Use Ninjutsu to Become Tokyo Demon God

It is recommended that authors should not add new power systems casually, as it will be very easy to fail. Many authors are increasingly speechless and unable to stand it because the hodgepodge of writing becomes more and more incomprehensible. I suggest that One Piece and Naruto should be enough, and do not just add new power systems randomly and concentrate on writing two power systems.

Plant a picture and wait

In novels, supporting characters who give power are best treated as disposable items. The protagonist can take back the ability at any time. Extraordinary supporting characters can be created at will (if it is a long-term role, the author may spend more effort). This subject has a large world view and is easy to write. It is easy to change the perspective of the character and lead to the poison of "Reborn with Naruto in Tokyo", or other self-centered acting. A single supporting character should be abandoned when necessary.

It's okay, it's not smooth, it's just too little! ! ! The plot is gone halfway! ! 😫😫

By the way, author, why isn't your name called Great Unity?

Not bad. It is recommended not to write too much about the protagonist's perspective, so as not to be poisoned. Just reflect the protagonist's things from the supporting character's perspective.

At first I thought it was a pretentious article, but I didn't expect it to be an anti-human article. It's your choice that you like to write about darkness, and no one can blame you. But can you mark the dark text? It's off-putting.

The old eunuch did not disappoint everyone.

I seriously suspect that the author is looking for a successor. He has made a good start by selling the book and outline to cash out. Otherwise, he would be updating every day like cat urine.

Good guy, it said 3 updates when it was put on the shelves, 3 changes to 2 updates 2 changes to 1 update 1 change to 0 updates. The author didn't say a word, so I'll delete the book and run away.

Yes

Can the author set up a fixed fan value to speak? The comment area is full of chaos 🐷

Stop scolding, stop scolding! The number has been changed and the book has been opened. The title of the book is "The Master Behind the Scenes Begins with the First Ancestor of the Blood Clan" The book is updated to April 28th, and the new book starts on April 25th. This was premeditated. Come to cheat, come to sneak attack, I am an old man with 8 years of online writing experience!

I have been following this book, and I am a little curious, what is it that causes discomfort? Because a lot of people died in the book? Although this does make the book a bit dark and a lot bloody, it does not reach the level of causing discomfort to readers at all, right? Because these dead people have no detailed descriptions or emotional descriptions, they should not be at a level that can arouse other people's sympathy? For example, many fantasy novels have a plot like this, [This Ten Thousand Spirits Blood Formation was formed by Emperor XX using the souls of one billion creatures]. Even if the number of these 1 billion living creatures were increased dozens of times, it wouldn't cause everyone discomfort, would it? Because they have no description, no shaping, no flesh and blood, they are just a set of numbers. Just like in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, no matter how many soldiers you see everywhere, it is difficult to win the sympathy of readers, but the death of the three sworn brothers Liu, Guan, and Zhang can make people move. Because Xiao Bing is a set of numbers, Liu Guan and Zhang were made flesh and blood. The deaths in this book are all numbers. Those NPCs who have no flesh and blood should not be sympathetic. It's like I played Give Him Love 5, and a lot of NPCs died due to some operations that everyone liked, and then you said I was cruel. Isn't this strange?

I think the author doesn't update anymore, mostly because of what some people said. It's not easy to wait for a good book. It took me seven years to write Journey to the West. Wouldn't you like to give others some encouragement?

What a rubbish book, the main character almost looks like Igarashi

Yoyoyo, you don't bring a knife after it rains. We haven't seen each other for a few days, so we're resting on our laurels.

Don't write pure dark stories. You have to have a bottom line when treating people as humans, otherwise the Tokyo book will serve as a warning. The protagonist with a sense of justice in the early stage is good and everyone likes it. But in the later stage, there is no bottom line. All the extraordinary psychotic murderers treat people as animals. The entire book review is cruel. Angry, when those who don't like people are forced away by those readers who so-called like dark literature, the author wants to have a few people who will support him when writing a book. As for how many readers who like to watch massacres and killing people like animals will spend money to read the book, it can only be haha. I am prepared to be scolded myself, it is up to you whether the author listens or not. Look at Qidian. Com and see how many purely dark books are popular. Even if you are awesome and popular, you will still get a 404. After all, most of the readers are teenagers. You can have no positive energy, but don't be perverted. Now you can scold me if you want to.

This author is the old eunuch who brought Naruto back to Tokyo, Japan.

I don't want to read it, but I finally supported the genuine version. It was listed as having 3 updates, and then it changed to two updates. The author didn't explain it, and now it's changed to one update. . . . . .

It's very simple. The fewer updates you make, the fewer subscriptions you have. If you want to subscribe, you'll have to keep it. It's an endless cycle. Sooner or later, you won't even have subscriptions anymore.

The long side characters are a bit disgusting. The main character does not appear in more than ten chapters. "Igarashi" was designed by the island government. Although the author wrote it carefully, the plot is suppressed and it is disgusting. If he is "collected" and the same as in Tokyo Reborn, the super becomes the government's dog. The protagonist's ability is given to others. Similar experimental products, control and create the power of the super to collect data and strengthen himself, let the super make a big fuss.

The works that have been cut include Too Unity's "Using Ninjutsu to Become the Tokyo Demon God" by Doorman Qin, "The Master Behind the Scenes Begins from the First Ancestor of the Blood Clan" and then to "The Transformation of Hell in Tokyo, Japan", "The Only True Immortal on Earth", "Start with Tokyo Earth Explosion Star", "Pokémon Release Begins in Tokyo" and " "Starting from Playing Back to School", "Writing Mystery Novels in the World of Ke Xue", "Behind the Scenes: Starting from the Arrival of Pirates in Tokyo", "The God of Creation Game", and the completed books include "Rebirth of Tokyo, Japan with Naruto", which is really as ruthless as the biggest one, Norma Kato Megumi (Shensha Rokuliu)

The works that have been cut off include Too Unity's "Tokyo Demon God with Ninjutsu" by Doorman Qin, "The Master Behind the Scenes Begins with the First Ancestor of the Blood Clan" and then to "Japan's Tokyo Hell Transformation", "The Only True Immortal on Earth", "Start with Tokyo Earth Explosion Star", "Release Pokémon Begins in Tokyo" and "Start with Truant Dragon". "Writing Mystery Novels in the World of Ke Xue", "Behind the Scenes: Beginning with the Arrival of Pirates in Tokyo" and "The Creation God Game" plus the previous book "The Beginning of the Arrival of Naruto and Kyuubi in Tokyo", the completed books include "Rebirth of Tokyo, Japan with Naruto", which is really as ruthless as the biggest one, Norima Kato Megumi (Shensha Rokuliu)

I read this book after a friend recommended it. I would like to ask if there is anything similar to this book? He updates too slowly. Of course, it would be better if there is dark text.