Hogwarts: Wizards of the East

I skipped through this novel, so you can see if something is wrong. I can't say they are somewhat similar, but they are almost exactly the same

What you wrote in the first few pictures is really uncomfortable. It feels like you want to imitate the dragon clan, but the result is that the tiger is not the anti-dog feeling. The writing is like a weird novel, not like a HP novel at all. It makes people feel uncomfortable.

Why do Chinese people use Western names such as magic academy and wizard? It is the world of Harry Potter, but this world is not dominated by the West. Doesn't the East have mysterious power?

For the first time, I found it so difficult to enter an academy and read a book. It took me more than 50 chapters from the beginning to get in.

Alas, I was persuaded to quit watching the scene where the train was attacked. The main character was attacked even though he didn't know anything. It was so weird.

It's too watery. We just arrived at school in chapter fifty-seven. In fact, you can compress these into ten chapters. How long has it been since the protagonist was reborn? He has encountered so many things. Once on the train, once in the hotel, once after returning home, and once in the car to go to school. These are actually unnecessary. One time is too much. Writing so many words directly consumes people's desire to read. You have not captured the point that people want to read. It is mainly the school. Didn't the author realize that the more people go on to comment, the less people will comment.

I don't feel much else, it's just very verbose, and I'll get a lot of words out of it if I enter the school. If I write it to the end like this, I don't know how many words I'll have to write.

The plot starting from the train ride is very confusing and quite discouraging.

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The plot progressed too slowly, and it didn't feel very exciting. It made me feel uncomfortable watching it. Couldn't the author's pace be a little faster? There are some parts that I really can't understand. For example, the part before entering school is too long-winded. The explanation is very detailed, but I don't see what's so exciting about it at all? It should also be important to write novels to create explosive points and attract readers, right? If you just create a gorgeous and majestic worldview, to be honest, it is not that attractive on an online platform. Times have changed, right? Tell the truth, please forgive me if I offend you.

What a water. Full of moisture, the content is dry and bland. Out of 5 points, I can only give it 2.8 Points for theme creativity and +2 points.

Just buy a novice equipment, you can do so much, your master Bai Suzhen! And I don't want to know at all. In that era, there were many trains, dirty and messy, and there were no instructors? What to do if you are cheated, what to do if something goes wrong along the way? Is our country's system so bad?

It's okay. The setting is quite new. I can't see much in just three chapters. I'll save it first.

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง, don't be a eunuch

I think it's better not to be too arrogant in the strength system. It can be rebuilt, and it can be learned from foreign systems, but if some gods suddenly fall or ascend, it's too unnecessary.

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If you feel that the first ten chapters are a bit delayed, you can start reading directly from the tenth chapter. Below is the plot of the first ten chapters. Clicking on it risks spoilers. ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————- The admission letter to the School of Magic is not Hogwarts, it's the school in China. If you know these things, you can start reading from Chapter 10. Friends who come to read the book, please read this comment before reading 🙂🙂🙂 I hope Haihan will post anything that is offensive, and the author will not delete it. I will keep it and encourage myself every day!

Chinese wizards should practice Jiuzhuan Xuan Gong. They do not rely on the spiritual energy of heaven and earth to practice, but rely on the earthly evil energy in the earth. The earth is not dispersed and the evil spirit is never extinguished. Why are there no wizards in the world?

Emmmmm, the name of this college is too funny

The book review honestly didn't deceive me. After almost two chapters, I seemed to have seen Mumu Gongyan's three-pointer again.

This is the most ridiculous novel I have ever seen. I could even read a chapter on the toilet on the train. I'm convinced. Can anyone kindly tell me how many pictures I have for entering the school?

In the front, it would be more logical to change the description of wizards, magic schools, etc. To extraordinary Taoist priests... You don't really think that the old Taoist priests who provide the talisman practice method agree with this statement... Since you plan to write a localized book, you should get the details right... Otherwise, this book is really nondescript, so it is better to just read the fanfic

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The sea, the sea (singing) ntnd is all water. If I hadn't read the book reviews, I would never have guessed that this book arrived at school after more than 50 chapters, and I even thought it was a fantasy wrapped in Harry Potter skin. The previous chapters were too cumbersome to explain the causes and consequences. No one wanted to read about his family experience in the 1990s. Emergency incidents are happening one after another. Isn't it a bit too much?

Just a Harry Potter? ? ? Why not add Marvel? ? ?

When I went to school, I encountered all kinds of problems, which made me feel a little numb! Baby

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