Time Tribulation

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It can be divided into more paragraphs. It would be easier to read if there are not so many words in each paragraph.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group, please update~ Until the completion of the book, do not stop updating for 7 days, the investment will fail. Come on, finish this novel, don't be a eunuch, I really don't plan to update it, please click to finish the book, come on

The fight between Zhengdao and the Hundred-Pillar Bodhisattva in Chapters 6 to 9 is exciting. Problem 1 is that each paragraph has too many words and is difficult to read. This has been improved in later chapters. 2. The content of the fight is too protracted. When the male protagonist is advancing the plot and shaping the character card, a new supporting character (even a supporting role) is suddenly inserted into a lengthy fight of four chapters. It is easy for people to misunderstand whether the protagonist is Canaan, the scholar, or Bai Lei? The narrative is much smoother when the later perspective returns to Canaan. In these 20 chapters, we can see the author's obvious progress. I hope others will not miss this book.

Come on, don't give up halfway, persistence to the end is victory, don't stop updating for 7 days.

Update, update, don't be a eunuch, don't give up halfway