Give Me More

Author, are you writing a popular science article? ! ! Why is it that when you write about practice, there is a lot of it, and it is also written in a way that makes people feel messy? Can you simplify it or write it down in one sentence? 🤫🤫

Too watery, too much useless nonsense

How come a novel with only 600,000 words has so many negative fans? The writing is quite good, don't be a eunuch.

I've seen Chapter 54, it's so fucking cool! , What can basically be covered in one go will never be covered in one or two chapters or even more, I am simply convinced, the story is obviously good, but it does not advance the plot, it is all about scientific martial arts theory in the fantasy world! , Enough, no wonder the results are poor!

The writing is so messy that I am confused about the realm

The writing is very good, especially the transformation of spiritual realm and pig's trotter cultivation, and the discovery of the golden finger. It's very interesting.

It's very embarrassing, not to mention that the name is a fake, but it is actually an experience card. It is embarrassing to say that it is forced. There is not so much emotion and forced empathy. If you say you have deep feelings, you should write it down. Anyway, I don't see where the deep feelings are. In addition, after reading the rest of the story, except for the protagonist being a time-traveler at the beginning, I didn't see much of a time-traveler later on. It felt like he had completely assimilated into aboriginals. If you say that you have traveled through time for dozens or hundreds of years, I still believe it. The key point is that you have only traveled through time for more than two years, and you have not completely inherited the memories of the original owner.

The writing is good. Although the pace is fast, it is still acceptable. The look and feel is still good. Come on, brother.

You dare to be so cool at the beginning of the new book, it's amazing

It's long-winded, just add some points and it's done

Ever since I read the book review section, I haven't been able to read many novels.

If you like to read realm theory, you can read it. Forget about fighting. The first 50 chapters are just a few chapters about fighting. The rest are just extra points. Realm theory means that each realm is much stronger than others. Add some extra points to fight across realms. That's it.

I have read ten such alternative novels, and five of them begin with Qinghe County and City. I am afraid that I am not reading the same novel.

How many people say you talk nonsense, don't you read everyone's comments? I can't stand it anymore when I see Fusion. I don't know what's going to happen next, but I really want to complain. How could you, the author, be so ridiculous, and send it to me in such a way that it doesn't add up at all? How many people do you want to dissuade from writing a few hundred words about how the protagonist breaks through? A breakthrough is a breakthrough, and the same goes for the fusion one. Breaking through Qi, Blood, Wolf Smoke, and forming Qi. What have you written about the West and the East? Write a few hundred words. I advise you to change the content in it. In the future, people will see that this can persuade a large number of people to quit.

The author is too intoxicated with his own setting, but the novel's routine is too old

It's a long-winded story, just talking about the role of food in cultivation, and it's been said over and over again, without any new ideas, the plot is very bland, and it's boring! Abandoned! The author's description of the plot and characters is not good enough!

The writing is messy, and the word count is always missing 😅

The heart is higher than the sky, and life is thinner than paper.

Why do I see so many duplicate articles? What are you doing

It feels like there are too many poisonous points. He keeps reminiscing and writing numbers. I'm just writing an essay now.

Why did the demon suddenly stop in Chapter 20 of Volume 1? When you were about to kill the male protagonist, you inexplicably stopped to kill him? No reason and no explanation? ? ?

Is anyone playing dark blue stalks, and found that when I added some dots, they came in blue?

Why are there so many repeated chapters lately? Subscription fraud? Anti-piracy?

Maybe it's an issue with the writing style. The part about the destruction of Xiaowan Village and the part about fighting Fang Yuan made me embarrassed😅

The author should stop talking about the word count. This is a third-person perspective, not a narrator's perspective. The way you wrote this chapter in Chapter 02 really makes people regret subscribing. The author is from a third-person perspective and so are we, but you force us to be the narrator and it's easy to persuade us to quit!

From the introduction, it was about cultivating immortals, but when I went in and saw the old-fashioned fantasy and supernatural things, I was speechless. Long Shezhi's writing is not very good.

The decline of traditional Chinese medicine is due. The impression of traditional Chinese medicine is that no one wants to waste time with a minor illness depending on their age. The decline is due. It is not a matter of choice by the Chinese people. It is purely that traditional Chinese medicine deserves to decline! Are you willing to adapt to traditional Chinese medicine or Western medicine to adapt to you?

I haven't read a single word of the dozens of chapters I subscribed to, and I can't stand it anymore. I really say goodbye.

How do pig's feet usually carry trophies? Most of them give up like in the cartoon, with a mountain-like bag on their heads and run around. It is recommended that Pig's Feet form a team to help Pig's Feet scout and carry the loot. It can also help the author reduce word count and kill two birds with one stone.

A reasonable practice system with self-consistent content.