The Peerless Swordsman Starting from Zhu Xian

This was the first time I saw Zhang Xiaofan, a time traveler, not taking revenge, but taking the initiative to reconcile with Tianyin Temple. The author is really awesome and dares to write like this.

The front is okay, but the back is a bit too boring.

Doesn't Taoism subjugate demons and save them? Why do you think you have to show off Buddhist Kung Fu in the Qingyun Sect? Co-author Qingyun, the Taoist leader, doesn't have a magic spell for salvation? Only Buddhists in the world can deliver salvation?

"Zhu Xian" is a very exciting and popular romance novel, but it is not qualified as a supernatural novel. In terms of the mentality of the characters, even the characters in martial arts novels like Jin Yong and Gu Long are far inferior. Cultivation of immortals not only cultivates the mind, but hundreds of years are spent on dogs. Even if a pig lives for hundreds of years, it becomes a sperm. It's funny to talk about love, right? Fighting is also for showing off and picking up girls, not for killing and protecting the way at all, and does not consider efficiency at all, so it is okay to travel through time to cultivate immortals and fall in love, and there will be many people who will read it. If you are writing a supernatural novel, choosing Zhu Xian is not suitable!

Don't you mean Sword Immortal? Why has the protagonist never done anything else besides practicing two swords? Even if you are a swordsman learning Buddhist techniques, what is that stick for? Is it a sap? I feel like the title of the book is so inconsistent with the content.

The original work of Zhu Xian is good because everyone is brilliant and generous. Everyone is on the right path, and we should laugh at each other even if we disagree with each other. We don't just quarrel like shrews. It is set that the Qingyun Sect fights with the Demon Cult every three days. It would be better for you. The two leaders want to fight when they meet. At this level, they should have died long ago. How can they fight with the Demon Cult. Lin Jingyu was rude to Tian Buyi when he first came up. Did he have the nerve to mention that he was from a famous family? He had learned all the rules from the dog's belly. There is nothing wrong with what Qi Hao said on the stage, right? Tian Linger was so foul-mouthed and retorted one sentence after another, and she was also an uneducated person. But Qi Hao still liked her, shaking his m? Baguio also grew up through the tragedy and has great abilities. As a result, the author gave a character design of a savage and brainless female character with the most vicious starting point. When she goes out to do things, she becomes savage and unreasonable and conflicts with others at will? The high level of pretentiousness in the original work of Zhu Xian has been reduced to the lowest level by the author. It is boring and abandoned

I found a problem. The treasures found by the protagonist are opportunities shared by everyone. They will be distributed by the master to everyone, and the treasures found by everyone belong to their own opportunities.

To be honest, I really like Qi Hao. There is no need to darken him.

The reason why Zhu Xian is successful is that the characters are well portrayed. If you use it to write about the harem, you must be exchanging dross for essence.

It's better to read the original work when traveling through time and become Zhang Xiaofan

I found that some people writing Zhu Xian fanfiction forced Zhang Xiaofan and Tian Linger to be together in order to bring Lu Xueqi and the protagonist together. Tian Linger and Zhang Xiaofan are not suitable and they will not like Zhang Xiaofan. However, Qi Hao and Tian Linger are very loving and a perfect couple in the original text. There is no need to take it upon themselves to break up others.

When I keep writing, I will copy the original work. If it is a fire stick, you will write the dragon head staff. Good guy, the title of the book is also the sword fairy. I thought you would make it a soul-eating sword. Forget it, it's boring.

After reading Chapter 40, I feel that there are a lot of magic weapons, but they are just called sword immortals without the actual reality of sword immortals. I suggest the author to see how some ancient sword immortals can defeat all magic with one sword. All the bells and whistles are useless. Goodbye.

Poor grades are not without reason. Forced intelligence reduction

I want to cultivate immortality, my magic power is boundless

My three views are not correct. I am afraid that reading too much will affect my three views, which will make my life path more bumpy, so I might as well give up!

The beginning is a little better, but what the heck is it about ten chapters into the novel? Being a nanny for someone else? Forget about building a good relationship with the people inside Dazhu Peak. Waiting for the old nun from Xiaozhu Peak to grovel and beg. It didn't feel good at all. It was really disgusting. (Personal thoughts) I stopped reading after that.

The book Zhu Xian is not suitable for writing about fan fiction. Especially those who have a harem, I can't stand it.

Zhu Tianwen? I wrote hundreds of chapters to write about Zhu Xian. I just wrote about it!

The Zhang Xiaofan who wields the sword is no longer Zhang Xiaofan

I think Tian Buyi has not reached the Taiqing realm, only that leader is in the Taiqing realm.

This Baguio appeared in Chapter 5, and I really didn't stick with it. I tried my best... This is too unruly...

I don't think Zhu Xian fans are very popular anymore. Those who come to see Zhu Xian are here to make up for their regrets. There are not many emotional scenes, and I went to Shushan in a daze. It's normal to jump in.

That double dragon stick has blinded so many magic weapons in vain. The fusion depends on the degree of compatibility. It is not a hodgepodge. The more fusion the better, right?

It turns out to be a female author, no wonder

It's so embarrassing. I can't stand the Tao Te Ching anymore. Still licking the original characters.

Zhu Xian, the tragedy begins with Wan Jianyi, and Wan Jianyi creates the tragedy.

I also hope that all readers will read and collect it!

Why not create a story yourself and write a fanfic instead?

I can't stand it anymore, it's really embarrassing, especially Chapter 7