Enter Douluo with the Emperor's Armor

First of all, your idea of ​​writing an article must be okay. The cause, process, and results of the incident have all been roughly described, and you have been writing, right? Don't worry about other people's comments about you. Let me tell you your article ideas and so on. Everything else is fine. The only problem is the writing style, or more accurately, the word count. How to put it is how to fill up a paragraph and make up the word count. Just like the book review I just sent you, it is also a short description of a scene. You wrote one sentence, and I wrote a long sentence. I can make up 3,000 words as soon as possible, and then I can play with my mobile phone and fish. , But you need to use your brain to write deeper and more scenes. The result of such hard writing is a blank. No matter how you think about it, you can't figure out what will happen next, which is the so-called [cavin] The most basic and important part of a work is called [outline]. [Outline] is the backbone of all articles. You can make jokes, make jokes, and even write fan fiction in an article. , But the only thing is that it cannot go beyond the [outline], this article you wrote, he said it is an article, more accurately, it is an [outline], although there is not so much meat and water in this article, but there are bones in it, Finally, I will give you,,, suggestion,, I recommend that you read other novels on the list to add some inspiration and experience in water novels, and on the other hand, continue to complete this [outline] After you finish writing the outline , you can further change this novel, fill it with water, and complete it. Although because of the nature of fan fiction and because it is a relatively unpopular fan, it may not go too far, but it will definitely be the first good article you have ever written. Do you know the once popular "Apocalypse Forecast"? This book was originally written for fun, and then it was revised many times and became a book that dominated the list at that time. It is actually similar to yours. As long as you dare to write and improve it, although you can't say it is ahead, it can still be on the list.

This book is good in every way. The only problem is that it contains too much vernacular.

First of all, there are only two purple gods in the God Realm, God Shura and God Luosha. Let me say another thing, even if it is the original work, although they have purple parts on their bodies, they are not "people covered in purple". This is a language problem, and then "Who are you! You actually attracted help from heaven." This is also a language problem. This sentence is divided into two situations. , One of them is that this god has not observed the protagonist, that is, "who and what are you, who have attracted the attention of Heaven, and have been given power"; the other is that God has observed the protagonist, "who are you, who have attracted the attention of Heaven," come on, let us understand these words. [In the God Realm, who knows how many light-years away from the Douluo Star, the gods simultaneously felt the rhythm of Heaven. In one of the temples, a purple shadow shrouded in chaos rose from a tall throne. His eyes looked forward as if in the void in front of him, as if he saw the protagonist "Who are you, who have attracted the favor of Heaven?"] Can't the author even make up the word count, so he just wrote it by force? ? ?

With innate soul power level 25, Su Yuntao asked you if you wanted to join the Spirit Hall. You said no. Why wouldn't you join if you have no enmity or grievances against the Spirit Hall? I thought you had a plan and a better place to go, but you ended up traveling long distances for half a month to the Qibao Glazed Sect to be Ning Rongrong's dog? The following original text: (Ning Rongrong continued: " First, you can't be closer than ten meters away from me. Second, you can't look directly at me. Fourth, you must obey all my orders.) You will become a master after you go to Wuhun Hall. Satisfied Two years later, Ning Rongrong was promoted to level 11, and you were promoted to level 5. Why? Because Ning Rongrong made trouble for you as soon as you started practicing. There has been no progress in your relationship with Ning Rongrong for two years and you still haven't even spoken a few words Why are you addicted to being a dog?

The Emperor's Armor is indeed the spokesperson of Heaven, but Wang Chen is not, The Emperor's Armor is indeed the strongest in the Ming Realm, but Wang Chen is not, The Emperor's Armor is indeed the king of armor, but Wang Chen is not, It is not so much that the Emperor's Armor possesses Wang Chen, but that Wang Chen is forcibly regarded as the summoner of the Emperor's Armor. Therefore, Tiandao may all be enemies, or they may all be friends.

Friends may not always be friends, and enemies may not always be enemies. An enemy may be pretending to be a friend, and a friend may be regarded as an enemy. Friends may not be understood for a lifetime, and enemies may not be discovered for a lifetime, but they may be discovered at the end of life but there is no way. Our characters may not be friends who make it happen, and enemy characters may not always hide it from us. But evil cannot defeat good. This is the tradition since ancient times.

The tall armor is paired with the maggots in the sewer, which brings up the theme of unhealthy outlook.

Ordinary people can defeat the gods, but the emperor's armor can't destroy the world?

Everything inexplicable is related to the way of heaven, and only the way of heaven can control everything. If anyone can control Wang Chen, then his strength must be powerful, so powerful that it is incomparable. He may even be unable to resist the emperor's armor, but only in this way can Wang Chen have a goal. After all, who can work hard to do something that is bound to succeed?

