Armored Successor of Versatile Mage

The story is okay, but the writing is too naive. It's hard to watch. The dialogue between the characters is verbose and low-key, just like the old man and old lady basking in the sun in the TV series. It's been a long time without any nutrition. The relationship with the original characters is also written in a disgusting way, making it stomach-churning to read. For example, in Zhankong, it was written so that the protagonist would come up with ideas for high school students to gain experience, etc. It was too deliberate. It was written like that kind of two-legged guy who would be overjoyed when his master gave him a bone. It was so awesome. A lot of fan fiction is like this, writing that the protagonist has a good relationship with a person of status in the original work is just like being a loser. Many of the protagonists are like the Yakuza. The author calls this casualness. Then all kinds of big shots like it when they see the protagonist acting like a gangster, and they feel that he is independent and not rigid.

Live again, why should I say again?

It was okay to refuse to save her. Later, Mo Fan helped Liu Ru entrust the hunting station to protect him. In the end, he wanted to use Liu Ru's physique to turn her into a demon and serve as his subordinate, but he did not do it because of the bottom line of the country. Later, it was written that Liu Ru went out alone. He happily watched others turn her into a vampire for him, and then came out to get others. The title of the chapter was called "Save or not", "It's better not to save", and there were three exclamation marks? After killing the enemy, he waited for Liu Ru to be transformed, knocked Liu Ru out and carried her back. Lingling asked him why he was so rude to girls. He also said that she was a monster and did not deserve his gentleness. He also thought that even if the monster was killed, it would be fine. He also wrote that Lingling wanted to dissect Liu Ru's psychological activities, although she had some scruples and would not do so, but I really vomited. If I were the client, I would never come to your bullshit hunting place, and there would be no bones left after being plotted. I can't stand it when I refuse to save her. No obligation means no obligation. But you accepted someone else's commission, took the money, and why did you use the so-called reasons of going out alone instead of doing it yourself? You can plan to use her when she falls to this point, and you are still very happy without feeling guilty at all. It is really vicious and disgusting. Based on Liu Ru's situation and her character, if you save her, if you tell her that she can choose to become a vampire to gain strength, or she can choose to live a stable life, and give her a choice, she will also throw herself into the abyss and become a demon to repay kindness and revenge, and will be willing to help you. As for such a vicious plot against an innocent girl who has died of a close relative, just because she has a useful physique? Are you a hundred times better than her? From this plot onwards, no matter how much I watch it, I can't watch it anymore. At the same time, the shortcomings of poor writing and naive psychological activities have become prominent. At this point, this book's fate with me has ended.

A mature armored warrior will not be defeated by the past. Put aside all pressure and distracting thoughts, forget what is behind and work hard on what is ahead. Armor fit! Only by stepping out of the shadows can the power of the armor be fully released. The Emperor's Armor merges! Armor combination! I am the Emperor of Light!

May I ask how well the author's male protagonist fits the Emperor's armor? Is it blood concentration?

In the first chapter, I felt like I was being persuaded to quit. Regardless of time travel or rebirth, the most basic thing is that the character of the original protagonist should not be erased. At worst, each of them can develop their own way. Why should Mo Fan endure it, just because he can't afford to offend him? Contradictions can arise in the original work, but with the addition of a brother, wouldn't it be enough to just show off? And will a big family go to war over an adopted son? If Mo Yang uses this to help Mo Fan solve some of his worries after conflicts, and then motivates Mo Fan, I think this is a good start, and the patience in the book really makes me think Mo Yang is too useless. If you want to highlight the characteristics of youth and maturity, it is best to show it in doing things without leakage, rather than being able to endure it. Patience is always what villains have to do.

I have opened a special thread to complain and criticize. All unpleasant things can be discussed freely here.

Why is this novel so wrong in its outlook on Liu Ru? Isn't it outrageous for you to let your employer turn into a monster and watch it with relish?

Mo Fan is really a dog licker. I couldn't stand it when I was reading the novel. The heroine named Mu looks like a dead horse every day as if she was menopausal, but he still hangs around people all day long. It's so fucking disgusting.

I said before that the writing style was poor but acceptable, but now it seems that I was wrong. It can no longer be described as poor, it is simply disgusting. Mo Fan felt that Mu Ningxue chased him backwards, which made him feel disgusted. Tang Yue found Mo Fan after the protagonist was defeated, and wanted to regain his confidence. It was disgusting! ! ! Just two words, disgusting! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

By the way, I have a question, why are all the books I can read not on the shelves? Or is it that my taste is too tricky? ? ? ? ? ? ?

This book has been signed, so congratulations!

It seems that some people actually say that this is the most intelligent fan. Is it the author himself who said this? Pretending to be tough at every turn, is this called IQ?

What can I say? It seems that no matter whether it is the original work or the fan fiction, the seemingly decent people seem to have bad brains. On the contrary, even the villains are just cannon fodder and are just a bunch of lyb.

I have read several full-time fanfics, and they are basically all studs. . . . .

In the first chapter, he was directly persuaded to quit. Other colleagues came to Mo Fan's house because of Ye Xing. It would be better for the author to go to Mo Fan's house to help them become lovers sooner. The protagonist persuades him to quit.

The author should be busy with work first. After all, how can he live if he doesn't have enough to eat? Novel You can take it as a hobby to add a little interest to your life. Although there are indeed some shortcomings in what you wrote, these can be made up for. After you have continuous experience in real work, your pattern will gradually change. So if you are happy, write a few chapters and take a rest when you are tired.

One more thing If the recommendation votes exceed 10,000, will there be any special effects?

I'm a front-end developer, and I was asked to do the job of a product manager. Damn it!

How old is Lingling? His three views are really explosive. That thing even comes with armor. Bah.

If you see this book recommended in other places the day after tomorrow, don't be surprised, because I don't know what it is about. Don't have any conspiracy theories, because the author does not rely on novels to make money to support his family. This novel is just for making a little pocket money. If you have more money, it means you will lose money for a month. If you don't have enough money, you can't mess around anymore.

The author returns 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns. Drives the long whip and rides the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul returns. Goes over the mountain and sings. Returns. The soul returns. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul is coming back. The soul is coming back. The soul is coming back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's order, surpassing your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, I will be blessed by you in all four lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the mantra: The Supreme Order, transcending your lonely soul. You can just recite these eight characters. If you can add: escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as an adult, even better)