Cultivation of Immortality and Ling Yunzhi

Well written, please keep updating the author

Let me tell you my opinion. The writing is not bad. The beginning is indeed quite bland, and the pace has been compressed quite quickly. However, some of the routines are a bit old-fashioned, especially adding modern sales methods to the world of cultivating immortals. It would be much better if the protagonist is a modern person. I personally feel that the market of cultivating immortals is too saturated. If the book does not achieve good results, it will be difficult to persist. If the writing skills are good, you can consider changing the subject matter in the future.

It's well written, but it can't be put on the shelves. I know why my internal investment is gone.

Here it comes, I scanned it happily, the writing is good, but it can't attract me

Unexpectedly, I followed the advertising man and came here.