique", "Hegemony of the Sky", "The Art of Conferring the Gods", "The Art of Divine Mist Heart", "The Heavenly Bliss" The Evil God Against Heaven - "The Art of the Evil God", "The Miracle of Life", "The Great Way of the Buddha", "The Heavenly Wolf Hell God's Code", "Star God's Broken Shadow", "The World-Defying Heavenly Book" Emperor Zun - "The Mysterious Embryo Sutra of the Demon Realm" and "Yuanshi Great Compass Sutra" Emperor Hegemony - "Nine Heavenly Books" Eternal Life Realm - "Heaven Stele Xuan Gong", "Immortal Demon Technique", "Martial Ancestor True Sutra", "Four Notes of Sanshou" and "Guise Longevity Jue" The Tomb of the Gods - "Eight Forms of Rebellion", "The Sutra of Summoning Demons", "The Supreme Forgetting Love Record" The Legend of the Emperor - "Innate Qiankun Gong", "Huntian Treasure Mirror", "Tathagata Divine Palm", "Purple Thunder Divine Art & Purple Thunder Sword Technique" and "Six God Secrets"

Let me say a few words. The author has made some changes. Isn't this normal at the age of fifteen and in the third level of the physical body? When Fang Lao Mo just started practicing, he couldn't do anything without the Nine Apertures Golden Pill. Whoever is given the Nine Apertures Golden Pill can make rapid progress!                                                                                                                                                                                                                             I was young, there was no big stage, and I couldn't raise my horizons, and I didn't have the opportunity or resources, so it was normal for me not to stand out.                                                                                 does it have to be like a certain book where the protagonist is born divine, then kills himself and rebuilds again? Or maybe you have already achieved supernatural powers at the age of fifteen, so there is no need to write this book and you can start it again, right? Or maybe he became the third level of physical body at the age of six or seven, and then traveled back through the divine eagle to practice, and the powerful force burst him? How do you go out at such a young age and what do you write? I have been following this book from the beginning until now. It was updated at 8 o'clock steadily at first, then unstable, and now it is updated at night. Do you have to force the author into the palace? They say that the past is irreversible and only the future can be looked at. In the future, everyone will discuss the subsequent plot, share their own thoughts, and draw a few supporting characters. Wouldn't it make the author more comfortable to write? It's rare to see such good books on astronomy anymore. I'm still a friend of Yongsheng. If you want to read, just read honestly and don't disturb others.

The first time I saw it, the pig's foot changed the plot and was killed by heaven's punishment! You are awesome. If you are not allowed to change, why should you do it? Just read the original work!

Traveling from the immortal world to the ancient world, firstly, it is like an adult running to bully a baby. Secondly, even if you want to travel to other worlds to buy time for the protagonist, it is a little more reasonable. There is no explanation of the time flow in the two worlds. There is also a point in the martial arts world. The aura of heaven and earth is not as good as that of the main world. The author should make the plot a little more reasonable when writing. Although it is a novel, the setting of the novel cannot be too casual.

The eternal Hua Tian can even start as a loser! ! ! I don't understand who except the Immortal King and Fang Han can be more talented than Hua Tian.

Lightning Mother Heavenly Lord Fang Qingxue

It feels like the protagonist abandons the basics and pursues the last. What is important in a world is not martial arts. Martial arts are only created by predecessors. How they created them is not based on the knowledge and wisdom of the ancients, plus their own understanding. Martial arts has an end, but wisdom has no end. Buddhist scriptures, Taoist scriptures, Confucianism, and medical classics, this These are the embodiment of a world's Tao. If you can understand these classics and half-complete magical martial arts, you can create them casually. Huang Xueshi copied Mo Daozang and later created the Nine Yin Manual for revenge. They are all peerless magical skills. The protagonist's mind stays in the magical secrets created by others, but he doesn't know why. , Fell into the lower realm, and for the so-called Hongmeng Purple Qi, a glimmer of vitality is not omnipotent. It is useless in some worlds without the way of heaven. You may not be able to enter. There is no so-called way of heaven in the Perfect Three Parts, and there should be no way of heaven in this life. There is no so-called way of heaven in many fantasy worlds. , And like those who practice in the galaxy, these worlds do not have the so-called way of heaven, and the so-called great avenue of fifty, the way of heaven forty-nine, and a glimmer of life are concepts created in the ancient times. Even if there are some worlds with the way of heaven, they do not have the so-called glimmer of life. The great path is fifty, and the way of heaven is fifty.

