Perfect World: I Am Changgong Yan

I withdrew as soon as I saw Bao Huang's thigh at the end of Chapter 3. Huang will be an enemy sooner or later on the road to transcendence. If there is only one person who is qualified to become an immortal, can you hug him by just holding your thigh? Hugging your thighs shows that you don't have an invincible mentality. Even with the help of cheats, you don't dare to be an enemy of Huang or compete with him. Will your protagonist be killed in the end or something? If he wants to hug his thigh, it means he is not on the same level as Huang. Do you believe it if you still write that he will be arbitrary forever?

If you can't control it, don't write about a female protagonist.

To write a perfect story, you must have an air of invincibility. So what if you are miserable? You must be divided into high and low in this life. No one dares to argue about invincibility or immortality.

I don't know what you think. I read fanfics just to make up for the regrets of the original work. Why do you think that not killing the protagonist of the original work is a virtue? Anyone who likes this kind of plot is probably a hater.

I plan to overhaul it and change some settings. If you have suggestions, you can comment below. By the way, let me see how many living readers I have😃

You might as well create an original character and grow up with Huang. To be honest, this person has no sense of empathy.

It feels good at first glance, but I think this system is useless. It is really a drama. Why not write orthodox and perfect fan fiction? Chang Gong Yan vs. Immortal Ancient Tianjiao, your writing style is also good.

The writing is quite good, but the memory of the protagonist is lost. To me, this is the biggest poisonous point. What are the characteristics of fan fiction? One is to make up for the regrets of reading the original work, and to torture the villains or annoying characters in the original work. The second is to have foresight, giving readers the pleasure of overpowering their IQs, and using the foresight to show off the original characters. You've just flattened out a major feature, so what's the point of being a fan?

The way of nothingness, the heavens are immortal, and I am immortal. Why does it feel like a trap 😰

After reading the third chapter, you can just hug Huang's thigh tightly." Chang Gongyan took advantage of the fact that his memory of the perfect world had not completely dissipated, and tried his best to win Huang's favor and changed his name to Licking Dog.

Update time: 12pm every night 11:30pm 6:30pm Three time points are possible Usually two updates But one day brothers can add more if they work hard For example, if the monthly ticket for recommendation is over a hundred The starting point for the reward is thousands of coins (Okay 🤫 don't scold 😅 I know I'm imagining)

I haven't read it yet, so I'd like to ask you guys who have tried poison. Is this book good for me, Emperor of the Wilderness? Do you abuse him or not? Do he have many scenes? If you abuse him, I won't watch it. I'm afraid 😥

Perfect fan fiction is the hardest to write, because No. 10 Is Bug, he will definitely become the Immortal Emperor, there is no accident, he will be there in the past, present and future. No. 10 Is Huang, Huang is not No. 10

It is best to change the fact that the system is conscious. This is a poisonous point. For example, after the novice period has passed, the system consciousness will automatically dissipate, so that the early settings will not be lost.

Who is Chang Gong Yan? Is there such a character in a perfect world?

The system is not particularly toxic, and I can barely continue reading. The key is that the system is conscious and releases tasks crazily. The author's main line relies entirely on the system to advance, and it is extremely toxic.

It is recommended to change the name to Perfect World: I Am a Bodyguard

I haven't watched it yet, but I have a question. Will you die together with Huang in the end?

It's really hard to write a perfect fanfic, it's too grand

Why do I feel that it is better to go to a foreign land in Jiutian?

Perfect can cultivate two Immortal Emperors at the same time? ? ?

I suggest you change it to, "I am a bodyguard in a perfect world"

The author wanted to create another path independently and perfectly, but he took it too much for granted. You have never written about nothingness, and it is difficult to write about it. Moreover, it is only a path, not a system. The cultivation system is something that can be passed down. There is also the issue of the protagonist's realm, which depends entirely on the system, and my system seems to be omnipotent. To be honest, this kind of invincible style does not need to write about the same generation as Huang. Not only does it fail to write brilliantly, but it also lowers Huang's quality. . .

Perfect World is not like other fantasy novels. There is an upgrade and point system to make you invincible. It talks about foundation and invincibility. Even if you defeat No. 10, When others see that they have nothing of your own, why should you defeat him? Damn, your system is made out of nothing

Today I'm asking for recommendation votes and monthly passes 🥺 Brothers, please give me some help.

Reward 500 coins, hold on. A man travels everywhere, no matter where he is, he is not at home. Wherever he dies and where he is buried, it is like the green mountains in the world.

Coincidentally, I am also a medical student, and I would like to recommend a new book "The Ancestral Dragon of a Perfect World"

Can you find more wives for the protagonist?

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