Sweet Home's Start Time Goes Back One Month

After reading Chapter 70, I finally understood why this novel was not popular. By Chapter 70, the collective monster transformation has not even begun. There's not a single pleasant bit in the middle, and it's all about sweet fan fiction concepts to keep it going. It's just tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

First of all, if you want a sense of immersion, you have to indulge yourself in the end. It's okay to have such people, but if most people have foresight, they will definitely collect supplies and make preparations to survive, and at least exercise. The protagonist just slept through it, took a nap, let nature take its course, and there is no sense of urgency; then, after getting rid of the guns, it is a disadvantage to think of the cold weapons that are not available. Then the inexplicable emotional scene, the protagonist's super speed, of course explained the reason, and I agreed that it was possible after all. The supporting role of a straight man was too deliberate, and it was a bit embarrassing to watch. The rest was OK. After all, if I am willing to subscribe, I will definitely be able to watch it. Of course, we don't know what the author is thinking, so I'll just say it because I don't want to read it and give some suggestions before I leave. The reason I don't want to watch it is that I've watched the Sweet Home movie and TV part a little bit, and I've read all the comics. I understand the development of interpersonal relationships, and I can read and think about it if you expand it. But I don't know or understand the rest of it at all, and some parts are really uncomfortable. I can only say that I don't want or want to use Baidu while reading a book to check the relationship between the characters, the causes and consequences, etc. It's tiring. So getting out of the trap is purely due to my narrow knowledge and my inability to participate. I hope the author can think about this audience. Of course, if you want to say that it is written for friends in this circle, then pretend I didn't say that. Finally, cheers to the author.

I really didn't think there were any big flaws in the first 74 chapters. Although it was a bit long-winded, the foreshadowing was okay. I thought there would be explosive points after 75, and it would be fun to write. But the result is a mess, illogical, inconsistent, forcibly weakened, forcibly reduced to wisdom, holy mother bitch. It would be better for the author to write romance articles instead of this type of article. It is too embarrassing and not suitable for this kind of article.

I decided to raise it first, and I still hope there won't be a single female lead, because there are too many beauties.

The pace of development is too slow. I've looked at dozens of pictures and still haven't seen the end of the world coming. It's too confusing. I actually looked at what company the main character is involved in.

After reading Chapter 52, I just couldn't bear it anymore. Not to mention the slow plot, the protagonist knew that the situation was serious and didn't do any other protective work except buying food and guns... This protagonist is just waiting to die.

When you travel through time, you don't accept the heroine. You accept a minor character, and you travel through time. Isn't it because you want to time travel just to pretend to be a b and add women? Why did you write it wrongly? It turned out to be a good point.

We've all traveled through time. There are so many women, so let's have more heroines. If you feel like you can't handle it, you can just have one heroine per world. There's a lot of menstruation, and there are too many good heroines. I want them all 😭

😏 Next Korean drama, Korean movies all over the world. I can!

Author, it's too ink, please give me some strength

It feels like it can be written like roaming in the world of film and television, rewriting the plot based on complaints.

This is my first time meeting Han Zong, 🐮ah

Can you write "Flower of Evil", "Good Doctor", "Hotel Del Luna", "The Kind Man", "Itaewon", "Surprising Rumors", "Ghost", "The Legend of the Nine-Tailed Fox"?

Don't write in other languages ​​​​in the novel, it will affect reading

There are too few words and it's not enough to read Also, I'm looking for novels like this that travel through Korean film and television dramas

If you can't stand it anymore, just jump to 74

Got the smart doctor yet? Waiting

This subject matter is quite good, but there are very few people writing about it. Come on. Personally, I prefer not to have a harem. There is no problem with one or two, but it would be a bit different to just accept the ones that are women. See what the author wrote

Didn't expect it!

The author may be slow in the early stages of writing this subject for the first time, but it will pick up speed later if he grasps the rhythm well. Come on💪

Next up is the entire TV series Zhutianwen? "The Penthouse", "The Melting Pot", "Young You", "The River of Sadness" and the like

Debut with one heart

Bagua Queen

Author, you can write a supernatural one next time, where ghosts and gods fight in the Hotel Del Luna, lonely and brilliant gods, ghosts, etc. Are blended together. Because they are all ghosts, the background blending will not feel weird, and the group sentiments will be much easier to write. For example, the male protagonist is a high school student who is the neighbor of the ghost bride Ji Eun-joo. The male protagonist is Jang Man-wol's next human manager, so he has Yin-Yang eyes since he was a child, knows a little Taoism, exorcised ghosts to make money before becoming a manager, and got to know the protagonist group of Fighting Ghosts and Na Bong-sun or Do Bong-soon. Because he and the ghost bride Ji Eun-joo are neighbors and friends, it is natural for him to participate in the ghost plot. After going to college, Jang Man-wol came to find him and joined the Hotel Del Luna as the human manager to start the next plot.

Nursing Angel

Due to classified promotion, new readers will definitely come in these days, and all messages will be read, but basically they will not be replied to. Everyone's opinions are nothing more than the two points I mentioned: some Korean transliteration and plot issues. As for the transliteration, I can only say that there are basically no other ones except Ouba, Azahi, Azuma, Axiba, and xi. If there are any, they will definitely be changed. After all, it has been changed twice based on readers' opinions. There are more transliterated words in the first round, and translations have been added for this, such as Kenchana, Annieyo and so on. The second round is to change all the above translations and transliterations into Chinese, except for the four or five commonly used ones above. Of course I will also pay attention to avoid Korean words later. As for the plot issue, this book is not a pure Korean drama fanfic. What is there to write about in the ten-episode plot? The original intention is to write a comprehensive Korean film and television series. You can tell from the fact that the female convenience store clerk's name is Park Shin-sung, but she didn't unfold it and cut it. The only thing I regret now is that I shouldn't call it Sweet Home. I am constrained. Maybe I should start slowly and write according to my own ideas. This book should serve as a path for subsequent Korean-themed books.

You must have done this suddenly. . .

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