At Zero Hour in Tokyo, I Become a God

According to my many years of experience, it is best for authors to write stories about man defeating nature and the like, which are in line with our country's ideology, otherwise there will always be someone who is cheap and reports it! It's best to have positive energy

The protagonist is a hypocritical weirdo, and his brain is not very good. After being killed several times by ghosts, he fought back. Later, with the support of the state and the oppression of ghosts, there were conditions for becoming stronger. He doesn't work hard to improve himself, goes to work to make money (without using his own life money, feeling that he is not worthy 🙂), and goes to school to waste time (rebirth), all he wants is to wait for the lottery.

I can't stand it until I reach chapter 28. It's a good thing that two skills are given at the beginning to help the protagonist stand out from danger. Just starting from the twenty-something chapters, the school part suddenly started to play multiple episodes, and the Riddler was also played, without any foreshadowing. From the author's perspective, the author knows the plot, so it seems okay. From the reader's perspective, I just feel that the Riddler is suddenly created, and the protagonist becomes stronger without telling any reason, just acting as the Riddler. All I can say is that this book is very consistent with the results. I suggest removing the invincible from the tag. There are invincible files in the tag, and the introduction and plug-ins are awesome. When it comes to the plot, which set of dangerous moments can get good things? Everyday moments are garbage. Chapter 28 is another transcendental one, another old-fashioned upgrade. It's another fake invincible article's old trick of upgrading. The introduction states that there is no heroine, but in the 28th chapter, there is a witch who likes the protagonist, and two yandere girls. There is no heroine anymore, and you write a lot of scenes of interaction with the supporting actress, and remove the introduction for others to see. Who would think that there is no heroine? I still have to remind you that I have already written an invincible article. Can you write it freely? Plug-in to eat*? There are a lot of pseudo-invincible novels that look like this. The introduction says invincible. As a result, they all have an upgrade stream for pseudo-invincible novels. Do you know what invincibility is? If you can't write an invincible article, then remove the invincible label and make a normal plug-in upgrade flow. The most important thing about an invincible article is to act like a saint in front of others. If you don't write this point well, it will be called a piece of invincible article.

Doesn't the introduction say there is no heroine? What does it mean when the TM girls jump out one by one? And create a Shura field? Do you want to disgust me? Accepted😡

There are too many foreshadowings, and there are people all around who understand, but the main character is blind, and it is very confusing to watch.

I saw that there was no female protagonist, the first twenty chapters were pretty good, and then suddenly three women came in who were all disgusting. Well, I saw you said that these three would be G at the end of the first volume. I was ready to bear it for a while, but when I saw it, wow, the first volume of Good Guys has more than a hundred chapters, okay, I will persist, and it turned out to be 50 chapters. I finished the 30th chapter, and there is no hope at all. How can people watch this? Obviously the setting is pretty good, and the main character is very good when he is alone. If I insist on feeding it💩, forget it, give it up.

Stop writing about classes in school. We have traveled through time and we still have classes. What is the reason for going to school? It's not just money. The protagonist has the skills but still lacks money. I have nothing to say. This is an old joke.

Why do you have to work? You don't need the money? Isn't it better to save a few hours to practice magic than to work? Isn't it pretentious? Is this sick?

After reading Chapter 17, it is tasteless to eat and it would not be a pity to throw it away.

As soon as the witch appeared, the plot began to fall apart. It made a good start, but was not sure of it. The steps were too big and too fast, and instead fell into a cliché.