The World Is Unparalleled and Has Its Enemies

Longtaolou, the author whose name was abandoned humblely asked for a name 😭

I still have an investment quota that I will invest for you soon, come on, ✊✊

Keep up the good work, as long as you have a dream!

Come on, I love the writing style so much, I'm waiting for the update (*'▽'*)

After reading the first ten chapters, the description is very careful, especially the characters' emotions, the shape of the beasts, and the structure of the objects. However, this paragraph is too long, so it can be written in several paragraphs, and sometimes when changing the environment or time, it can be divided by "...", So that the reader looks more comfortable. As for the first few chapters, the world view information described by the author is quite good, but it will be a bit anxious to start describing the battle in the first chapter. When the protagonist "recognizes" new aspects of the world, the pace is too fast and needs to be foreshadowed. For example, the protagonist usually lives a normal life, but one day something unknown appears, and he continues to live without paying much attention, but the next day A person looking for an adapter comes and tells the protagonist what power you have or something (indicating the protagonist's specialness). The protagonist can smile disdainfully or not believe it (just can't follow that person), but before he has taken a few steps, he encounters a Mi beast and attacks him. In the end, the person is possessed by the armor and kills the Mi beast in front of the protagonist. Now the protagonist has to believe it and join in. Of course, this is just an idea I had at the beginning of writing a related genre. If you don't like it, don't criticize~ Another point is the name of the character. You can choose the one that is easy to read (because I subconsciously read it when I read a novel.) For example, Han Li, Su Yu, etc., Are easier for me to read. Well, that's all for time reasons. I'll read it all when I have time. If there are more updates~ Some humble opinions. Looking forward to a return visit

Come on, keep updating

The plot is smooth, the writing is delicate, and the character names are quite interesting. Come on＾0＾~

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