I'm just curious, why do you authors like being the first to travel through the world and write about Jingu so much? The protagonist goes to college and then goes to primary school? There is Journey to the West, and the protagonist's first world is Jingu's. There is a game that travels through Zhetian Perfect, and then the protagonist's first world is Jingu's. Nothing else to write? Picture what?

The minor problems with this book are, first of all, the protagonist is useless at the beginning, and secondly, he writes about martial arts without writing about eternal life. The writing of martial arts is bad. I know you went to the small world because you have more time in the small world, but there are too many chapters. I would rather you write slowly in the eternal world and write your own eternal life. A different kind of eternal life.

Guys, I've already booked everything. Am I doing the right thing?

Can the Perfect Immortal King defeat the Immortal Golden Immortal? The combat power of Zhutianliu cannot collapse

Sigh, the author really put a lot of thought into writing about the waste material flow. Hua Tiandu has been changed to the family's waste material child. He started practicing at the age of three and received the inheritance of Panwu Xianzun at a very young age.

Start with Hua Tiandu, go to the World of Condor? What's the point?

After reading Chapter 208, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up the book, and even tried to restart the timeline of American comics. Fang Qingxue's golden finger must have been created by the protagonist. It was annoying to watch, so I stopped reading, and all my previous subscriptions were wasted.

Why should I read this book? I wanted to see that Hua Tiandu was born divine and unparalleled in the world, but the author cut him off at the beginning.

They have transformed themselves into the eternal capital of Hua Tiandu, and even went to shoot eagles and Jiuding Ji. These worlds are also speechless.

Did I find any significance in your time traveling? The most annoying thing is this kind of novel. In the main world, a weakling is awesome in the dungeon world. Isn't Yang Shen's worldview as good as your magical power in the secret realm? It's written as if the secret realm of supernatural power can destroy the heaven and earth and destroy the universe. If you want to write an awesome world but also want to overwhelm the realm of the protagonist, I guess you will still be a little piece of garbage with magical power when you come back. It's broken. Bye bye.

You have a big heart and want to write about everything in the world. It's strange that you can get good grades. You put everything together. Do you really think that everyone in the world has read what you write? In fact, there is a lot to write about in "Eternal Life". Forget it, think about it.

Once a eunuch, always a eunuch! 🤓

Collect the world, supporting characters, etc. If you have any questions about the world, characters, templates, etc. You would like to see, you can leave a comment below. (Temporarily, we will collect worlds whose strength is probably at the magical level) World Name Identity Kung Fu Derived plots, etc.

I have a suggestion. If you write about Xinghe, you can learn from Jiang Li's Infinite Way. Infinite restraint of fate. Everything practiced in the eternal world will be restrained by the spirit of the Gate of Eternal Life. Unless you find a completely different way, the Infinite Way is a choice.

The eunuch is really decisive and courageous😭

Call for Collection! ! Dear book lovers, do you know how to draw pictures? Who can help me draw a picture of Fang Qingxue! Roughly speaking, he has long hair hanging down his waist, is dressed in white silk, has a noble temperament, and is unrivaled in elegance. He holds a short knife in his right hand, surrounded by purple electric light, with a full moon behind him, as if he is coming from the moon palace.

😡😡😡 Entering the palace! !

Have you reached eternal life? It's really uncomfortable to read it.

Eternal life! Thumbs up, the author's writing, characters and plot are great! Some suggestions This kind of astronomical combat power division should not be too detailed, it will be confusing, but there must be a sense of hierarchy. For example, there is a natural moat in Fanzhixian, and there is a natural moat in Daluo. There should not be too many natural mosses, but every day Every world has these chasms, but each stage is different for different worlds. For example, some transform into mortals first and then transform into gods, and some transform into gods and then go to several realms before transforming into mortals. What do you think, these transitional states are all The characteristics of different worlds should not be unified. But the comparison of some realms depends on the plot. For example, the supernatural power realm and the perfect Venerable realm need to be compared to see the destructive power. However, there are also some supernatural differences. For example, if you want to have a legendary system that can master many system powers at the same time, the advantages of this system can be cited separately. In short, you do not need to unify all the details of the power system and leave them blank, but the general framework must be there Keep an eye on the author, come on!

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