The Only Player Who Swallowed the Starry Sky

It's not readable at all, so why are there so many comments and so many people reading this crappy book? Anyone who has read the original work will basically understand the whole book by looking at this table of contents. The most important thing is that the dialogues of the characters in it are all the same expressions of the original characters. This is super annoying and has nothing new. I haven't read the original work.

How is this different from the original work? . One has no system and the other has system. .

I heard that those of you who write fan fiction will give a proportion of the money you earn to the original author. Is this true?

Do you really want to write good Devouring fan fiction? An excellent Devouring fan fiction at least complies with the unproblematic settings of the original work and writes its own thing. The fewer problems I describe, the better. On the contrary, the more problems you have, it will basically not attract readers. If it is just a piece of writing that is too popular and makes you tired, it would be better for you and me to give up early. The first major issue of devouring combat power system The first realm issue: You can look at Tongtianqiao in the early stage. The 10th floor is equal to the immortal realm, the 15th floor is equal to the title of a lord, the 18th floor is equal to the immortal king, and the 21st floor is equal to the venerable. Although the higher realm increases the combat power, it is not all. Comparable in terms of pure realm cannot compete with the real deal. The energy level itself cannot be ignored, and the realm accounts for half of the energy level. For example, the original book describes that Ke Di broke through the 20th floor of the Realm Lord Tongtian Mountain, and he had to barely kill the 15th level of the feudal lord without good equipment. In terms of realm, he had to be 5 levels higher than the feudal lord to even out the energy level gap. In the original work, Luo Feng passed the 16th floor of the Domain Lord Tongtian Mountain and broke through. When the Realm Lord's ninth-level armor is worn, it will give 1,000 Realm Lords the power to fight the Army Lord for immortality, and to give the armor to 10,000 Realm Lords, to fight the feudal princes for immortality, and to wear the Chaos Golden Wings, which will not be inferior to the Immortal in terms of speed. In terms of (realm, energy level, speed), this is the real leapfrog. The second point is the issue of energy level and size: Immortality and above are called divine power. Divine power can be divided into quality and quantity. Divine power can refer to quality, and quantity refers to the size of your divine body. Gene multiples also refer to the upper limit of divine power and quality. For example, 1 times the peak of genetic immortality is 100,000 divine power, and 10081 is the perfect gene. Because of the 1008.1 Million divine power, the same level of perception is tens of thousands times stronger than 1x the gene. The difference in divine power is like E-grade metal and G-grade metal. King Immortal can easily evaporate thousands of meters of E-grade metal, but cannot shake G-grade metal even if it is the size of a marble. This is the difference in divine power. The 100,000 genes of the divine power route are both great improvements in quality and quantity, especially the quantity The first level is 1 million kilometers tall The second level is 100 million kilometers tall The third level is light years tall and has a divine body weight The fourth level is 12 light years old and has a divine body weight I can't think of it. Think about the volume of the divine power of the Nine Nether Sea that turns into a spherical light-year light-year The volume of the divine power is based on the standard volume of one hundred thousand kilometers of the Law Come True God. A height of 1 million is 1,000 times the volume of 100,000. A height of 100 million kilometers is one billion of the volume of 100,000. Let's not talk about the light-year divine body, let's just say that the first level of the divine power route = the standard amount of 1000 true gods of law. If you are at the same level and the same realm, you can exchange 1 blood for 1 blood to kill the opponent. You still have 99.9% Of the divine power. If you don't take the divine power route, the opponent will be your big-level limit in all aspects. You must be 2 major-level limit realms higher to even the gap between you and a big-level energy level. Unexpectedly, It would be extremely poisonous to be able to reach 2 higher realms and still be stuck at a higher level. If you don't use the power of God, it would be 100,000 to break through the True God's mini-universe and it wouldn't reach 1 billion. It would be extremely poisonous after a set of operations. The third level issue: No matter what kind of plot content you want to write, don't forcefully write a battle plot that exceeds 2 major levels. The battle power is huge and extremely poisonous. Even if you go beyond one major level, it must be well-reasoned and well-founded. Each major level itself is to a certain extent (realm, energy level, speed, field of view, strike range), not to mention the gap between two major levels. This is not an urban novel, nor is it a low-level martial arts novel where you can use tricks to jump through a few levels and still kill indiscriminately. This is where you can practice and understand the laws of the universe. The background of the high-power Devouring Starry Sky novel The second major numerical issue Let's talk about the currency unit of Devouring Li first 1 Supreme Treasure = 3000-4000 Heavy Treasure Points are floating 1 Heavy Treasure Point = 1 trillion Hunyuan 1 Hunyuan = 1 trillion Cosmic Coin, 1 Cosmic Coin = 3300 Qianwu Coin 1 Qianwu Coin = 1000 Black Dragon Coin, 1 Black Dragon Coin = 1000 Silver Blue Coin The price of a living planet is 3 trillion Black Dragon Coins, there are 210,000 living planets in the Milky Way, and the price of a living planet will not exceed the cosmic currency. Over 910,000, 210,000 life balls are equivalent to 191.1 Billion cosmic coins. The price of a galaxy in the auction does not exceed 1 mixed yuan. There are 