Fu Song

I've seen half of it, and I feel pretty good in the early stages. The architectural framework is all there. But the characters collapsed in the mid-term. For later layout, Xiao's father and Xiao's mother were forcibly written to death. In order for the three of them to be their own masters, the three parties stand in harmony. Xiao Cheng's wisdom, written in the early stage, is that he has no plans, but at such a critical time in the mid-term, he is busy expanding his power, leaving his parents and sisters behind, without any arrangements, and will not find out who killed his parents afterwards. He is dedicated to the Song Dynasty. Is there really such a great person? Isn't his original intention not to let the emperor control the fate of his family? As a result, the whole family was gone, and the characters before and after were seriously inconsistent. The third sister is also very talented in writing, and she is very intelligent in some important plots. Could she not be able to figure out who killed her parents? Will you sleep with your enemy? Or was it a minor who did this on purpose for revenge? That's really scary, and the author's synopsis really doesn't want to guess. It looked interesting at first, but turned out to be quite disappointing.

I would like to ask the author, do you plan to write a single female protagonist?

The outline was originally good, but the more I wrote it, the worse it became. The latter bit does not match the protagonist's IQ

The writing is good, the author is very serious, although the update is slow, the quality is high. Please stick with it, all 4 votes are for you

Who asked the author if he ever looked back at what he wrote and said what the hell was going on? ? What exactly do you want to express? ? And have you ever read history, geography, and politics? ? Do you write novels just to make some money by updating them? ? ? Please reply

The gunman has become more and more nonsense starting from Xuntang. Xuntang inexplicably liberates the bottom class and obviously has a red rhythm. To be honest, I really can't understand how the author allows one person to directly complete what others have spent hundreds of years doing. The new book is also inexplicable. He controlled the military power in the Song Dynasty, but he actually felt that he could not succeed. It was never that internal rebellions in the Song Dynasty could not succeed, but that no one had ever controlled the military power since the release of military power over a cup of wine. How could the protagonist fail if he can control the army? As a result, after running the business during the day, everyone in the family died, and I was still struggling to be a grandson.

There is no theme. After dozens of chapters, there is no mention of rebellion, destruction of the Liao Dynasty, or anything else. I just keep boasting about how awesome the protagonist is and how many secrets he has laid. Is that any use? Writing an online article about fast food is too long-winded. It's a waste of time. No wonder I'm angry.

I can't help but complain. The protagonist's intelligence is unparalleled in the previous article. However, I am speechless since the betrayal of the Sun family. A gang leader who has been ignored has no idea how many spies he has, and he actually recruits thousands of people without knowing it? Tiangong Iron Art was burned, dozens of members of the Han family were silenced, and yet there was no vigilance at all? Didn't you even do anything to investigate the person behind the scenes? It is true that the rebellion he committed did not even make proper arrangements for the family's escape. If his father could not arrange it, neither could the rest of the family? Even if it is to pave the way for the rebellion later in the chapter, there is no need to write it so bluntly! Alas, seeing this is like suddenly finding a few dead cockroaches in a plate of good food! Will the eldest brother also die inexplicably in the later chapters?

The author speaks a thousand words and ten thousand words. If you don't change your writing thinking, you're destined to be in the cold. Good works can only make people feel happy, but your works... It's hard to describe in just one word

At the beginning, the protagonist is deliberately written to be omnipotent, and then there are a lot of explanations about the state machinery. In order to cater to the needs of the TV series, the father and mother died and the sister was sent to the enemy country. . . Gunslinger's writing standards are in trouble

Xiao Sanniang is such a smart and considerate woman, but you push her into the abyss. I still can't understand this. Is she the protagonist or Xiao Er? Why do you have to rely on a woman to get things done? Why do you want her to marry his murderer and change her name? Is this a fun game? Is it interesting that this book has such routines? Or are you the author, the victim, and you want to make things difficult for us? The country is promoting beauty, but you strip away the darkest things in reality and tell us that this is life? I really don't understand where so much love and hatred come from. I create something beautiful and at the same time destroy it with my own hands, and then I clap my hands and tell us that this is reality. If this is the case, I can only say that the author is awesome and you win. You have made me less interested in the so-called future.

