Dou Po's Peerless Two Prides

There is no shadow of Xiaoyan at all in "Peerless Twins". You are directly assuming a role yourself, and the protagonist of the original text is completely gone. You might as well just change Xiaoyan to Qin Zhen and copy the original text directly.

Well written, keep it up, I enjoy reading your books. Come on.

Alas, I can understand you saying that you don't want to take Xiao Yan's things, but you still only care about Xiao Yan. . . After taking his wings, I have to help him patch them up. What's wrong, he is the father of the protagonist 😥 You can make the protagonist not a villain, but don't make him a virgin either.

The introduction is poisonous, the dialogue is too plain, and the book is also poisonous. In all my past and present lives, I look like a child in my thirties.

It's quite interesting. I hope you can write more of your own plots. Don't always follow other people's plots. Lay out your own plots and your own style. Maybe it will become popular.

No, this, it looked fine from the front, but now you and Han Yue have crossed paths, and at least the girl has a crush on you. Tell me, are you going to leave it to Xiao Yan? And if you don't snatch Xiao Yan's opportunity, you won't snatch his woman either. I don't think this is a big deal, but now that Han Yue doesn't know Xiao Yan and still has a crush on you, and you two have met, you said you're going to leave her to Xiao Yan? This kind of protagonist is exactly like Yi Xiaochuan in the myth and deserves to be scolded

You are a time traveler, and Xiao Yan is a time traveler. Will you care whether it is an opportunity for Xiao Yan to grab it or not? Can't survive anti-inflammation? Can he become an emperor? Human nature is dark, and there is no room for two tigers in one mountain. Everyone understands the truth 🤫

Cuckold article, enter with caution

So poisonous. Xiao Yu, you accept it. I was watched by Xiao Yan several times when I was a child. Do you want to take over?

Shuo Xun'er withdrew. This is a female licking a dog, which is basically incomprehensible.

The chapter about contact with the Xiao family is so blunt. Your uncle was arrested because he owed money. It's not a grudge. If you go over and say it, why don't you end it, and then lick your face like the Xiao family's dog licker?

One of the worst fanfics I've read, even Xiao Yu has picked it up. I don't know what her talent is. In my opinion, Yunyun, Medusa, Qinglin, Little Medical Fairy, and Zi Yan will be enough for the heroine.

This is a good Dou Po fan, I recommend everyone to read it

This introduction is doomed, the author is writing the story of Xiao Yan's dog. . .

I vomited after seeing him The author all knows that a third-grade alchemist is comparable to a fighting spirit The protagonist directly lets the person out, do you want to see if the other party dares not to let him go? He also provided free elixirs to Xiao Yu He also helped the Xiao family unify Wutan City Licking a dog will lead to a good death To be honest, the protagonist, a third-level alchemist, is the emperor in Wutan City That Xiao Yu, the protagonist, tied her to the protagonist's bed even if she wanted to sleep with the Xiao family Junk book

Can the author accept those women with high talents such as Little Medical Fairy, Cao Ying, etc., And force the talents of these women with low talents to be improved, such as Little Princess, Xiao Yu, and Yafei? I am very speechless.

When writing Dou Po, one should assume that Xiao Xun'er has experienced time reincarnation or reincarnation (Zhuang Zhou Mengdie). Otherwise, how could an only daughter at the peak of Dou Sheng suddenly appear in the Xiao family and accommodate Xiao Yan in various ways? Destined to reach the top, all fanfics born from non-eight major races rob Xun'er as his wife, and I feel like Brother Tudou is using her to create a false ideal goddess... In the fanfic, Xiao Yan's only goddess, once robbed, feels like the author is the reincarnation of a pervert, and can't think of a reasonable explanation. Maybe he is illogical and daydreaming! ! !

It's so poisonous. I just couldn't stand it when I saw Xiao Yu. He also promised that a person who is not a fighter will enter the inner courtyard within a year. You are awesome.

There are too many things where friendship turns into hatred, so just treat the protagonist with a normal attitude. If you don't mess with me, we are two parallel lines. If you dare to mess with me, you will be crushed.

The author is forcibly improving Xiao Yu's talent. Xiao Yan in the original work is nothing more than this. I feel that Xiao Yu will also become a Dou Emperor in the future.

Ha tui, lick, your uncle was kidnapped because of the scolding. It was enough for you to help Xiao Yu refine alchemy until he was successfully promoted to the inner court. You also took matters into your own hands and helped them unify Wutan City. You also became friends with them forever. I am not saying that Uncle Wang is not important. We are not the protagonists, we are readers. We look at the problem from God's perspective. Maybe you will say that this time it is a win-win situation (I can't see where it is a win-win situation). Don't you still want to take the road of Yao Lao through Xiao Yan? No way? You take it for granted! Think about it in your own mind, unless you use a larger chip to trade, otherwise you won't get anything.

The writing is not very open, and why does it feel like the protagonist is licking Xiao Yan? In the original story, the protagonist did not accept any of the opportunities Xiao Yan encountered, and even gave Xiao Yan opportunities. This way, it always seemed that the protagonist was a little timid, and I didn't like it.

For me, if the heroine doesn't have a concubine, I'll book it all

You've been imagining it for so long, but I haven't seen how well you've written it. Damn it, you spent money to read shit.

Time travel, if you don't have a brotherhood with Xiao Yan, it will be in vain! It's best to practice with Xiao Yan. I only want Medusa, and Xiao Yan will do the rest to become stronger. It doesn't have to be strange fire. Water: Drowning, Three Light Divine Water, Glaze Pure Water... Thunder: Purple Sky Divine Thunder, Green Wood Divine Thunder, Shadow Divine Thunder, Thunder Emperor... Wood: Fusang Wood, Sycamore Wood, Innate Bamboo Bamboo, Kunlun Divine Wood... If you don't know how, just make it up, why bother clinging to a green lotus earth heart fire!

Not seizing the opportunity? So what do I want to see? ?

What kind of stupid garbage is this?

If you are interested in novels, you are also interested in the author.

I read a few of them, and I found that they were basically always sluggish and lacked a protagonist. In fact, they were written about the author's life portrayal, and he encountered obstacles at every turn. It is natural that the novel did not do well. If the author wrote it for fun, then I didn't say that.

I stole the opportunity of the protagonist. The protagonist couldn't become the Dou Emperor, and I didn't become the Dou Emperor either...? This is embarrassing~! Don't forget that Emperor Hun Tian is "sure to become the Fighting Emperor"! Furthermore, the protagonist absorbs the strange fire and has the protagonist's halo, so let me follow his path...? ? I accidentally burped my fart, what should I do?