
Pirate's Concrete Fruit
海贼之具象果实
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 212k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I can't figure out why a time-traveler who normally knows the plot would get on Luffy's ship. He must at least have an IQ of Spongebob level.
Build a building, and you can talk about all the ideas about concrete fruits. There is no limit to the content including attributes, moves, etc.
Everyone is welcome to give their opinions, both good and bad will be accepted. It is helpful for Lonely and Widow to write this book well.
The fruit's ability is seriously beyond the standard. In fact, the Sharingan has come out. Let's just call it the God Fruit. There should be some restrictions on the concrete fruit. For example, if you want to concrete a gun, you should at least know the specific data of each part of the gun. The same goes for building a ship.
I'm thinking that since developing the fruit and using it requires physical strength, but you set it to be able to materialize anything, then just use a Superman serum with Kryptonian blood, and you can have unlimited physical strength by basking in the sun. Even if it only lasts a few seconds, use the super brain to quickly develop the fruit, and then use Superman's body to materialize a complete serum. Wouldn't it make you directly invincible? Why do you do so many bells and whistles? Isn't the concrete ability the same as the idealistic ability of Silver Superman? You just created a Silver Superman. With so many anime skills, can you compare to my Shirogane Super One Punch? No way. It's so fancy that it's dazzling to see. Wouldn't the pattern be bigger if you do it this way? From pirates to all the worlds, you haven't set an upper limit anyway, so it's reasonable for me to do it this way. Looking at so many novels, the protagonists' skills are flashy and cannot be integrated into a system. This anime is a little bit together, that anime is a little bit like that, and the novels are all messed up in the end. 🙂🙂🙂
There's no problem with the boat flow, but it's too much with almost no plot changes for the protagonist. The author also often forgets that the protagonist can fly.
Follow the protagonist, do you have the supporting role aura? The journey of the protagonist is very thrilling. How many episodes can you survive if you don't follow a stable and safe force, and you don't want to grow up?
The fruit's ability is seriously beyond the standard, and there are no restrictions on the activation of the ability. Even if the fantasy weapon can be realized, it still has its original function. This kind of uncontrolled combination will break down in the middle and later stages to be honest.
How should I put it? It is better to say it is a fantasy than a concrete one. You can get whatever you want. After reading the plot, I feel that it will collapse very badly later on. Secondly. Is the author watching the TV version? Rogue Town—the entrance to the Grand Line—should be followed by Rab, not the Thousand-Year Dragon Movie. 😒I was really speechless after seeing it, and there was no way I could deceive myself. After all, the entrance to the Grand Line is a rapid, and once you step on it, there is no possibility of turning back. It's not a canal either. There is a stable zone in the middle that can complement the plot. For me, this book has completely collapsed.
At present, I feel that the author's writing is pretty good. It's not a running account. Come on, I'm looking forward to it later.
About the author: A new writer, three months into writing, his first book is This Eunuch
Not many people like to watch the boat flow... Let alone the idiot who follows Luffy. Without the halo of the protagonist, he would have been completely cold.
This book is really good, it's exactly like watching the anime, the plot remains basically the same.
Since writing tools are now available, you have to write about your imagination. There are basically no fans of the original work. Search for cheats on the Internet. There is no copyright for these. If you write them directly in combination with the book, won't the content be there? Once the content is available, readers will come, right?
Are the thirty-six heavenly gangs and the seventy-two evil spirits not enough for you? The weakened version is still awesome, why does it have to be those so-called anime moves and skills?
This fruit ability reminds me of King's Treasure and Infinite Sword System.
You can use telekinesis to lift Moo Moo up. Why is it so tiring to fight? Why don't you just use telekinesis to lift Aaron up? Even if you don't have enough power to control it, wouldn't it be nice to lift it up so that he has no place to borrow strength?
It's all anime content. Not many authors can correctly understand the power of the mythical world and don't know how to write about it.