
Douluo Dalu: The Disciplined Spirit Beast
斗罗之自律的魂兽
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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623Chapters
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14.3kRecs
125kFans
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After reading the introduction, is the title of the protagonist Qingdi? Reminds me of a very poisonous novel. The protagonist is a living being in a fantasy world. When the protagonist was still practicing Qi, the female protagonist climbed onto the bed of a foundation-building warrior in order to become stronger. Then the male protagonist was furious, practiced hard and then killed the man. The heroine was afraid, so she crawled onto the bed of a golden elixir monk, and then the protagonist chased and killed him. The heroine then climbed onto the bed of a person with a higher level of cultivation. Finally, the heroine climbed onto the bed of a powerful emperor. In order to chase and kill the protagonist, he also cultivated to the realm of the emperor. His title is Qingdi.
It's really rare to see someone who doesn't lick the protagonist or abuse the protagonist. The setting of Douluo is quite good. Why do you have to surround the protagonist all the time? It's normal to be involved with the protagonist, but it's boring to hang around him all the time. It's so exciting to develop the soul beast on the big stage!
Before reading: Douluo Dalu fan fiction that changes its skin but not its suit After reading: There is indeed something wrong with my Douluo Dalu love story
I have read a few Douluo fanfics (it seems to be on the homepage of light novels?) Except for this one, the others can't last more than a few chapters, they are not on the same level, those few books are garbage, I can't even stand the book, garbage, bah! This book is really good and worth reading. Except for the concept of love (I am a fan of single or no female protagonists, this book always feels that except for the wife, all the protagonists seem to be better, and there are currently three women) I don't like it, but there are very few emotional scenes in the back, so you can ignore it 🙂🙂
I found that it is very difficult to be an operations officer, hahahaha. The contribution of the book circle is greater than or equal to 500, fixed at 12 per day. If more than ten people comment on me every day, it will be 32. Woohoo.
The works written in Douluo fandoms that I have read are considered to be in the first echelon. The author's imagination is very good. It breaks away from the usual invincible flow of the protagonist awakening his martial soul through time travel. The invincible flow of time traveling into a soul beast goes directly to the God King's unique one. I think the transition of the timeline is smooth. There may still be some bugs in the settings, but after all, it is a fan work, so don't worry too much about the settings that are different from the original text I personally look forward to the plot in the future where the male protagonist will pamper Xiao Wu and follow the protagonist group after he recovers. Come on, come on
The author's writing of these two fan novels is very good. Regardless of the plot connection or the interweaving of the plots of the old protagonists, they are all handled quite appropriately. There is no criticism often made in fan fiction that blindly licks the protagonist, and there is no deliberate targeting. This is the normal state. The old protagonist has lost his golden finger and lacks the personality charm he should have. In fact, readers know very well what he can develop into. This is also the reason why there are so many Douluo fandoms. The protagonist's character flaws, the regrets of the supporting characters, the unreasonable plot, etc. Can be reasonably released here, and this makes him appear excellent.
The author should change the introduction a lot. It's really bad, because on the surface it looks like someone who became Xiao Wu's uncle and then pretended to be cool. I clicked on the introduction several times and then swiped out. If it weren't for various book recommendation groups or recommendations, I probably wouldn't have read it seriously. After reading it, I found out that it was actually a good book. Not only is IQ online, but also interesting and refreshing. So the author should change the introduction a lot. Maybe more people will click in to read it.
The author's writing has gotten better and better recently, and the plot and emotional drama are also well controlled. Keep it up, author! 🙂🙂
The angle is very novel, but there is a question that I think the author should prepare in advance? This is the kind of book that focuses on building power in the middle and late stages. In many books, the protagonist is inevitably stereotyped and reduced to a "tool man", and this situation is rarely seen in the game. Of course, I quite like the story line of Setsuna's beast shifters. If the author planned to create a similar group portrait, I think he would have to put some thought into it.