Catch That Traitor

Leave a book review for Xiong Da~ [Book title] "Catch the Traitor" [Theme] Xianxia·Fantasy Cultivation 1. Introduction to the book title 1. The title and content of the book are still a bit biased. When I first saw the name, I thought it was similar to the style of "Rabbit Must Die", with a sinister and corrupt protagonist who is cute and cute, causing trouble everywhere and attracting people to chase or be wary. In this way, the book is light-hearted and humorous, and its positioning is also very clear. However, the content of the book is still more serious. In the name of "traitor", the protagonist is serious about clearing himself of his grievances and worrying about his current poverty. The current "traitor" should be the result of being misunderstood and brainstorming + dihua. Do you want to carry out the brainstorming to the end? If so, it appears a little late in the article. At present, the generalization and eye-catching effect of this book title are still relatively weak. But personally I feel that the effect of the changes is not significant. Although some readers will come in for the title, there is still a certain length of time before the plot that actually produces this comic contrast. If they come for the title, readers will not see the expected content, and there will inevitably be a gap. At this time, other highlights at the beginning must be used to retain readers. 2. Introduction I was a little confused at the beginning, why are you so friendly? Does the protagonist do a lot of good things and everyone supports the protagonist? The curious effect is there, but not obvious. If I hadn't read the text, I would never have thought that this was just a brain teaser, but everyone was so polite on the surface but actually very jealous at heart... The introduction should clearly reveal the writing method and highlights. The current introduction, the intended effect, should be from Jiang Yu's perspective, and the contrast between his situation and treatment should highlight the highlights, but the highlighting effect is not obvious. Because I can't guess what the reason is, it's like hitting cotton with force. 2. Writing Xiong Da's writing is very good. It has a fairy smell, but also a bit of fireworks. Easy to approach, even immortals have to worry about two or three copper coins (shell coins, prayer power). In addition, it is a light-hearted article, and the humor among the various characters is very sophisticated. Looking at the serious fairy, there will also be this kind of cerebral caution, and there is a certain contrast in cuteness. Coupled with many unrecognizable products of the fairy world, the elegance and majesty of oriental fantasy are everywhere revealed, making people feel fresh and interesting. Various settings for hunting are vaguely elements of modern civilization, and are very friendly and pleasing to the eye. 3. Beginning In the beginning, Jiang Yu resurrected from the morgue, but became the only survivor of the theft of Wen Duo's jade key. In view of his amnesia, he was taken to the Criminal Justice Department to investigate his memory. During this period, Jiang Yu gradually discovered that he was different from ordinary people. He seemed to know a lot of classical knowledge, but he could not remember his past experiences. People in the Criminal Law Department have different attitudes towards him. Some believe that he is the murderer, while others have a favorable attitude towards him. The Criminal Law Department sent people to follow Jiang Yu, but found something different about Jiang Yu. They became more and more certain of their suspicions and regarded him as a high-ranking member of the militant faction. They further speculated and treated him with more and more caution. The beginning of the book is still a bit long. After all, this is a world fully set by the author, and the author's accumulated background is revealed everywhere. The beginning of the book, involving the mystery of the case, is a little bit contradictory, but there is a sense of leisure that is not too urgent. This is probably because I started reading the book as soon as I opened it and continued to read it intermittently. Slow heat is slow, but the coolness is not coming out. The highlights are all in the fresh and magical classical fairyland. On the contrary, the world is so magnificent that no matter what the protagonist does, the sense of existence is weakened. Although I know that his actions are in line with common sense and logic, I still have a calm and pleasant feeling, like a tourist. The protagonist is a tour guide, and we follow the protagonist to learn about the world for the first time. Wherever the protagonist goes, we see everything. You will pay attention to the scenery introduced by the tour guide in front of you, but you will not pay much attention to the tour guide's demeanor and thoughts. There are pros and cons. The advantage is that the setting is really gorgeous and everything is interesting. The disadvantage is that the drama of the protagonist in the early stage is weakened. The novel ultimately resonates with readers, and emotional mobilization is inevitable. Except for poverty and hardship in the early stage, it is very resonant. The new exciting point will not appear until 50,000 words later, when Dihua's brainstorming plot appears. Before this, it was more like a farming operation, highlighting peaceful development. Suitable to watch when you are in a leisurely mood. 4. Plot setting The setting of the classical fairyland is unique. I can't remember the fairy's name, but it just feels like a fairy. Including the exotic beasts and treasures, there is a fresh feeling. Compared with the equipment and prop-like magic weapons in many fairy tales about leveling up and fighting monsters, it has a bit more life style and is more real. As for the distribution of forces and the structure of power, these are very sound, so I won't go into them one by one. 5. Overall Perception In general, I feel that the world of Xiong Da's book is very grand. The more grand the book, the more it needs to be expanded before it can be judged. So I still reserve my opinion, and my judgment is mainly based on the beginning. It is also quite pleasing in terms of appearance. After the initial confusion, the relaxed cultivation of immortality gradually got on the schedule. The supporting characters began to bring a bit of comedy, and the protagonist's cultivation gradually improved. The light suspense such as solving the case also retains a certain amount of interest. When the world unfolds in the later stages, I believe it will become more exciting.

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I am a special reporter from the shock department of Tianting tabloid According to the latest news we obtained Jiang Yu, the traitor of Tianting, turned out to be! ! ! Having destroyed the basic principle of love between people, he not only made friends with monsters across species, but also had a relationship with paintings. It's simply sensational and suddenly reaches the limit of human beings. We call on Jiang Yu to view paintings in a civilized manner, limit the number of interactions with paintings every day, cherish Ms. Zhou Lin's soul, and avoid her being exhausted due to fatigue many times a day.

Whether you are an old book friend or a new book friend, welcome to all of you. I have said that I like Lao Xiong's book after reading it. You can put it on the bookshelf first, and wait for some day, maybe you have time, or the book is out of stock, or you have gained some weight, or the introduction aroused a little interest. When you think of this book by chance, you will not have to go out of your way to find this book. Of course, Lao Xiong will definitely not be cut in half!... Probably?

It's so beautiful, why did I finish it so quickly…

Although it is short, it still looks good

I hope the author will update it as soon as possible. Although the quality is high, I am embarrassed to recommend such young seedlings to people in the group.

Congratulations on releasing a new book, looking forward to new stories

The new book is really good. I feel like Lao Xiong is a setting fanatic 😏. Like the previous book, the setting is so fresh. Please update it soon.

The pace is so fast! Happiness comes so suddenly!

The subject matter is novel, and it's a good book. I haven't seen it in a long time.

The number of words is a bit short, brother, I will give you two recommendation votes and support 😁

It's really pretty. Why is it so deserted? Zhang said he couldn't even see anyone.