Obtain the Mythical Beast at the Beginning of Territorial Survival

How can I put it this way? This book has potential, but the character of the protagonist is a bit problematic, and I don't understand why even the family should give resources to women. Currently, too many families are dominated by women, and the author seems to have a misunderstanding of the family. As long as one can become a family, at least there will be no problem in conducting oneself (maybe the author is a woman, so this is the reason for this) I think) Then to be honest, I feel a bit out of place. So far, the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is just a lucky guy who got Xuanwu. I don't find any advantages of the protagonist. The book is not bad, but there are many small problems. I hope the author can try to write it as realistically as possible. It always seems to have the feeling of a female comic book.

The genre is quite interesting, but the protagonist is too innocent. For example, Shigu Yun, who we have only chatted with a few times, has been caring about her inexplicably. This is too embarrassing! You, an orphan, are at the bottom of the society at least. People who have seen human kindness and kindness feel like a noob all of a sudden. It is normal to have sympathy, but if you always behave like a novice, your life these 18 years must have been in vain! The depiction of the lord is also too deliberate. Personally, I feel that if the writing power is not yet able to control the emotions, it would be better to downplay it a little. Moreover, the power of the family is too emphasized. The protagonist should bring a mythical beast a little more. The protagonist's character feels too cowardly. Your character is Tianhu Bureau at the beginning, which is not suitable for this type.

Xuanwu is one of the four spirits of heaven in ancient Chinese mythology, also known as turtle and snake [1]. It originates from the worship of ancient stars and refers to the seven Xuanwu constellations in the north among the four symbols of the twenty-eight constellations divided into southeast, northwest and northwest. The four elephants in traditional Chinese culture refer to the green dragon, white tiger, red bird, and Xuanwu, which represent the four directions of east, west, south, and north respectively. Northern Xuanwu is the barrier in Bagua and water in the Five Elements. It symbolizes Lao Yin among the four images, winter among the four seasons, and it is also the northern land of the sky. [2][3] The theory of prophecy arose in the Han Dynasty, and its symbolic meanings included Netherworld, Rengui, and Zhide. Taoism after the Han Dynasty absorbed it as a protector god, called Zhi Ming Shenjun, and later became one of the Four Saints, the North Pole Zhenwu Emperor (also known as Dangmo Tianzun), ranked fourth, and the first of the water gods. It also represents Zhuanxu, the Black Emperor, one of the Five Emperors. It is also believed that Qinglong, White Tiger, Suzaku and Xuanwu created the world and are the masters of heaven and earth. One of the five beasts recorded in "Huainanzi" is the green dragon, white tiger, red bird, black dragon, and yellow dragon, also known as the five beasts of heaven. Xuanwu Alias Xuanming, Turtle and Snake Stars Northern Xuanwu Seven Constellations Source "Chu Ci" Race Mythical Beast Attributes One of the Four Spirits Xuanwu - the four auspicious beasts in ancient Chinese mythology Xuanwu is a spiritual creature composed of a turtle and a snake. The original meaning of Xuanwu is Xuanming, and the ancient sounds of Wu and Ming are connected. Wu means black; Ming means yin. Four Symbols (1) Xuanwu is a turtle and a snake. "Jingpai": "The bullfighting girl's empty and dangerous room bisque Qisu has the body of a tortoise and a snake, so it is called Xuanwu." "Chu Ci·Yuanyou": "When the day is warm (the day is caught), it is wild and wild, calling Xuanwu Wu and Ben belong to it. "Hong Xingzu added: "Xuanwu means turtle and snake. It is located in the north, so it is called Xuan. It has scales on its body, so it is called Wu." (2) "Xuanwu" Tiangui. "Book of Rites·Qu Li (Part 1)" says: "Xuanwu is a tortoise. Turtles have armor, which can be used to defend against insults." "Zhou Li" Yun Gui: "Each one can distinguish it by its color and its body." Zheng Zhuyun: "It belongs to, and the words are not the same. Its color, the turtle is mysterious, and the so-called Xuanwu is also." (3) Xuanwu is a turtle and a snake. "Zuo Zhuan": "Xuanwu is in the north. The tortoise and the snake are both Xuanwu. Therefore, the snake is the abode of Xuanwu and the star of danger." Legend The four most fearsome monsters in ancient Chinese mythology and whose power is boundless are the green dragon, white tiger, red bird and Xuanwu. Xuanwu, also known as Xuanming, is a combination of turtle and snake. He is the god of water and lives in the North Sea. The tortoise has a long life. Xuanming has become a symbol of immortality. The underworld is also in the north, so he is the god of the north. It is the northern god who represents Zhuanxu and the Northern Qisu. Xuanwu can also consult the underworld and ask for divination. Therefore, Xuanwu is different from the other three spirits. He is called Xuantian God and Zhenwu Emperor. He is the god worshiped by Taoism. This is Xuanwu. Yours can only be regarded as a low-end version of Xuanwu. It can only be regarded as a World of Warcraft and it is a product of the West. Xuanwu uses mana instead of magic power. Don't get confused and easily think that this thing is a Warcraft. Even the weakest Xuanwu can beat an immortal. This Warcraft Xuanwu can only be regarded as having a bit of Xuanwu bloodline. It can only be regarded as a Western Warcraft.

Low-level mythical beasts, not to mention prehistoric ones, high-level fantasy beasts, high-level immortals, even ordinary immortals, young Xuanwu can torture ordinary immortals to death. It is recommended to change Xuanwu into a turtle that contains one billionth of Xuanwu's bloodline. It's slipping away. The more I watch, the more breathless I am. Either stop the invincible flow, or don't start the whole mythical beast. The whole magical beast containing the blood of the mythical beast will evolve bit by bit and be stronger than it is now.

The author should not use the title of Lord's book to attract people. I saw more than 50 pictures. The lord is still alone. No citizens. What kind of lord novel is this?

I remember it, I remember Xuanwu is a turtle and a snake, right? I feel like what you described is more like Bixi, except there is no dragon tail.

To be honest, it is recommended that you have less communication with Japanese people. Since you are writing a novel, you should avoid some surprises. To be honest, any other foreigner would be better than a Japanese.

It feels good, but the protagonist's self-debates don't look natural. To be honest, if you can't write the inner drama well, just express it in other ways. For example, Cuttlefish cannot write about inner dramas. The mysterious Xiao Ke never writes about his inner changes except for inner analysis. He only expresses them through the occasional small things + Xiao Ke's expressions and movements (you can even count the number of words) Of course, this is just a suggestion. If the author wants to overcome difficulties, he should work hard and try to let readers see the changes.

This book has been signed, so you can invest with confidence~

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How should I put it? Although it is obvious that the author is not very good, it is more innovative than other books of the same type, so it is not bad.

Recently, there have been a lot of xxxx: xx people who want to survive. Are they forced to come here by FL's overlord treaty? However, I have to say that this cover of the author is much better than others (lsp)

Why don't you keep the strengthening fluid and make it yourself? Don't you make more money? We also auctioned that drawing

I've read five chapters, and it's pretty good. I've saved it and will read it later. 🙂🙂 However, there are a few poisonous points. The first is that the monster egg in front recognizes its owner. The protagonist also thinks that it can eat people, which is a poisonous point. 2. The protagonist is disabled and thinks that the female player will add him.

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