Versatile Mage: Bailong Yaoshi

The combination of Mage + White Dragon somehow reminds me of White Dragon Hiss.

By the way, is it a single heroine or a harem? I hope it's a harem.

I think as for the heroine, it's best to be Mu Nujiao. If you have a harem, just two will be enough, not too many.

Six chapters a day, the author is so dedicated😄. Author hold on

Actually, I was a little embarrassed when I discovered the protagonist with this name, because my name is Zhang Tao😰😰

It was so boring to watch, I didn't feel anything at all, it was too bland, and I didn't even have the desire to watch it while watching it.

It feels like the protagonist said that he has read the original work 3 or 4 times, but he doesn't know anything about it. He forgot about the crisis in Bo City, and didn't know about the battle between schools... It would be better not to say that he had read it in the first place. After a few years, he doesn't remember anything, and there is no explanation why he forgot it all 😐

The ideal author

I've seen a lot of reviews recently, and most of them are actually not very good! I also know that the first book I write seriously will definitely have many problems. It's completely understandable that some readers may find this problematic. But to be honest, with this book, I just wanted to please myself first and then the readers. If you like it, just keep watching. If you don't like it, just leave. It has been on the shelves for more than two months, and I have earned more than a thousand yuan for perfect attendance every month. The average number of subscriptions so far has not exceeded 100 yuan. After one month, the money earned from subscriptions has not been 500 yuan. So you guys, it's really not that important to me. I write books to please myself and make a little money at the same time. Why do some people always think they are superior to others? Again, I will accept reasonable suggestions with an open mind, but please don't show off your mindless and superior words to me. Just watch it if you like it, and I'm very grateful for your support. But if you don't like it, please don't say too much in the comment area. Wouldn't it be better to leave peacefully? I won't be stingy with deleting and banning packages!

As long as the heroine is not Tang Yue, it's okay. Now, I don't care about the brother controlling the sister, but I really can't accept teacher-student love, mother-son love (even though it's not a physical relationship), and other things like falling in love with one's elders...

I like the setting very much. I can probably understand that the author wants to make the story fuller and want to write some independent content within the framework of the original version. But this is a fanfic after all, and everyone knows what the story behind it is. No matter how well-written the original characters are, everyone sees them as supporting characters. The supporting characters in the original version are the default protagonists. And everyone has seen the story of the monarchs everywhere, and it is really hard to watch the junior novices pecking each other. . . If you are not a fan, you can't talk about it, but if you are a fan, it is not impossible to remove 300,000 words from 400,000 words.

In my personal opinion, I think it is better to awaken the undead system to the protagonist when he reaches a high level, otherwise the human martial spirit cannot be explained.

Today, the editor-in-chief told me that my current update speed of 8,000 words per day is a little too fast, causing the reading to drop every day. I also checked online, and it seems that before it is put on the shelves, it is a critical moment for the accumulation of popularity. If this time period passes too quickly, the results will be relatively poor. There are also some other effects that I have not taken too seriously. So the daily updates will become 4,000 words in the future. Since the author is a newbie, I don't know much about these and made mistakes. I would like to apologize to everyone. But don't worry, I will update it on the day it is released. Finally, thank you all for your support, I love you.

Generally speaking, the space system that can only be awakened by a high-level mage is still a very rare system in the world. It is not taken seriously in the school. Even though it can release the first space magic in the first assessment, it is still a transparent person.

To be honest, I already had a lot of question marks in my head after reading Chapter 21. Why do I always feel that your protagonist is written like a passerby? And the guardian spirit Ao Lie summoned in Chapter 13 directly made a horse. Although it is said that he will turn into a dragon again when he becomes stronger, but he is a dragon himself, okay? You might as well make a guardian spirit that turns from a white horse into a dragon from the beginning! If it doesn't work, you can find an excuse to say that summoning a dragon to fight is too high-profile. Can't you set a transformation ability for the guardian spirit? And in Chapter 19, you yourself wrote that the protagonist's strength during the test was slightly stronger than Mo Fan's. How did you evaluate it to be an A-level? Even if the examiner was bribed by Mu He and wanted to run away, are all the people around him blind? You wrote that in Chapter 16 When Mo Fan took the test, the people around him could clearly see it. The result was like this when it came to the protagonist. The ability test that was a little stronger than Mo Fan only got an A rating. The people around him didn't react at all, and when they got here, all the students and teachers became blind.

More than half of it is the original work, awesome!

What a great fanfic, it's a pity that the eunuch is here!

It feels outrageous and disgusting to exchange 1,000 slave essences for one slave's combat power at the beginning. 1000X4 million = 40 billion. One slave's combat power. Why not exchange for 40 billion slave summoning spirits? The author has never read the original work and does not know how low the probability of the essence is. Thinking about 1,000 monarch essences is scary, let alone 1,000 emperor essences.

Can the heroine add Leng Lingling?

This book is gone! What? !

Can it be understood as the author's personal YY? Why do the protagonists in the full-time fanfic all have this kind of virtue (diaosi)? Don't like to delete posts

If nothing else, I hope to give these girls a warm family with no regrets.

Is this protagonist sure he has traveled through time? I don't know if I ask three questions. It would be better to be with Mo Fan from the beginning.

I also said that I have read it three or four times. If I have read it, I can still understand the basic cultivation, but now I don't know anything when I ask three questions.

And I also feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid. Traveling back in time is equivalent to living twice. Shouldn't he have a better mentality? Even Mo Fan is not as good as him. Even if the difference is not that big,

I've seen it several times and don't know anything. . .

1000 Emperor essence = 1 emperor's subordinate. Are there 1000 emperors?

I'm too mentally retarded to take the first step. I'm retarded in settings, retarded in logic, and retarded in combat power. I feel retarded just by looking at it.

I can write five or six pieces about a cow or horse thing, but I don't know how to sign a contract.

The dialogue is so awkward that no one with a mental retard can watch it. The plot is still confusing, and the fighting power is completely broken. The characters of Mo Fan and others are also completely ruined, just to support the protagonist. Speechless! Goodbye, see you no more.