Reborn as a Fish, Invincible

Introduction: The story of a chef named Bai who wanted to kill and eat the fish raised by his granddaughter. Process: The granddaughter didn't know that her grandfather wanted to kill her favorite fish. The fish evolved crazily in order to survive and became more delicious. Summary: Please give me a platoon for such a grandpa!

1. After watching it for a while, I found that the name of this fish's evolution does not match its performance. It's nothingness. The name is quite fancy and ethereal. It's already on the same level as the time fish in the introduction, but the result is nothingness. I think the author, you can give evolution more branches. No matter how you look at it, this void spirit fish has very impure blood. There is also the expression of yin and yang as water and fire, which is too simple. The opposites in the world, movement and stillness, high and low, pure and turbid, etc., Are all expressions of yin and yang. In short, I think this evolution is far more interesting than upgrading. The author should think more about it. After all, the upgrade of cultivation is just a name value. After reading it, there is no fluctuation. Because the performance of the realm is better, the author's description is not very clear. I just go to level 1234, but the evolution is really interesting and interesting. I hope the author will consider it. I think the purity of blood is also an entry point. It also depends on the author's innovation based on the previous part. 2. The author's character creation should not always be playful and smiling. The characters should always be diverse. For example, for the old man Bai, I think it would be appropriate to add a separate character background narrative and a description of getting along with his granddaughter. Also, characters should not always be black and white. People are always contradictory. No one is perfect. There must always be some shortcomings and other personality hobbies in order to be more down-to-earth and accepted by readers. Also, my suggestion to the author is to be serious when it is funny, and a little bit of humor when it is serious is enough, so that it will feel less fragmented.

Reborn as a dog, I own the world 😁

One day, Old Man Bai asked Ranran to go down the mountain to the small town to make soy sauce. Ran Ran: "Grandpa, I want to take my disciple with me and visit Uncle Li on the way. Is that okay?" Old man Bai frowned slightly, but his mind was running at high speed, thinking about how to stop this bad fish from getting together with Ran Ran without disappointing Ran Ran. But when he saw Ran Ran's eager face, he could only agree: "Go ahead." Bai Ranran carried a small backpack and jumped to the lotus pond: "Good disciple, come quickly, master will take you to make soy sauce at the foot of the mountain!" Hearing the sound, Zhou Xiaoyu emerged from the bottom of the water, patted his pair of fins, and swam happily to Ran Ran's shoulders. Suddenly Zhou Xiaoyu felt a cold light coming from behind him, turned around and saw old man Bai looking at him with warning eyes. Zhou Xiaoyu shuddered and promised with a flattering look: "I will listen to Master obediently and won't cause trouble." Zhou Xiaoyu ignored the warning in Old Man Bai's eyes and followed his master out. The more Old Man Bai thought about it, the more he felt uneasy. It felt very dangerous to let this bad fish be alone with Ran Ran. Old Man Bai restrained his breath and hung behind them, quietly observing. I saw my precious granddaughter walking with the fish into a small forest. The fish suddenly stopped and a burst of golden light shone. The fish actually transformed into a pink and tender little boy in the soft light. "Oh, Xiaocao... I'm so scared of the baby! Why has it transformed?!" Looking down, "Why is it so small? Shouldn't it be a handsome young man!!" Zhou Xiaoyu fell into a state of shock. Bai Ranran was also stunned: "Good disciple, is it you? You can transform into a human form. Disciple, you are so powerful!" The incident happened suddenly. Old Man Bai felt a huge crisis and wanted to sweep away with a palm, but he saw his precious granddaughter picking up Zhou Xiaoyu in a bear hug, jumping up and down with joy! Old Man Bai threw a rat weapon, fearing that he would accidentally hurt his granddaughter, so he had to put away his palm and continued to lurk in the distance while holding back his anger. Bai Ranran didn't know Grandpa's worries, and Zhou Xiaoyu didn't know Old Man Bai's anger. Erxiao went all the way down the mountain, chasing butterflies, chasing sika deer, and throwing stones by the stream. They had a great time! Old man Bai was hanging behind, so angry that he vomited blood and died.

In the later period, the combat power collapsed, and the author couldn't hold it back. There were ways to overcome it, but this author did not hesitate and cut it directly... The previous one was quite enjoyable... Let's make a detailed outline for the next book.

I hadn't paid attention to Weeds before it was finished. I was browsing the extras two days ago and found out that there was a new book. I tried reading a few chapters, but it still had the same taste. I couldn't stop at all. After reading it for three days and three nights, I discovered that nm was unfinished? ? 😅🙏

So, Chili arrangement? I don't care, I take it seriously anyway

Tnnd, other sites have stopped caring about us since they started to thrive, right? 😡 Does anyone know who this vest is?

Originally, looking at the name of Guancao, I thought there were only two copies? Are you going to waste your good reputation?

It's so outrageous, I was so angry that I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night 🤔

I'm offering you two monthly passes. Do you think it's better?

The old man can see your thoughts. You have to explain to the system that your thoughts about rebirth are blocked by the system.

Give me another monthly pass and give me a cum😁

Mix up

Na na na, no one will see it, right? Two days ago, Tiao Tiao told us that we were going to open the book.

By the way, if you think this story is complete, I will abandon it. If it is complete, I will continue to subscribe and read it. If nothing else, at least Xiaoqing's writing style is quite comfortable to read.

Doesn't the author rely on this to make a living?

I'll give you two monthly passes. Do you think it's better?

It's all settled, godfather, please give me a boost. Also, I can't get into the book club, which is a bit embarrassing I'm right to think about the answer

Fuck, I just posted a comment and the original post was upvoted... It doesn't matter, not many people read it anyway.

This novel looks really laborious, and the wisdom that time brings is not reflected at all! The first dozen chapters are really more streamlined than an assembly line, and it's very uncomfortable to watch! If you prefer logical novels, you don't need to read this. Does any friend recommend some logical novels to me? It doesn't matter what kind of novel it is, I'll read anything as long as it's logical!

It costs at least one dollar to comment. It can indeed block the brainless trolls, but doesn't this control comments?