Fighting Double Pamish's Raven

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1. If the strange fire falls into the water, the strange fire will not get wet - the water will catch fire. 2. Why was the universe born? This starts with a yellow and red match-3 game from Yihuo... 3. If Yihuo wants to eat cake, he doesn't need to buy it - he just needs to point at the flour with his finger, and the flour will form a cake by itself out of fear of his power. 4. Dawn wanted to prove her strength and went to compete with Yihuo - from then on, she lost her butt forever. 5. Jinran felt that she was the spokesperson of the flame, and sought a duel with the strange fire - her prosthetic limbs proved the result of that duel, but until now she herself has not admitted it. 6. In the church before Bianca became a construct, the god she believed in was strange fire - but Bianca herself didn't know it. 7. The energy of the Big Bang is approximately equal to the elimination of a blue ball of alien fire. 8. Yihuo can clear all the levels in any war zone in one hour - for the first 59 minutes, he was considering which war zone to clear. 9. Shenwei and Yihuo teamed up and never went back - because he accidentally saw the process of Yihuo shooting down the space station. This is one of the reasons why Yi Huo hates him. 10. Yihuo felt that he was too powerful and sealed the power of his fire - he could finally get along with other structures with random identities. 11. In order to obtain the power of fire, Pulse equipped himself with a guide wheel to chase the strange fire - this behavior was seen by humans, so he wrote the legend "Kuafu Chasing the Sun". 12. There is no door in Yihuo's dormitory. He opened a hole in the wall because he was afraid of the power of the alien fire, and then closed it after the alien fire entered. 13. The blood of Alien Fire can resist the Pamish virus - it's a pity that no one can make Alien Fire bleed. 14. The Tower of Babel, the war zone, and the cage are all simulated battles fought by humans to resist the alien fire - they failed miserably. 15. Ella turned out to be not that fat. She should not have provoked Alien Fire in the first few days before going online - this behavior is called the stupidest behavior in the history of war double. 16. The strange fire is one and ten thousand; it is an instant and eternity; it is the creator and the master. Your way will be walked in the world, just like walking in your country... 17. Thor, the Western God of Thunder, saw the strange fire and sighed, you are still good at this. On the same day, Prometheus saw the strange fire and followed the strange fire all the way because he knew that a hair of the god of fire could bring life to their people. 18. Kamu actually knew the strange fire, but he didn't know that the strange fire helped Shenwei - it wasn't until he saw the strange fire that he realized how big a mistake he had made, and he could only become the tool of Shenwei. 19. The commander who finally solved the strange fire regretted it - every time he used the strange fire to play a level, the damage value was detected to be exceeded and he was suspected of cheating and kicked out of the game. In serious cases, his account would even be banned. 20. The outbreak of Pamish virus was because Yi Huo forgot to dispose of the paper he used when wiping his nose - he didn't think about it now. 21. The motto of the upgraded person: When you see the strange fire, the strange fire will also see you; when you cannot see the strange fire, you are going to die. 22. No structure can break through the Phantom Pain Cage at level 1 - except Strange Fire.

Come on, author, I have rarely seen a few people who write Zhanshuang fanfiction, come on!

Safin is linked to Neil, right? So the protagonist is going to meet A2 and the others? Great, after all, it was for A2 that I entered the double game.

The male protagonist has similar image Looking forward to joining the group! ! It's okay to discuss gameplay

A Zhanshuang player passed by and left a 💊

Which raven is this raven? The armored core one?

There are few people in Zhanshuang and I have a high tolerance, but this is really a pick-up. If you don't believe it, try it.

The author's writing is quite good, but there are a few issues that need to be noted. First, when writing something, don't forget to describe the appearance, such as the silver thing after Carlos's transformation, or put a picture to facilitate your brain. The same goes for the characters. I hope you can explain their appearance, or even describe their hair color, eye color, etc. Secondly, when fighting, you can add more details and psychology. For example, the scar on Carlos was cut by sword energy, and the author only mentioned it in one stroke with "the bones are deep enough to be seen." I think more details can be added for the purpose of expression, such as "a huge wound lay ferociously across Carlos's abdomen, blood dripping with red light, blooming silently on the ground, as if the slurry of life was constantly being stolen." Appropriate associations can make the scene more vivid, and can also help the author to reduce the number of words (laughing) Third, don't keep chasing the main line. In this book, Luna and Lucia can be given some extra scenes to express their characters or backgrounds and enrich their images. It feels like the characters are very thin when I keep drawing them in white. Fourth, I think the author has been writing according to the original plot and could make more changes.

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Generating Power for Love is indeed awesome, but the basic plot setting is a bit lacking. . . . An unspeakable violation

Zhan Shuang has fewer books than God Eater has.

Although the writing skills still need to be improved, I am still very happy that someone is writing about Zhan Shuang. I wish the author a small guarantee and the weapon pool will be filled with gold in ten consecutive rounds.

I hope the author will include Liv in his next novel

This... It's all free It's been a long time, no, this is the first time I've met

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It would be nice if it wasn't an indigenous protagonist, it always feels weird.

I've been playing for a few days and I'm quite confused. I just click randomly

Although I don't really like harem stories, it's very well written.

It's been almost a year, looking forward to it 🤓

(I have never been so frustrated when I read a plot. After all, I took on the role of the protagonist when I read the novel. I haven't read the rest yet, but I was so frustrated at the beginning) So it's really frustrating to do this. Come on, author, I can't stand it anymore (this account is a trumpet, and I occasionally use it as a prostitute, so please forgive me)

The writing style needs to be improved, please support me

I would like to ask, which Zhanshuang fanfic contains Miss Hanying? I looked at this book and she is not there.

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The author greatly hopes that you can see it. I really hope that you can come back.

Is there any original novel by Zhan Shuang? If so, look at it from there. There is also a pretty good novel, cheers for the author