Wait, I think I discovered something amazing! The consciousness of heaven turns into a wife? ? Then the pig's foot is the emperor, and the emperor = the will of heaven = the pig's foot and his wife. In this way, the pig's foot = wife, so the final conclusion is that the pig's foot is hermaphroditic! Do it yourself? ? Is this what you mean?

This book reminds me of another book. The protagonist battles wits and courage with the enemy, poisoning, revealing trump cards, and so on. Then in his book, the son of destiny does not care about the enemy when he encounters them.

Joining the Qibao Glazed Sect is worse than joining the Spirit Hall

I saw some people discussing that the protagonist does not have the spirit of a king. In fact, this is not important. Kaiyi and all the summoners in the movie are the opposite of Armor. The Wind Eagle Armor is supposed to be strong-willed, but the summoner Dongshan turns out to be a loser, and the summoner of the Exploding Flame Dragon Xinnan is a hard-core bastard. Brother Orange, the black rhinoceros summoner of water, has a bigger temper than anyone else. Ziyang in the movie has no imperial majesty at all. (It can even be said to be affable and approachable). It doesn't matter whether you have the aura of a king or not, as long as you don't do anything wrong, it doesn't matter.

I'm a bit dissatisfied. This article looks more like a stage play, the kind of casual acting. The protagonist and supporting characters have no psychological activities, but there is still some psychological activity for the protagonist. However, it doesn't look like it. It always feels like everyone in the world is like a puppet, acting according to the script, without any flesh and blood. The script seems to be a water-filled sponge, with no nutrition at all except water. In short, the writing is not strong enough.

How to give emotions to characters and depict the worldview is a required course. Don't forget what the Chinese teacher said

…After reading a few chapters, I personally feel that it's really not that good.

It's not very good. I took a look and found that I've read 100 chapters before. Why is it not in my bookshelf? Maybe it's not to my taste.

I hope your next book will leave a lasting impression on the streets

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. The stone man in Danghun Mountain sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders the demon to the north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, but love cannot match the persistence of tears. Destiny means success or failure. The immortal regrets but I don't. I knew at an early age that the world would be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero in the clouds. The cold wind blows all the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walks alone. Thousands of times of hard work and painstaking efforts cast iron, and exhaustive efforts are devoted to forging a sword. Now the sword is pointing at the clouds, refining Gu, refining people, and refining heaven.

Xiantian level 25, the protagonist is close to death after refusing to join the Spirit Hall.

Is the author interested in writing the Legend of the Dragon King or Peerless Tang Sect fan fiction in the next book? Elements of Naruto. The martial soul is the Sharingan or the Ten-Tails. Single heroine or dual heroines. It's just an idea. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

Whatever you say, that's the kind of person I am, and that's the kind of book I write. No one forces you to read the book I write, so I'm willing to write it this way.

When the time comes, I recommend you to open a new book. Don't write about fan fiction. Just do it as a fan. It seems quite simple. , The setting can be set up directly, but it will also be limited by the two original concepts of Douluo Continent and Armored Warrior. Generally, it is recommended for veterans to control it, otherwise someone in the comment area will use these two settings to criticize you, and most people will be directly said that it is a mess. As for sealing the book, there may be different situations, just like the ultra-low-latitude cultivation setting of Douluo Continent [the peak god is not even as good as a normal missile] the Emperor Armor [the technical support at the time originally supported Ultraman, so its own setting is linked to the normal Ultraman Explosion Star] These two concepts are very difficult to control. When the world combat power is too low and the world combat power is too high, even the original author and great writer Tang Jia Sanshao cannot touch it [Although it is mainly due to the collision of ideas, it is also because he keeps increasing the combat power behind his back while eating up his own original settings, which has a lot to do with it.] At that time, I recommend that you write the outline and directly write your own original work according to the similar settings. , It can be changed into a story about fighting in a special world such as Energy Battle Kai, which can avoid the reason for most people to argue.

Are there any skills in the armor arcade that you can refer to?

The first two can be withdrawn, there is no logic at all.

Take one step at a time, there is no logic, and such a good subject is wasted.

What the hell is he writing? He's telling you to read more and you won't listen.

Can the one that tests soul power in the Awakening of the Martial Soul only test level 10? How did you measure your level 25?

The author edits and writes the story, and we just listen to the story.

The author later lets the protagonist go to the world of martial arts and fairy tales, such as Zhu Xian Qing Yun Zhi, Sword Dynasty, Jiang Ye, Choi Tian Ji, Hua Qian Gu, Fairy Sword, etc.