668 galaxies in the star field that are auctioned at high prices for only 1,000 mixed yuan. After reading 7 chapters and 18 chapters, the world owner can only use one galaxy as his territory. One Hunyuan can probably produce hundreds of millions of C9-level standard spaceships, tens of thousands of D9-level standard spaceships, and one E-level standard spaceship. For unclear reference, the C5-level spaceship sold for 12.8 Billion black dragon coins in Chapter 40 of Part 5 and the peak E9-level spaceship in Chapter 15 of Part 7 only cost 100 Hunyuan. The third major logic and setting problem The original star cannot teleport into the dark universe in the original universe. No matter where in the original universe, the power cannot exceed the sixth level. Only the combined attack of multiple people can exceed the sixth level power. Some authors have forced the setting of the original work to have no sixth level power limit, thinking it is a cool point, but it is actually a poisonous point. The pre-immortality realm can be divided into four major levels Basic - Artistic Concept - Domain - World The corresponding ones are star level, universe level, domain lord level, and world lord level If the star does not know the basics, there is no hope of breaking through the universe level, and the domain lord does not know the domain, there is no hope of breaking through the world lord level. If you don't understand, read 5 articles and 17 chapters The original universe has no upper limit on the speed of light in the dark universe, The speed is not affected per second: the ninth level of the star planet level It reaches 10 kilometers, the ninth-level star level reaches 150 kilometers, the ninth-level cosmic level reaches 1,000 kilometers, the ninth-level domain lord reaches 10,000 kilometers, the ninth-level world lord reaches 150,000 kilometers, and the immortal reaches the speed of light 300,000 kilometers. The original universe cannot exceed the speed of light. When the speed of the military master to the king and beyond is based on the initial speed explosion gap, in the universe sea, the master of the universe can reach a hundred times the speed of light, and the speed god can reach a million times the speed of light. Teleport: Immortality is several light years away, the Venerable is 1,000 light years away, the Lord of the Universe is 10,000 light years away, and the True God is 1 million light years away. The original cosmic units are from large to small: star regions. Star regions. Galaxies. Solar systems The human race has 1008 star regions and higher cosmic countries, such as the star region and the high-level witch kingdom, which has more than 13,000 star regions and hundreds of millions of galaxies. The star regions are such as the medium-sized Black Dragon Mountain Empire. There are more than 8,000 galaxies, including eight galaxies under the control of the Elementary Silver-Blue State. For example, the Milky Way has a size of 100,000 light-years in the Silver-Blue State. Some people write the distance scale poorly, as if they have not gone out to face each other in the background of the universe. It is ridiculous to say that the distance is very far away. Also, the concepts of each major level of power in the original work are described In the context of the universe, it is still written in an urban style. It is funny to go out and say that you are immediately discovered and fought by major forces. In the context of Devouring the Universe, only the direct participants and affiliated forces know that the aftermath of the battle light erupting from the Immortals will affect all the world lords and below to the Death Capital. If the battle between the strong in Immortals affects tens of millions of kilometers and hundreds of millions of kilometers, there is no such thing as eating. People, the writing is logical and funny The low-level writing method is also funny, such as killing ordinary people by killing the domain lord with headshots and blowing away the immortal body to death. You don't understand the original work at all and write it blindly. The most important thing is to write and devour the fans and randomly change some basic settings. According to Dinghe's description, for example, the most slaves are at the universe level, and the domain masters and above have life cores that will not kill them if they hit the head, and they can get rid of the slave chip. There are plots of selling the world master for 50 hunyuan. Let me tell you, even the ninth level of the elite world master recognized by the law is worth only 10 hunyuan. Breaking through reincarnation will only break through the real void within 3 reincarnations. The Queen of the Void's requirement to enter reincarnation within one year has nothing to do with your realm. Even if you have the realm of God King, you can stay for 3 reincarnations without breaking through the void. Even a spaceship with 1 times the speed of light can escape in an hour. The range of 1.08 Billion kilometers and 1 billion light-years is far more than 10,000 large and small galaxies. It can hold the size of 1 trillion galaxies. It can only be said that the concept of space in the mind is one line at a time. Understanding it in the form of one line can indeed only hold 10,000 galaxies. The first picture is the description of the original work. The second picture starts with the chapters that I collected from all kinds of poisonous and outrageous descriptions of the fandoms. The math is not enough to describe it. The Lord of the Universe surpassed 2 large levels and killed 3 True Gods of the Void. The original God of the Void completes the small universe from 10 billion to 20.5 Billion. I thought it was a great basic setting. It said that the true god in the void level was forced to go through reincarnation. There were logical problems in the plot of selling garbage to the slaves of the realm master and selling a random number of 50 Hunyuan. Immortality shocked the domain master's domain power. He was forced to be at the venerable level and the sixth-level combat power was set blindly. He really didn't understand the original combat power system. If there was no limit on the number of pictures, I could send dozens of pictures