It is recommended that the author promote the previously updated book, otherwise old readers will not know about it.

Hehe, what the hell is this lady going to Liao? What kind of weird plot is this? How many smart people don't know that Liao is the most likely person to do this? Go to the enemy's house? 3 The lady can't think of the protagonist? Will you not massacre Liao from now on? What will happen if the three ladies know the truth in the future? The protagonist will not be able to uncover the truth after decades of life? Since the protagonist of this book travels through Han people, it must be talking about Han orthodoxy. If the ancients didn't have this idea, would there be a protagonist who knew history? I rarely post book reviews. But the author's ideas are too poisonous. I guess I am preparing to open the next book. Marriage is not a question of whether you are worthy or not. No matter how good a person is, how can he be compared to your enemy who killed your father and mother? If you want to write that the third lady goes to Liao, you shouldn't let this guy kill the protagonist's parents, which is a mortal enemy, unless the third lady you portray is a selfish and self-reliant person. Otherwise, the 3 ladies going to Liao will not be consistent with the character image you created. A girl who is so smart, kind, strong and loves her family, why would you let her be with her own enemy who killed her father and mother?

Disgusting. Damn, disgusting. It's so disgusting. Just to show that you, the author, are unique, do you write the plot in such a disgusting way? ? Someone killed your father and your mother, why are you going to marry him?

In ancient times, drinking on the battlefield was to build up courage. The protagonist went to the battlefield to get drunk in order to kill someone? If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist

The cover doesn't look very suitable for the book's subject matter.

What era are you in? Writing online articles and engaging in all kinds of bloody plots is outdated. It makes sense that you are not popular.

Brothers, this is not a malicious slander. Without talking about the content of this book, let's talk about my feelings after reading a few of his books. The book that gave me the worst feeling is probably the book "Prancing Horses". The content is extremely depressing and does not have the heroism brought by the war. The author's ideas are very poisonous. Maybe if I am not satisfied, you will not be able to feel better. Although real life is bitter, for me, only by yearning for beauty can I have it. But the author opened my wounds one by one. It's not that I can't watch the abuse, but no one really likes this feeling. If one or two books have this kind of content, it can only be said that the author has changed his taste. But if this book is like this, then it is not a matter of content. For example, it's like the person you love most turns away from you after spending the sweetest time, your best brother stabs you at a critical moment, and the person you're closest to is facing family destruction at any time. This is what the author expresses in these books. I have to say that you are really poisonous, not only in your thoughts, but also in your treatment of people and things. During the time I didn't read his book, I became more energetic several times.

Seeing the results of this book, another fifth-level power has fallen. Sad! What a shame!

Sanniangzi's father and mother died at the hands of Ye Lujun. I can accept it if Sanniangzi is kidnapped and taken to the Liao Kingdom in the plot later! But if you arrange for the third lady to be with Ye Lujun in the end, I definitely won't be able to accept it.

It is a pirated version of Xuntangkan. After this book is put on the shelves, it must be fully subscribed and supported.

I want to ask if he will rebel, or if he will continue to live for the coward?

I don't know why, but the protagonists in most articles about the Song Dynasty have a weak and scholarly spirit. The writing style is not bad, but the things they do are clumsy. There are no heroic or unrestrained protagonists.

I haven't read it for a long time. The Gunner has opened a new book. I support it. I feel that Xun Tang lacks a lot of details and is a little bit more complicated. I hope this book can be fuller. The sadness of the little characters or the growth of love and hatred can make the story more complete.

It's so disgusting. I advise those who come here not to read it. Writing Xiao Yu to death was disgusting to me. In the early stage, the protagonist kept insisting that he should not become a lamb to be slaughtered. He kept developing his own power, but in the end, his parents died in front of him. It was really a waste of time in the novel.

After reading novels for more than ten years, I saw that the author was going to write a story about Xiao Sanmei and Ye Lujun. I couldn't help but download Qidian. I just wanted to curse. Kill the father, kill the mother, and then become the child's mother again. The author's three views are true🐮. I have basically read all the Gunman's novels, and it is impossible to read his novels again in the future.