Global Undead Scourge

I've read almost seventy chapters, and I really can't stand the moon goddess who seems to be the heroine. Maybe it's because I'm a bit chauvinistic and can't accept a heroine who suppresses the hero. After all, I'm reading a male-oriented novel, and the plot of the younger brother is really disgusting. However, I still think the novel is well written at the beginning. I will pay attention to the author's new books in the future, and there will be more in the future 😁

The creativity of the novel is very good, but there are still some shortcomings. 1. The characters have contradictory personalities (for example, the protagonist is said to be Aquaman at the beginning, but no matter how you look at it, he is a straight man), 2. Some conflicts and contradictions break out, and the appearance of some supporting characters is somewhat unreasonable, which is a bit baffling. I don't know what it is trying to express. 3. The description of the scene is pale and weak. It basically just talks about how many people there are and how they are arranged. There are almost no direct descriptions of war scenes, and very few details (I strongly recommend the author to learn from the works of other great writers). But I still like this book and I will continue to pursue it. I hope my evaluation can help the author. If there are any mistakes, please point them out.

I don't know why, but the author didn't write the role of the Moon Goddess well. It gave our readers the feeling that she took advantage of the protagonist from beginning to end, but in the end the protagonist couldn't do anything about her, which made us feel aggrieved. If the author makes the protagonist smarter when describing it, and writes her as seeing through her plot, and finally forcing her to be his own woman, then even if the final result does not change much, the readers will feel much more comfortable, and they will not be too resistant to the role of the Moon Goddess.

I thought there was no female protagonist, but the author directly said that there was a female protagonist, so I said goodbye.

It's okay to have a female protagonist, but it's just a harem stallion and brainless. If there is no female protagonist, the novel will be less enjoyable. I quite like this book on strategy and explosives.

To be honest, I don't like this highly intelligent female protagonist very much. It's better to kill her by letting the male protagonist kill her. Moreover, the male protagonist doesn't need a girlfriend no matter what. It doesn't fit the setting. Isn't the male protagonist almost emotionless? And if your setting becomes stronger in the future, you can master multiple laws. Don't tell me that a person can master one law in his lifetime.

If you delete all the real-life scenes between the brother and the girl, your book will gain at least half of the readers. No desire is not just what you say. At least the protagonist you wrote is not who you said. To put it bluntly, the good setting and framework were ruined by your lack of ability. The manifestation of your lack of ability is to forcibly create conflicts and bloody realistic plots.

It is no exaggeration to say that if I were to control the souls of the dead, Marx would be able to emerge from the earth and write a few more volumes of "Das Kapital"

Has this author never seen a woman? ? ?

Name: City of Sighs Occupation: Castle Gender: None Birth: The Law of Death is condensed Treasure: Book of Death and Dark Magic Skills: Summoning undead troops (requires a certain amount of money and specific resources) Introduction: A castle condensed by the Law of Death, Will be further upgraded to the Kingdom of God as the main protagonist {"NickName":"Book Friends 20170530235351359","UserId":302519077}

Oh, Shet, look what you wrote? Undead! Infinite energy, easy to reproduce, easy to survive, and requires almost no resources in the future! Almost no betrayal! And he has some wisdom! There is a big difference between a magician and a scientist using the same resources between taking the western fantasy route and taking the technological route! The former can be shot at most 10, and the latter, as long as there is a breakthrough, immediately split the assembly line to allow the production of skeleton soldiers and let real warriors wear armor. And! ! ! Even if you can't follow science, just by raising animals in captivity, you can still get a large number of corpses, which can definitely be recycled and develop quickly! As for food? Just look at the description of the undead at the beginning and you will understand.

When this type of game comes out, don't write about reality. If you write about reality, you must also provide players with mechanisms to ensure safety and freedom! For example, system security protection, such as being able to enter one's own plane instantly... This is nothing. If it is exposed, it will leave such a big flaw. If you can't compare in the game, I will kill the people I compete with 😃 In the early stage, according to my conditions, I can win over and control a lot of people with the resources in real life, let alone those big consortiums, leaders and the like!

The author changed the first chapter! Being dumped by a woman at the beginning. Really not many people like this routine anymore. It was a routine ten years ago. After 30 years in Hedong and 30 years in Hexi, this routine has been played badly. The readers who played it feel disgusted. You have the strength to persuade readers to quit.

It's quite embarrassing to see the back part. Isn't it good to keep writing about games? I have to add some emotional scenes. Especially in the first chapter, it talks about losing feelings and losing interest in girlfriends. It's obvious that they are engaged in explosive soldiers, so they have to form some kind of organization.

It's disgusting. The male protagonist is just a licker. He acts like a woman he has never seen before. He obviously uses him, but he doesn't react at all. He said before that he should take advantage of development opportunities, but then he was taken advantage of, and there was no reaction at all.

Now that there is a female protagonist, the hero saves the beauty, and the plot where the woman sticks to him has been removed.

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Some readers have expressed great concern that the name of God "Good Man" is not pleasant to hear, and I am now soliciting your opinions. If you have any good names for gods, please leave a message below. Thank you all for your great support and love, eh (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Come on, the writing is pretty good, I like this strategic style.

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Damn it, this is the first time I've seen a novel with all negative reviews! Goodbye, bye, bye! Come on, author! 😄

One brother and one woman are very addictive, and they always like to mirror reality and mix in private goods. In addition to the subject matter and the writing of the first fifty chapters are not bad, the plot is also too cliche.

Chapter 20: The hero saves the beauty is too stiff. This kind of plot will only affect the reader's irritability.

Well written, I'll give you a monthly pass.

These planes are too small, I really can't bear to look directly at them.

Beggar Li New apocalyptic novel You deserve it

Online games are 100% virtual at all times, and you can't die even if you die in the game. If it's 100%, it's not virtual, it's reality.

After seeing Chapter 62, can anyone tell me if Wang Jiamin is dead or if there will be more plots about it later? If not, I will give up.

The biggest failure of this book is the appearance of the heroine. I bought so many copies back then. It's a pity that the book ended up being unfinished by the author.