The Leisurely Life of a Cartoonist

If you reduce the first ten chapters to three, the book will do better. The contents of other people's golden three chapters are written for you by force into more than ten chapters, and there is even more than one chapter about bubble noodles. Who wants to read this kind of content?

A little suggestion, author, is your main line comic? If so, can it advance the main plot? If the author writes about daily life in the name of comics, he can completely abandon comics. Most readers come for comics. I hope the author will sort out the outline and advance the main plot as soon as possible. I wish the author will write better and better

Damn, who is the protagonist? Where is the comic? What is the plot going to say now? Who are these people?

He is an author who likes to become hundreds of people, and I also like it, but the cruel thing is that starting point does not allow it. Afraid. JPG

There is a lot of verbosity in it. After reading about 20 chapters, I have no idea what it is talking about. I randomly give other characters' perspectives and write about the main character and then disappear. Please, if you don't deepen the main character's image in the early stage, when will it be deepened?

Often I don't even see the main character in several chapters, just a lot of water and water.

The protagonist appears in fewer chapters than the supporting characters, and when he does appear, he accounts for more than half of the comic content. If you want to write more protagonists, just say so. The whole plot is fragmented, except for people to skip chapters to read. Some novels just skip to the end. Not only are readers impatient, but the author himself may not even know what is written!

The pace is too slow, the protagonist is not prominent, the plot is too flat and too slow, and the supporting characters are boring but take up a lot of text.

The protagonist has too few scenes, and the jokes are too frequent, which is annoying.

It's too shabby. The protagonist often disappears for several chapters. What's wrong with this?

... I've read forty chapters, Endo forgets it, why did he write so much about the chuunibyou?

I've read more than 30 chapters now, and I'm confused. Who is the protagonist? What's going on with the chuunibyou? I can't figure it out at all, and the word count isn't that bad. My personal suggestion is that it has nothing to do with the main plot. Delete it if necessary. The protagonist's comics should have characteristics, such as not doing his job, procrastinating, and treating depression. It should be remembered. If the original characters are difficult to grasp, you can insert a few needed anime characters in the progress. If you have time, revise the previous chapters, and the results will be better.

It's 23 chapters, and I've only drawn two chapters. The first chapter has just been shown to the editor. There is too much unnecessary space in front of it. It's a running account.

Nowadays, anyone who draws comics is depressing and boring.

I couldn't stand it even after watching it twice. The first time I watched 2 chapters, and the second time I watched 4 chapters. There was still no plot advancement. The first two chapters could be deleted. At the beginning of the third chapter, I thought the introduction of the world background was going to advance the plot. But after reading the fourth chapter, nothing happened.

It's much better after revising the article. The previous plot was not prioritized, and the progress of the comic was very slow. After all, Z really wants to read other things on a daily basis. Most of the people attracted by your book title are not comic readers. The article is wrong. What the hell is that supporting character who is like a winner in life? The airborne form is more like a disgusting person.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~