I'm here, and you're already in a credibility crisis. I have doubts about whether you can write this book well.

I have read 123 chapters of this book so far, and I have read some of the paid chapters. To be honest, they are crappy. 1. The plot is copied from the original work, and the logic is completely illogical. For example, Hong and Lei Shen clearly knew their talents when they were on Earth. When they first joined the Fallen Ink Planet, they could take the initiative to introduce them to Babata. They had to wait until they were fighting the Golden Horned Behemoth to let Babata sigh about their talents, and then let them join after the battle. There is also a spaceship to go to the universe. The protagonist clearly knows that the intelligent system of the spacecraft detects the attack and self-destructs within 30 seconds, but does not remind Babata that he must suffer this loss and delay repairing the spacecraft. However, he still writes that he is in a hurry to go to the universe. You know but act like you don't know, you should know but act like you don't know, they are completely different concepts, do you understand? The first is that he has his own plan, and the second is that the writing is simply not good enough, and the protagonist is like a **. Or is the protagonist preparing to cover up when he has shown so many of his abnormalities? Then I wonder if you haven't written it out that the protagonist wants to pretend. What you wrote is that the protagonist has no idea at all 2. It doesn't make sense at the beginning. What you said you should do at the beginning is forgotten later. When he entered the universe for the first time, he was still talking about preparing things for the Nuo Lanshan family in advance. It would be fine if the protagonist was still a planet and couldn't afford the earth. It was obvious that he would be a star when he fought the Golden Horned Behemoth. He could go to the universe to get the assets and register them. He had to wait for Nuo Lanshan to come to confirm that it was an unowned planet and then fight. Especially since you said before that you should prepare for this matter, your preparation means that you are not prepared, right? 3. The plots are stiff and obscure. Take the previous protagonist signing a contract to go to the God of War training camp as an example. The protagonist signed the contract and said he would go to the headquarters later. But before that, the protagonist has obviously been in the wilderness for a while, what are the details? In just one sentence, the protagonist played for a month and then went to the headquarters. ? That's it? Look at what Luo Feng did in the original novel when members of the Vulcan team used genetic potions. Luo Feng went to a small county town to practice monster training crazily and earned the title of "madman". At the same time, he interspersed the opinions of the supporting character Wan Dong, and also wrote about Luo Feng selling monster materials to the base employees for money. There was some exchange between the two parties. This is the details, this is why the characters in the original work are more realistic. And as the author, how do you write it, just keep brushing it, what about the monster material? You didn't write anything about whether it was sold or not, when it was sold, and how much it was sold for. At least write down how much the monster materials sold for before going to the headquarters, right? You were writing earlier that the protagonist has no money to buy the fourth level of the Nine-fold Thunder Sword, so why don't you write about how many monsters the protagonist has killed and how much the difference is, so as to deepen the reader's impression and make the plot look more real? I will examine myself three times every day. I don't expect your writing to improve by leaps and bounds. At least it should be improved compared to the previous two books, right? I tried my best to finish reading the last book, but this book... Hehe, the new book is still eunuch. You are simply hopeless. What a waste of my time

Recommend some novels written by Swallowing Starry Sky fans.

The Nine Tribulations and the Star Tower are really poisonous. It is better to create an original one. The author will not write the things that appear in the original text. How do you plan to use the Star Tower?

I have a lot of things to complain about Brother, the chapters you write all day long are either shocking or holy shit. They are either so horrifying or make people gasp. Are you from the UC shock department?

Don't think about how good Babata is. If he is not a spiritual master and he is easy to contact, he might be slaved. Think about what his original master did.

Why so many shocks? The dianniang server was shaken down.

The Zerg Mother Queen cannot break through without the realization of becoming a king. The Immortal Mother Queen is at least the limit of becoming a king.

