Picked up a Super Server at the Start

The subject matter is good, but the plot is not good, so you might as well scrap it and rewrite it.

The subject matter is good and the plot is also very good, but it is not very rigorous and there is no picture at all. It is just a live broadcast to deliver goods. You must know that seeing is believing and it is not that easy to believe. There is also a new live broadcast platform. Without a lot of publicity, it is impossible to attract so many people overnight. I hope the author can be more logical and rigorous. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

After reading a few chapters, I actually wrote about games. A good super server is for running games. I wrote too much game content.

As expected, he is a level 1 author, writing without any brains, such a good subject matter!

It's like the underworld. You can be regarded as an immortal by cultivating it. It's almost the same if you change the name. It seems that this kind of thing for ordinary people is called cultivating demons.

The idea is very good, but the plot is not that good, and it has to be written to be mentally retarded.

This book should be classified into ☞Games☜ and Science Fiction ☞Super Technology☜What does it mean? ? ?

Such a good subject, you just write about games😐

66666 Writes very well, come on, come on, come on

How can I put it? The author made a game out of nothing, without a game framework. In fact, it is possible to copy the opening of a popular game. After all, the world view of big games already has a system. It was a bit embarrassing for the author to play the game out of nowhere. It felt like the author had been filling in bugs all the time. . . . .

The military will definitely come to this server to let you develop a war game to facilitate practicing tactics and training soldiers.

Picked up a super server at the start

Stop writing about games. . Do more business

How can I put it this way? It was okay to play the game in the beginning, but in the last few chapters it feels a bit toxic.

The author's protagonist can definitely be a virtual reality gunfight game Call of Duty Warzone

Game copyright issues, Naruto

The Fourth Game Naruto Farewell😊

To be honest, this book has so many bugs that it's unimaginable. What kind of game review is there? The president of the game company plays his own game himself and he doesn't know anything. You can hire many big anchors for just 50,000 yuan. There is such a powerful server and the intelligent protagonist doesn't know anything.

I read a novel many years ago. It seems that the protagonist got something that can control people's five senses! I forgot the specific plot. It seems that someone was given a spiritual imprint. He can see hallucinations and other things that the protagonist asked him to see. The protagonist designed a dark world background. Ordinary people cannot see those things. It means that these people have been guarding the world, and then these people can develop offline. Then these people can destroy these monsters and upgrade, and the physical sensations are very real. Unfortunately, I forgot which novel it was from, and I can't find it now.

This is my first time writing. It is a practice work. Now it is completely made up. I hope I can get enough words, 😤. I have read all the comments. Thanks for pointing out the problem.