I Really Don't Have a Girlfriend

I hope everyone will collect the new book and vote for recommendation! ! ! This is critical! ! !

It is not recommended to use the first person. Although the first person is suitable for novices, it looks quite funny. I suggest the author re-read the novel he wrote... I really recommend it. This is my most sincere evaluation. Also, the characters are a bit unclear. Since you are writing a full-length novel, you must have a detailed description of the main character's appearance. You cannot use common features like a girl with a score of 98 and a curvy front and back. There should also be other descriptions, such as what the classroom looks like, what the cake looks like... It can not only reduce the number of words, but also get a specific look and feel. Finally, I hope the author can seriously think about it - if the best friend, the girlfriend and other characters in the book were the author himself, would he/she behave as in the author's book? This is just a superficial personal evaluation. If you are dissatisfied, please delete the post.

Are you ready to sign a contract(*´｀*)

{"NickName":"Seven Days and Eight Nights","UserId":339187349}[fn==47]Character conflict refers to the collision or disagreement of opinions, interests, etc., Especially the ideological and moral struggles caused by irreconcilable desires, purposes, etc.

The first word at the beginning of the introduction is a typo. Author, please make sure the title of the book is wrong!

Does anyone really read my book? ? ?