Repeatedly reminding the Devouring fandom not to go beyond 2 major levels, I think it is cool, but in fact the extremes will turn readers away The Domain Lord can move up to 10,000 kilometers per second The Lord of the Universe can move 100 times the speed of light The True God can reach a million times the speed of light Do you think the True God of Void is faster than the Lord of the Universe Some Devouring The fan author writes a self-deprecating article, if you don't want to be the same, don't do it Picture 1-2 The master of the universe kills the true God of the Void Picture 3-6 The master of the domain kills the immortal in a second Picture 7-10 The master of the domain kills the venerable and threatens to die if the true god comes over

Why do you feel that the top-level meeting in your book is like child's play? 😜 Even if an individual is excellent, it has not affected the ethnic group. Are top-level meetings that cheap?

He has been trying to steal Luo Feng's opportunity without making any amends! The "Nine Tribulations Secret Code" has also been cultivated, so what should Luo Feng cultivate? There are restrictions in the "Nine Tribulations Secret Code", and you can only practice it alone! To persuade people to quit, they have been racking up points and drawing prizes. There is no plot or development at all, and the preface does not match the follow-up! The plot jumps around suddenly without any communication between the characters. There is no turning description, no foreshadowing, and the context cannot be distinguished. It is worse than a primary school student's composition.

After a brief look, I found that several plots were copied and pasted without changing the name: for example, the protagonist's name was Yang Wu, and then pasted as Luo Feng; another example was going to the Qiulong Star to sell the Green Dragon Sword, but it was pasted as an arc knife disk. Haha, anyway, the author said it was just to make money, not shabby.

I'm actually very curious about the author, why do you think the protagonist pretending not to know can deceive such a big boss who can see everything about you at a glance 😰 In front of an experienced policeman, he can tell you are lying just by looking at you... Psychology experts will tell you when they see a small move. Can you tell that you are lying... Why do you think that the kind of boss who can destroy the planet in a single thought can't tell 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

Shocked, shocked, shocked, sensational... The author is really suitable for reporting in UC, and the protagonist talks too much about psychology, and there is a lot of nonsense. What could have been solved in one sentence, the author will first describe the incident, then a psychological description about the incident, then a psychological description of the above, and then a summary. I have to say, author, your "Water Emperor's Sutra" has been perfected, no, I admire it, I admire it.

Come on, come on, there are so many heroines, so many heroines, aliens, female aliens👽

Discourage! I'm seriously trying to persuade you to quit. You could have just brought the original work over, but you changed the name and the main character's name. It's really a lot of hard work.

The chapter list is full of shocked **, excited **, and confused **. I can't choose any other title. If there are not 100 chapters, there must be 80 chapters. Trash really doesn't deserve a book. Opportunities are all the protagonist's. Star Tower and Duandong River were both taken away. Just changing the protagonist's name didn't change anything.

It's a rubbish book. I won't read the original work? The lines are basically the same, and the custom settings are fakes that don't match the original work. It's a complete mess when you add more stuff without even having a basic understanding. Every time it is not enough. It's a book that is written as a fan fiction and is just a deceptive book.

There is a system and you still seize the opportunity, I can't bear it, both blessings are a bunch of garbage, and the chapter time jumps too much, there is no coherence.

Which one do you support? 1. Single female protagonist 2. Multiple female protagonists 3. No female protagonist 4. Male and female protagonists

Breeding a clone The whole World Tree seedling is used to breed it, wouldn't it be better to just have some fragments?

I recommend a book by the Devouring fan "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits", it's really good and highly recommended

If you need strength, there are cheats, if you need IQ, there are cheats, and you have a sense of superiority, and the writing is terrible.

I feel that most of the fandoms of Swallowing Stars on the market tend to be a bit nanny-ish, either deliberately trying to please him or thinking about him no matter what they do, or there are things that are destined to be his. Well, I want you to be the protagonist, not a supporting role. And if you don't have the determination and self-confidence to reach the top, then why are you the protagonist? Especially for fans who are basically system-flowing, it will make people speechless. As for the irreversible trend, Luo Feng's strength has not yet become a general trend! Just protect him like this. You have already said that you are the protagonist of this book, and you are the main trend. Besides, Luo Feng's opportunity has been cut off. It's okay to make up for it and seek comfort, but it's boring to keep mentioning him.

The first third of the story is okay, you can read it, because I have seen even worse movies. Before the Earth came out, Goldfinger radiated the entire cosmic sea and made all the powerful people aware of it. Just now something was spying on them, so I just looked at one and it was disgusting for a long time. What the hell! ?

There are too many pitfalls. Where is the Ancestral Tree? Where did the system go?