After We Broke Up, the School Beauty Chased Me to Pay Off My Debts

First of all, the author's original writing was the same and the plot was cliche. I thought I would stop reading after just a few chapters. But I can't help but like to watch the system text, and the plot is so exciting to watch; yes, due to the plot problem, I don't feel too embarrassed, it is just fun. Although watching the live broadcast all the time seems to be a bit confusing, the plot is connected and the level is level. I was mesmerized. In terms of characters, the protagonist doesn't give me a soulless feeling. It has a bit of soul, and the writing is a bit supportive. Of course, the heroine's direction is not well controlled. Some are still impressive, and some just give people the feeling of a passerby. It should be possible that the author's background copywriting is not complete (guess), so the plot is not enough, and the heroine has to come up with it. The plot is gone? A few more heroines.                                                                                                                                                                                                             but I also think the title of the book is wrong. When looking at the content, except for the school belle mentioning a few times to return the money for live streaming to the protagonist, I don't see anything that has much to do with the title of the book. Because I am a poor person and have no money to support, I just click on the recommendation ticket. Then I started to read the pirated version after subscribing to the chapter, but when I saw what reincarnation props were used to reincarnate, and the habit power given by the system, it was quite long, and I couldn't stand it anymore. The author still has some writing skills, but the online literary world is currently in decline (personal feeling). This work just appeared in an era when it should not have appeared. It is very powerful to have such achievements in this era. At least it's not a zero monthly pass. There are still some die-hard fans, but I'm a poor guy and I can't stop nagging~

Network meets network again, this is a trap. Is it really so fun to pretend to be someone on the Internet? Another 100 million?

I show my cards, I am a diaosi, I love to watch 🙂

My situation is too small. After all, I am still too young. Why did I become a fairy later?

It's true that it's cerebral thrombosis. You've missed out on all the poisonous points that a great writer should have. In a way, you're really awesome.

I really lied to my son. He was dumped by the woman at the beginning. After the dumping, he gave the protagonist a low-level taunt. As a result, the protagonist turned around and the system came to him. After the protagonist made a fortune, he met his ex-girlfriend and slapped her in the face in various ways. He used to ignore me. Today, I have encountered at least twenty novels that you can't reach. There are only a lot more. I am dizzy 😵😵😵😵

Do current authors not know how to write books without adding some fantasy elements? A good urban novel adds so many messy things.

After 80%. I don't want to watch it. It's like there was a mountain and a temple in the mountain, and there was an old monk in the temple. Tell a story to the little monk. Once upon a time there was a mountain. There is a temple in the mountains.

It's the same as those pretentious articles I saw in elementary school.

Only 10 posts for 940,000 words? 😅😅

It's quite fun to watch it without thinking about it.

After reading it for a long time, I still didn't understand it. First it was a book about gods and heroes, and then it became a cultivator. Each world system is different, and it confused me.

Infinite matryoshka...

I can't fix it 😄

I don't want to read the first chapter...

It's a classic, it's the pretentious and slap-in-the-face article that was popular a long time ago. There are naturally a lot of poisonous spots. It is recommended to watch it without thinking, it can numb you for a while 🙂

Why should we change it to cultivating immortals! A good book has turned into a bad book!

There's no need to continue writing, it's pointless

I have read more than 200 chapters in a row in the past few days. I couldn't help laughing when I saw the male protagonist tipping Xiaoyu Yimeng, so I also tipped and commented to the author. Although it is a simple and crude old routine, as far as the parts I have watched are concerned, it is still very enjoyable to watch (it would be better if the part about the intimate contact with the girl could be written in more detail, wow), and it even brought back the feeling I had when I first came into contact with online writing many years ago. The routines are not surprising, but there are also highlights, especially the content in the book involving the live broadcast circle. I have only slightly dabbled in live broadcasting. I watch it occasionally, but basically don't buy gifts or interact with the anchors. Therefore, I am not familiar with many default rules in the field of live broadcasting. The content written by the author and related to the live broadcast made me enjoy watching it, as if it was more enjoyable than actually watching the live broadcast. In fact, I have never played King of Kings, but as a layman, I can understand it. I have to say that the actual writing power of the author should be stronger than the surface of the plot. Many things look simple, but if you really insist on doing them, they are actually not easy. I saw a lot of comments criticizing the author for being poisonous, and I felt sorry for the author, but that's how online articles are, and they can never satisfy everyone. I also post this comment in the hope that the author can read it and become more optimistic and confident. The author in the article hints that she is a girl, which is the most difficult for me to believe (it is hard to believe that a female author can write such a plot). I have been reading books for more than ten years, and you can tell from just a few chapters of male pornographic articles written by female authors. This book does not have that feeling at all, and basically every step of the way is based on the pleasure of male pornographic readers. I have to say that it really has two brushes. In short, only if you don't forget your original intention can you always succeed. The road to coding is long and difficult. If the author encounters a difficult moment again, please read this post. Hope it can give you strength.